Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and relevant, but you can improve by making it more concise and avoiding redundancy. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they add beauty and color to any environment, instantly lifting my mood. For instance, having fresh flowers at home creates a pleasant and relaxing atmosphere due to their fragrance.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and correcting grammar mistakes. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a close friend who loves flowers. She enjoys gardening and often spends her weekends planting and caring for various flowers because she finds it relaxing and rewarding. For example, she recently grew a beautiful rose garden that brightened up her entire backyard.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct plural forms and tenses. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, there are quite a few flowers where I live, especially in public parks and residential gardens. During spring, colorful tulips and roses bloom, which really brighten up the neighbourhood. I enjoy seeing these flowers because they create a pleasant and refreshing atmosphere in the area.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit confusing and contradictory. You say you take photos but then say you prefer not to. Clarify your point and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I don't often take photos of flowers because I prefer to admire their beauty and feel connected to nature. For example, when I see vibrant flowers in my garden or on my way to work, I cherish those peaceful moments in my mind rather than capturing them with a camera, which helps me appreciate their serenity and colours more deeply.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains a confusing phrase 'low gratitude'. Use more appropriate vocabulary and avoid minor errors. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries. Flowers are considered a thoughtful and beautiful way to express emotions like gratitude and sympathy. For example, it is common to send roses to loved ones on Valentine's Day to show affection.

× she recently grew a beautiful Rose Garden that brighten up the her entire backyard.

✓ she recently grew a beautiful Rose Garden that brightens up her entire backyard.

The verb 'brighten' should be in the third person singular form 'brightens' to agree with the singular subject 'Rose Garden'. Also, the article 'the' before 'her entire backyard' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Yes, there are quite few flowers where I live, especially in public park parks and residential gardens.

✓ Yes, there are quite a few flowers where I live, especially in public parks and residential gardens.

The phrase 'quite few' is incorrect; it should be 'quite a few' to indicate a considerable number. Also, 'public park parks' is a repetition; it should be 'public parks'.

× I enjoy seeing these flowers because they had a pleasant and refreshing atmosphere to the area.

✓ I enjoy seeing these flowers because they have a pleasant and refreshing atmosphere in the area.

The verb 'had' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a current state, so 'have' (present tense) is correct. Also, the preposition 'to' should be 'in' to correctly describe the atmosphere in the area.

× Flowers are seen as a thoughtful and beautiful gesture to express emotions like low gratitude and sympathy.

✓ Flowers are seen as a thoughtful and beautiful gesture to express emotions like love, gratitude, and sympathy.

The word 'low' is incorrect here; it seems to be a typo for 'love'. Also, 'love' is a common emotion expressed with flowers, so it should be included.