Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and detailed, but try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and using linking words to improve coherence. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences for better effectiveness.

Exemplo: I absolutely adore flowers because of their beautiful colors and sweet fragrance, which always brighten up my days and make me feel calm.

Sugestão: Remember to use correct grammar (e.g., 'one of my friends loves') and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about the occasions.

Exemplo: Yes, one of my friends loves flowers, so we often go to the flower market together to buy beautiful flowers for our friends during special occasions like birthdays and festivals.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the types of trees and flowers. Avoid vague phrases like 'forecast on planting'.

Exemplo: Not really, because in Bangkok, where I live, people mainly plant evergreen trees that have small flowers. I think these trees are better than normal flowers because their leaves stay green longer.

Sugestão: Try to complete your sentences and avoid incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the types of flowers and why you take photos of them.

Exemplo: As I mentioned, I love flowers, so I often take photos of them to keep memories. I have many pictures of different flowers, from small wildflowers to large garden blooms.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using plural forms correctly ('loved ones') and adding linking words for better flow. Also, specify some special occasions for clarity.

Exemplo: Thai people usually give flower garlands to their loved ones on special occasions such as weddings and religious ceremonies. These garlands are mostly made of jasmine, marigold, roses, and other local flowers.

× Yes, one of my friend also love flowers, so we usually go to the flower market together to shop some cute flowers for our friends in the groups and for other special occasion.

✓ Yes, one of my friends also loves flowers, so we usually go to the flower market together to shop for some cute flowers for our friends in the group and for other special occasions.

The phrase 'one of my friend' should be 'one of my friends' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'friend' should be plural to match this structure. 'Love' should be 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'one'. 'Shop some' should be 'shop for some' because 'shop for' is the correct collocation. 'Friends in the groups' should be 'friends in the group' to be singular and consistent. 'Special occasion' should be plural 'special occasions' to match the context of multiple events.

× Yes, one of my friend also love flowers, so we usually go to the flower market together to shop some cute flowers for our friends in the groups and for other special occasion.

✓ Yes, one of my friends also loves flowers, so we usually go to the flower market together to shop for some cute flowers for our friends in the group and for other special occasions.

The verb 'shop' is usually followed by the preposition 'for' when indicating the object of shopping. Therefore, 'shop some cute flowers' should be 'shop for some cute flowers'.

× Not really because Bangkok, which is the city I'm living in, mainly forecast on planting Evergreen tree with a very small flowers which I think is much more better than normal flowers because it stays longer.

✓ Not really because Bangkok, which is the city I'm living in, mainly focuses on planting evergreen trees with very small flowers which I think are much better than normal flowers because they stay longer.

'Forecast on' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'focuses on'. 'Evergreen tree' should be plural 'evergreen trees' to match the context. 'A very small flowers' is incorrect; 'flowers' is plural so 'a' should be removed and 'very small' remains. 'Is much more better' is incorrect; 'much better' is sufficient. 'It stays longer' should be 'they stay longer' to agree with plural 'flowers'.

× Not really because Bangkok, which is the city I'm living in, mainly forecast on planting Evergreen tree with a very small flowers which I think is much more better than normal flowers because it stays longer.

✓ Not really because Bangkok, which is the city I'm living in, mainly focuses on planting evergreen trees with very small flowers which I think are much better than normal flowers because they stay longer.

The subject 'Bangkok' is singular, so the verb should be 'focuses' not 'forecast'. Also, 'it stays longer' should be 'they stay longer' to agree with plural 'flowers'.

× Not really because Bangkok, which is the city I'm living in, mainly forecast on planting Evergreen tree with a very small flowers which I think is much more better than normal flowers because it stays longer.

✓ Not really because Bangkok, which is the city I'm living in, mainly focuses on planting evergreen trees with very small flowers which I think are much better than normal flowers because they stay longer.

The verb 'focus' is followed by the preposition 'on', so 'forecast on' is incorrect and should be 'focuses on'.

× As mentioned before, I like flowers so much that most of the time I see them, I keep it as a memory in my phone.

✓ As mentioned before, I like flowers so much that most of the time I see them, I keep them as a memory in my phone.

'Them' is the correct pronoun to refer to plural 'flowers'. Using 'it' is incorrect here because 'flowers' is plural.

× As mentioned before, I like flowers so much that most of the time I see them, I keep it as a memory in my phone. There are a wide range of photos of flowers I've taken, from cute little wildflowers to big.

✓ As mentioned before, I like flowers so much that most of the time I see them, I keep them as a memory in my phone. There is a wide range of photos of flowers I've taken, from cute little wildflowers to big ones.

'There are a wide range' is incorrect because 'range' is singular; it should be 'There is a wide range'. Also, 'to big' is incomplete; it should be 'to big ones' to refer to big flowers.

× Thai people usually give flower garlands to their loved one in the special occasion and those garlands are mostly made of Jasmine, Marigold or roses or many other local flowers as well.

✓ Thai people usually give flower garlands to their loved ones on special occasions and those garlands are mostly made of jasmine, marigold, roses, or many other local flowers as well.

'Loved one' should be plural 'loved ones' to match the general statement. 'In the special occasion' should be 'on special occasions' because 'on' is the correct preposition for occasions and plural form is appropriate. Also, flower names should not be capitalized unless at the start of a sentence.