Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors such as "by" which seems misplaced. Try to directly state your preference and add a brief reason to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses because they symbolize love and beauty.

Sugestão: There are grammatical errors and unclear pronoun references. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, my father loves flowers because he thinks they are beautiful and they enhance the appearance of our home when we grow them.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using plural forms consistently and adding linking words to make it more natural. Also, avoid capitalizing common flower names unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, such as roses, marigolds, and lilies.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take pictures of flowers and share them with my friends through social media.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear pronouns. Use plural forms and correct pronouns. Also, avoid filler words like "uh" and provide more specific details.

Exemplo: Yes, in my country, many people give flowers as gifts on weddings and birthday parties.

× There are many flowers by but my favorite flower is a rose.

✓ There are many flowers, but my favorite flower is a rose.

The phrase 'by' is incorrectly used here; it should be removed to correct the sentence structure. The sentence requires a conjunction 'but' to connect the two clauses properly.

× my father love flowers.

✓ my father loves flowers.

The subject 'my father' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'loves' to agree with the subject.

× They always think that flowers look very beautiful and also enhance the beauty of the house when we grow our flowers.

✓ He always thinks that flowers look very beautiful and also enhance the beauty of the house when we grow our flowers.

The pronoun 'They' is incorrect because it refers to multiple people, but the subject is 'my father' (singular). It should be replaced with 'He' and the verb 'think' changed to 'thinks' to match the singular subject.

× like a rose, Marigold, Lily.

✓ like roses, marigolds, and lilies.

When listing multiple types of flowers, plural forms should be used without the article 'a'. Also, the list should include 'and' before the last item for proper enumeration.

× most of time I click a pictures I sent a snap to my friends of the flowers.

✓ Most of the time, I click pictures and send snaps of the flowers to my friends.

The phrase 'most of time' should be 'most of the time'. 'A pictures' is incorrect because 'pictures' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity and correct verb usage.

× in my country many people uh, give a flower as a gift on her wedding and a birthday party.

✓ In my country, many people give flowers as gifts on weddings and birthday parties.

The article 'a' before 'flower' is incorrect when referring to many people giving flowers in general. Also, 'her wedding' is too specific; 'weddings' is more general. 'A birthday party' should be pluralized to 'birthday parties' to match the general statement.