Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免冗余，并注意语法和单复数形式。

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they always make me feel cheerful. I especially like white and yellow flowers, as I find them very beautiful and calming.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，句子较长且缺乏连贯性。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和单复数形式。

Exemplo: My mom loves flowers the most. Whenever she sees a flower she hasn't seen before, she takes a photo and searches online to find out its name and origin.

Sugestão: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意冠词和复数形式的使用，句子结构更简洁。

Exemplo: I live in an apartment, so there isn't much space to grow plants or flowers. However, I buy fresh flowers every week to decorate my room, which makes me feel better.

Sugestão: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句表达观点，注意时态一致性和句子连贯性。

Exemplo: Sometimes, when I see beautiful flowers that attract me, I take photos of them. But often, I just enjoy looking at them without taking pictures.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议完整回答问题，使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复和口语填充词。

Exemplo: In recent years, people in my country send flowers more often than before. They usually give flowers on special occasions like Valentine's Day and the Chinese Spring Festival to express their feelings.

× Definitely the beautiful flower always make me feel so cheerful and I always thought the flower is the most one of the most beautiful thing in the world and especially loveless flowers in white and yellow color and I.

✓ Definitely, beautiful flowers always make me feel so cheerful and I always thought flowers are one of the most beautiful things in the world, especially loveless flowers in white and yellow color.

这里“flower”应使用复数形式“flowers”，因为表达的是一般的花的概念，且后文提到“one of the most beautiful things”，需要复数形式。单复数不一致导致语法错误。

× Definitely the beautiful flower always make me feel so cheerful and I always thought the flower is the most one of the most beautiful thing in the world and especially loveless flowers in white and yellow color and I.

✓ Definitely, beautiful flowers always make me feel so cheerful and I always thought flowers are one of the most beautiful things in the world, especially loveless flowers in white and yellow color.

主语是复数“flowers”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”，而不是单数“make”。

× My mom, she is the one I know who loved the flower most and when she saw some flower that she never met before and she definitely took a photo graph and tried to Google it find out was the flowers name and where it come from.

✓ My mom, she is the one I know who loved flowers most and when she saw some flowers that she had never seen before, she definitely took a photograph and tried to Google to find out the flowers' names and where they came from.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”，因为指多个花。动词“met”应改为“seen”，因为“see”用于观察，且时态应为过去完成时“had never seen”。“come”应改为过去式“came”。

× My mom, she is the one I know who loved the flower most and when she saw some flower that she never met before and she definitely took a photo graph and tried to Google it find out was the flowers name and where it come from.

✓ My mom, she is the one I know who loved flowers most and when she saw some flowers that she had never seen before, she definitely took a photograph and tried to Google to find out the flowers' names and where they came from.

“never met”应改为过去完成时“had never seen”，表示在过去某时之前未见过。动词“come”应为过去式“came”，与过去时态保持一致。

× Currently I live in an apartment so they're not too much space to grow plants and it won't have any flowers, but I try to buy some fresh flower every week to decorate my room and I thought it would be better for me.

✓ Currently I live in an apartment so there isn't too much space to grow plants and it won't have any flowers, but I try to buy some fresh flowers every week to decorate my room and I thought it would be better for me.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”，因为表示每周买一些花。

× Currently I live in an apartment so they're not too much space to grow plants and it won't have any flowers, but I try to buy some fresh flower every week to decorate my room and I thought it would be better for me.

✓ Currently I live in an apartment so there isn't too much space to grow plants and it won't have any flowers, but I try to buy some fresh flowers every week to decorate my room and I thought it would be better for me.

“they're”是“they are”的缩写，不适用于表示“there is/are”的句型，应改为“there isn't”表示“没有太多空间”。

× Sometimes when I thought the beautiful flowers that really attracted me, I always take the photos, but sometimes just normal and I can see it. Very often I won't take photo for them.

✓ Sometimes when I see beautiful flowers that really attract me, I always take photos, but sometimes just normal and I can see them. Very often I won't take photos of them.

“thought”应改为“see”，因为描述的是看到花的情况。动词“attracted”应改为现在时“attract”，与“see”保持时态一致。

× Sometimes when I thought the beautiful flowers that really attracted me, I always take the photos, but sometimes just normal and I can see it. Very often I won't take photo for them.

✓ Sometimes when I see beautiful flowers that really attract me, I always take photos, but sometimes just normal and I can see them. Very often I won't take photos of them.

“it”指代复数“flowers”不正确，应使用复数代词“them”。

× Sometimes when I thought the beautiful flowers that really attracted me, I always take the photos, but sometimes just normal and I can see it. Very often I won't take photo for them.

✓ Sometimes when I see beautiful flowers that really attract me, I always take photos, but sometimes just normal and I can see them. Very often I won't take photos of them.

“photo”应为复数“photos”，因为表示多张照片。

× In recent year, I think sending flower is more often than than before, and I always thought some people sending flowers in the special days like Valentine days and uh, uh, the Chinese Spring Festival to express the.

✓ In recent years, I think sending flowers is more common than before, and I always thought some people send flowers on special days like Valentine's Day and the Chinese Spring Festival to express their feelings.

“year”应为复数“years”，表示近几年。名词“flower”应为复数“flowers”。“Valentine days”应为单数所有格“Valentine's Day”。