Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you prefer flowers in gardens, and finally mention your favourite flower with a brief description.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially when they are growing in gardens because they look more vibrant and natural. I don't like cut flowers as much since they tend to lose their colour quickly. My favourite flower is a small purple one that grows in my garden.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. Also, be specific about your mother's love for flowers and describe the atmosphere they create.

Exemplo: I can't think of anyone around me who loves flowers as much as my mother does. She used to fill our house with flowers placed on tables in every room, and their fragrance always made the house feel fresh and welcoming.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about the flowers and their impact on the environment.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, my high school campus is well-maintained with various flowers, including a beautiful Rose Garden. This garden provides a peaceful place for students to walk and relax.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words. Also, explain why you like to photograph flowers and what they mean to you.

Exemplo: I enjoy taking photos of flowers whenever I can. For instance, when I receive a bouquet, I like to take several pictures and share them on social media because flowers symbolize elegance and romance, which always make me happy.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to make it more natural. Also, provide a bit more detail about the occasions when flowers are exchanged.

Exemplo: Yes, it is very common for people in my country to send flowers to each other, especially couples. For example, they often exchange bouquets on Valentine's Day and during anniversaries, which I think is very romantic.

× I do love flowers, but when only they're in gardens I don't like cut flowers.

✓ I do love flowers, but only when they're in gardens; I don't like cut flowers.

The phrase 'when only they're in gardens' is incorrectly ordered. The adverb 'only' should precede 'when' or be placed correctly to modify the clause. Correct placement improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think it's a shame it's much prettier when they're growing.

✓ I think it's a shame; it's much prettier when they're growing.

The original sentence is a run-on with two independent clauses joined incorrectly. Adding a semicolon or separating into two sentences corrects the structure and clarifies meaning.

× It can keep it vibrant color and my favorite flower is a tiny purple one.

✓ They can keep their vibrant colour, and my favourite flower is a tiny purple one.

The pronouns 'it' and 'it' are incorrectly used to refer to plural 'flowers'. 'They' and 'their' should be used for plural nouns. Also, 'colour' is the British English spelling.

× Honestly I don't really can think of someone really really love flowers around me,

✓ Honestly, I really can't think of anyone who really loves flowers around me,

The modal verb 'can' is incorrectly combined with 'don't'. The correct form is 'can't'. Also, 'someone really really love' should be 'anyone who really loves' to match subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing.

× but my mother used to like them because my house used to full of flowers on the table in the rooms and the fragrance is always filled with house and.

✓ but my mother used to like them because my house used to be full of flowers on the tables in the rooms, and the fragrance always filled the house.

The phrase 'used to full' is missing the verb 'be'. Also, 'table' should be plural 'tables' to match 'rooms'. The phrase 'fragrance is always filled with house and' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'fragrance always filled the house'.

× And the flower is a big part of that.

✓ And the flowers are a big part of that.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with the context of multiple flowers, and the verb should be 'are' to match the plural subject.

× It even have a Rose Garden which can make students walk around and relax.

✓ It even has a Rose Garden which allows students to walk around and relax.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'can make students walk around and relax' is better expressed as 'allows students to walk around and relax' for naturalness.

× If I could, I would love to.

✓ If I could, I would love to.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× For example, when someone give me a bouquet, I'd love to take several pictures and share them on social media because I always sing.

✓ For example, when someone gives me a bouquet, I'd love to take several pictures and share them on social media because I always smile.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'someone'. Also, 'I always sing' is likely a mistake; 'I always smile' fits the context better.

× The bouquets means elegant, means romantic, and can bring me happiness.

✓ Bouquets mean elegance, mean romance, and can bring me happiness.

'Bouquets' is plural, so the verb should be 'mean' not 'means'. Also, 'elegant' and 'romantic' are adjectives; here, nouns 'elegance' and 'romance' are more appropriate as objects of 'mean'.

× Honestly, yes, it's very common to see the couples set bouquets to each other, especially in.

✓ Honestly, yes, it's very common to see couples give bouquets to each other, especially on Valentine's Day or some anniversaries, and I think that's romantic.

'Set bouquets to each other' is incorrect; 'give bouquets to each other' is correct. Also, 'especially in' is incomplete; it should be 'especially on' followed by the occasion.