Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use more varied vocabulary. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to about 3-4 sentences. For example, you can say why you love flowers and mention a specific type or occasion.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because their fragrance is very refreshing. For instance, I especially enjoy jasmine flowers as they remind me of my childhood.

Sugestão: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be specific about what your mother does with flowers.

Exemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She spends most of her day in the garden planting and taking care of various flowers.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct vocabulary and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers and plants around my home. For example, we have snake plants and Ashoka trees, which my family enjoys very much.

Sugestão: Make your answer more fluent by combining short sentences and using linking words. Also, use correct prepositions and article usage.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of my plants at home. I usually share these pictures on Instagram and Snapchat with my friends and relatives.

Sugestão: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about cultural practices. Avoid repeating the same phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, many young people in my country send flowers to their boyfriends, girlfriends, and friends. It is considered a sweet and charming gesture that makes the recipient happy.

× Yes, I really love to see the flowers because the fragrance of the flower is very nice and I love to see them.

✓ Yes, I really love seeing the flowers because the fragrance of the flowers is very nice and I love to see them.

The verb 'love' is commonly followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. So, 'love to see' should be 'love seeing'. Also, 'the flower' should be plural 'the flowers' to match the context.

× Yes, I really love to see the flowers because the fragrance of the flower is very nice and I love to see them.

✓ Yes, I really love seeing the flowers because the fragrance of the flowers is very nice and I love to see them.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to multiple flowers, matching the plural subject 'the flowers'.

× There yes there is my mother who love to the sea flowers because she is spend the whole of the day in the flower.

✓ Yes, there is my mother who loves to see flowers because she spends the whole day with the flowers.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'There yes there is' is redundant; 'love' should be 'loves' for third person singular; 'to the sea flowers' should be 'to see flowers'; 'she is spend' should be 'she spends'; 'in the flower' should be 'with the flowers'. The corrected sentence fixes these errors.

× There yes there is my mother who love to the sea flowers because she is spend the whole of the day in the flower.

✓ Yes, there is my mother who loves to see flowers because she spends the whole day with the flowers.

For third person singular subjects like 'my mother', verbs should have an 's' at the end: 'love' becomes 'loves' and 'spend' becomes 'spends'.

× There yes there is my mother who love to the sea flowers because she is spend the whole of the day in the flower.

✓ Yes, there is my mother who loves to see flowers because she spends the whole day with the flowers.

The preposition 'to the sea flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'to see flowers'. Also, 'in the flower' is incorrect; 'with the flowers' is appropriate to indicate spending time among flowers.

× She plants more of the more flowers in the day.

✓ She plants more and more flowers every day.

The phrase 'more of the more flowers' is incorrect and redundant. The correct expression is 'more and more flowers'. Also, 'in the day' should be 'every day' to indicate frequency.

× Yes, obviously at my home there is so many greenery, so many plants are there like snake plants and Ashoka trees over there and my whole family love to the see the flowers and plants, new new PLA, new new flowers and things.

✓ Yes, obviously at my home there is so much greenery, and many plants like snake plants and Ashoka trees. My whole family loves to see the flowers and plants, new plants, new flowers, and such.

'There is so many greenery' is incorrect; 'greenery' is uncountable and should be 'so much greenery'. 'So many plants are there' is awkward; better to say 'many plants like...'. 'My whole family love' should be 'loves' for third person singular collective noun. 'Love to the see' should be 'loves to see'. 'New new PLA' is unclear; assumed to mean 'new plants'.

× my whole family love to the see the flowers and plants

✓ my whole family loves to see the flowers and plants

The subject 'my whole family' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' instead of 'love'.

× Yes, I use Snapchat. My first snap of the day. I take photo of my plants at my home and share to the Instagram to my friends and my relatives.

✓ Yes, I use Snapchat. My first snap of the day is taking photos of my plants at home and sharing them on Instagram with my friends and relatives.

The sentence 'My first snap of the day.' is incomplete and needs a verb. Also, 'take photo' should be 'taking photos' to match the gerund form. 'Share to the Instagram' should be 'sharing them on Instagram'.

× I take photo of my plants at my home and share to the Instagram to my friends and my relatives.

✓ I take photos of my plants at home and share them on Instagram with my friends and relatives.

The preposition 'to the Instagram' is incorrect; it should be 'on Instagram'. Also, 'share to my friends' should be 'share with my friends'.

× I take photo of my plants at my home and share to the Instagram to my friends and my relatives.

✓ I take photos of my plants at home and share them on Instagram with my friends and relatives.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' because it refers to multiple pictures.

× Yes, in young generation of my age of group of people are sending the flowers to their boyfriends and girlfriends and friends because he is very sweet and charming thing to send the flower someone and he is also see the flowers and he is also happy to see the flowers.

✓ Yes, the young generation of my age group are sending flowers to their boyfriends, girlfriends, and friends because it is a very sweet and charming thing to send flowers to someone, and they also like to see the flowers and are happy to see them.

'In young generation' should be 'the young generation'. 'Age of group of people' should be 'age group'. 'The flowers' should be 'flowers' without 'the' in this context. Pronouns 'he' should be 'they' to agree with plural subjects. 'Send the flower someone' should be 'send flowers to someone'.

× because he is very sweet and charming thing to send the flower someone and he is also see the flowers and he is also happy to see the flowers.

✓ because it is a very sweet and charming thing to send flowers to someone, and they also like to see the flowers and are happy to see them.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrectly used for plural subjects; 'they' or 'people' is appropriate. Also, 'is see' is incorrect; should be 'like to see' or 'enjoy seeing'.