Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 중복되고 문법적으로 부자연스러운 부분이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 중복된 표현을 피하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they have a pleasant smell and vibrant colors, which make me feel peaceful.

Sugestão: 주어와 동사의 일치 오류가 있습니다. 또한, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Absolutely. My mom loves flowers because she is good at planting and enjoys growing them.

Sugestão: 문장 구조가 다소 어색하고, 시제와 복수형 사용에 주의가 필요합니다. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어보세요.

Exemplo: Yes, near my house there are many mountains, and in spring, many people visit because the flower gardens are beautiful.

Sugestão: 단어 선택과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'puddles'는 문맥에 맞지 않으며, 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Sometimes I take photos of flowers, but recently I have been busy preparing for the IELTS exam.

Sugestão: 의미 전달이 명확하지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'less' 대신 적절한 단어를 사용하고, 문장을 명확하게 구성하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, when someone opens a new store, people often send flowers and small plants as a symbol of good luck.

× Yes, I like flowers because flowers make flowers make me happy they have. Good smell and very colorful so it makes me peaceful.

✓ Yes, I like flowers because they make me happy. They have a good smell and are very colorful, so they make me feel peaceful.

The original sentence has repetition and incorrect sentence structure, making it confusing. The phrase 'flowers make flowers make me happy they have' is redundant and unclear. The correction separates ideas into clear sentences and uses appropriate conjunctions and verb forms for clarity.

× My mom really loves flowers because she is good at planting and she like to grow some flowers.

✓ My mom really loves flowers because she is good at planting and she likes to grow some flowers.

The verb 'like' should be in the third person singular form 'likes' to agree with the subject 'she'. This is a common subject-verb agreement error in the present tense.

× Yes umm, near my house there are lots of mountains and in spring everyone visit here because flower garden is beautiful.

✓ Yes, umm, near my house there are lots of mountains, and in spring everyone visits here because the flower garden is beautiful.

The verb 'visit' should be 'visits' to agree with the singular subject 'everyone'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'flower garden' to specify it. Commas are added for clarity.

× Yeah, sometime. Umm, honestly, I like take puddles, but nowadays I'm busy for the IELTS exam so I think I sometimes take photos of flowers. Not many times.

✓ Yeah, sometimes. Umm, honestly, I like taking puddles, but nowadays I'm busy preparing for the IELTS exam, so I think I sometimes take photos of flowers, but not many times.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'taking'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Busy for' should be 'busy preparing for' to correctly express the activity. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Hmm yes if someone opened new store. People give flowers and little trees because it means less, so lot of people send flowers to others.

✓ Hmm yes, if someone opens a new store, people give flowers and small trees because it means luck, so a lot of people send flowers to others.

'Opened' should be 'opens' to match the present tense conditional. 'New store' needs the article 'a'. 'Little trees' is better expressed as 'small trees'. 'Means less' is likely a typo for 'means luck'. 'Lot of people' should be 'a lot of people'. These corrections improve grammar and clarity.