Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and expresses feelings well, but try to avoid minor grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'love' and 'flowers' multiple times, you can use synonyms or pronouns. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement, e.g., 'Flowers just make me feel' instead of 'makes'.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy flowers, especially when they come from my loved ones like my family or boyfriend. They make me feel appreciated and cherished. What I admire most about flowers is their beauty and fragrance, which symbolize elegance and affection.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical mistakes and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, and avoid repeating words like 'really' multiple times. Also, pay attention to subject-verb agreement, e.g., 'she takes care' instead of 'she take care'.

Exemplo: My mom is another flower lover I know. She becomes very happy whenever she receives flowers, especially from my dad. Moreover, she takes great care of them and often talks about the flowers throughout the day.

Sugestão: Your answer provides good content but could be more fluent and concise. Avoid repeating 'country' and 'different' unnecessarily. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, correct phrases like 'sold at a high price' instead of 'sold in a high price'.

Exemplo: Unfortunately, no. I live in Qatar, which is a very dry country surrounded by deserts. Therefore, most flowers are imported from abroad and sold at high prices due to shipping costs.

Sugestão: Your answer is detailed and coherent, but try to avoid redundancy such as 'mainly due to the reason'. Use simpler phrases like 'because'. Also, try to combine sentences for better flow using linking words like 'so' or 'therefore'.

Exemplo: I rarely take photos of flowers because they are scarce in my country due to the dry climate. Since most flowers are imported and expensive, I usually only photograph them when I receive them as gifts.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid awkward phrases like 'sending each other's flowers'. Use linking words to improve coherence. Also, use plural forms for occasions, e.g., 'proposals' or 'weddings'.

Exemplo: Yes, I have noticed that in Qatar, people often give flowers as gifts on special occasions such as proposals, weddings, welcoming a baby, and birthdays.

× Flowers just makes me feel appreciated and loved.

✓ Flowers just make me feel appreciated and loved.

The subject 'Flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes' to agree in number.

× And what I love most about flowers is that they're really beautiful as well as fragrant.

✓ And what I love most about flowers is that they're really beautiful as well as fragrant.

This sentence is correct; no subject-verb agreement error here.

× It's like they are symbolizing beauty.

✓ It's like they symbolize beauty.

The verb 'symbolize' is preferred in simple present tense here to express a general truth rather than the continuous form 'are symbolizing'.

× Another flower lover that I know is my mom.

✓ Another flower lover that I know is my mom.

This sentence is correct; no subject-verb agreement error here.

× I really see her really happy whenever she receives flowers and the way she take care of the flowers after it is given to her shows that she really loves what she received.

✓ I really see her really happy whenever she receives flowers and the way she takes care of the flowers after they are given to her shows that she really loves what she received.

The verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. Also, 'it is given' should be 'they are given' because 'flowers' is plural.

× Especially when it is from my dad.

✓ Especially when it is from my dad.

This sentence is correct; no subject-verb agreement error here.

× She really loves it and talks about it all day and night.

✓ She really loves it and talks about it all day and night.

This sentence is correct; no subject-verb agreement error here.

× Unfortunately no, because currently I'm living here in Qatar.

✓ Unfortunately no, because currently I'm living here in Qatar.

This sentence is correct; no subject-verb agreement error here.

× Qatar is a really dry country.

✓ Qatar is a really dry country.

This sentence is correct; no subject-verb agreement error here.

× It is a country surrounded by deserts and most different flowers here are exported from different countries and often sold in a high price due to its way of shipment.

✓ It is a country surrounded by deserts and most different flowers here are exported from different countries and often sold at a high price due to the way they are shipped.

The phrase 'sold in a high price' should be 'sold at a high price'. Also, 'due to its way of shipment' is awkward; better to say 'due to the way they are shipped'.

× I rarely take photos of flowers in my daily life because I don't see them very often.

✓ I rarely take photos of flowers in my daily life because I don't see them very often.

This sentence is correct; no modal verb usage error here.

× This is mainly due to the reason that I live in a country that has a very dry environment and most of the flowers have to be imported, which makes them quite expensive.

✓ This is mainly because I live in a country that has a very dry environment and most of the flowers have to be imported, which makes them quite expensive.

The phrase 'due to the reason that' is redundant; 'mainly because' is more natural and correct.

× So the only time that I get to take photos of flowers is when I receive them as a gift.

✓ So the only time that I get to take photos of flowers is when I receive them as a gift.

This sentence is correct; no subject-verb agreement error here.

× Yes, actually, it is one of the things that I observed here in Qatar since I am an immigrant and I often see Arabs sending each other's flowers as a gift in occasions such as proposal, marriage, welcoming a baby and birthdays.

✓ Yes, actually, it is one of the things that I have observed here in Qatar since I am an immigrant and I often see Arabs sending each other flowers as gifts on occasions such as proposals, marriages, welcoming a baby, and birthdays.

The verb 'observed' should be present perfect 'have observed' to indicate experience up to now. 'Each other's flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'each other flowers' or better 'sending flowers to each other'. Also, 'as a gift' should be plural 'as gifts' because multiple occasions are mentioned. The nouns 'proposal' and 'marriage' should be plural to match the list.