Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。文を簡潔にし、春と花の関係を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and make me feel happy. I especially enjoy them in spring when many flowers bloom.

Sugestão: 語彙の選択が不適切で、文法も改善が必要です。'florist'は花屋の意味なので、'flowers'に直し、理由を明確に述べましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I know many women who love flowers more than men. I think this is because women are generally more attracted to beauty.

Sugestão: 表現が不自然で意味が分かりにくいです。'roadways sprout'は誤りで、花が咲くことを正しく表現しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers along the roads where I commute, especially in spring, and seeing them makes me happy.

Sugestão: 文が長くて不自然です。簡潔にし、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of beautiful flowers because I want to remember their beauty.

Sugestão: 文法と語彙の誤りが多いです。'followers'は誤りで'flowers'に直し、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。

Exemplo: It depends on the person, but many people send flowers to friends or family on special occasions like birthdays or Mother's Day to show gratitude.

× Yes, I love flowers because the flowers are beautiful and that makes me feel happy and flowers specialize spring and I also the spring when the season. Change it to.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and make me feel happy. Flowers bloom in spring, and I also like the spring season.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear structure and missing words, making it difficult to understand. Breaking it into clear, complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, according to my experience, the women tend to prefer florist compared to the men and in my opinion this is because women are attracted by the beauties rather than men.

✓ Yes, according to my experience, women tend to prefer florists compared to men, and in my opinion, this is because women are more attracted to beauty than men.

The use of 'the women' and 'the men' is incorrect here; general statements about groups do not require 'the'. Also, 'florist' should be plural 'florists' to match the context. 'Attracted by the beauties' is awkward; 'attracted to beauty' is the correct expression.

× Yes, in spring several roadways sprout in the road where I commute, and I see it and feel happy.

✓ Yes, in spring, several flowers sprout along the road where I commute, and I see them and feel happy.

'Roadways sprout in the road' is incorrect; flowers sprout along or beside the road. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to multiple flowers.

× Yes, when I happen to meet the beautiful flowers, I often take a photo of it because I really want to like memorize the beauty at the moment when I feel this is beautiful.

✓ Yes, when I happen to see beautiful flowers, I often take a photo of them because I really want to memorize their beauty at the moment I find them beautiful.

'Meet' is not appropriate for flowers; 'see' is better. 'Photo of it' should be 'photo of them' because flowers are plural. The phrase 'want to like memorize' is incorrect; 'want to memorize' is correct.

× It different from person to person but it seems that some people often send followers to their friends or their family in on the special occasions such as their birthday or mother days and this is a sign to express the grat gratitude.

✓ It is different from person to person, but it seems that some people often send flowers to their friends or family on special occasions such as birthdays or Mother's Day, and this is a sign to express great gratitude.

'It different' lacks the verb 'is'. 'Followers' is incorrect; the correct word is 'flowers'. 'In on the special occasions' should be 'on special occasions'. 'Mother days' should be 'Mother's Day'. 'Grat gratitude' is a typo for 'great gratitude'.