Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some errors and unclear phrases. Instead of 'I have different kinds of love in my backyard,' you likely meant 'I have different kinds of flowers in my backyard.' Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they smell wonderful. I have several kinds of flowers growing in my backyard, which makes it a beautiful place.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains mistakes such as 'my parents love lovers' which is unclear. Try to directly answer the question and provide clear supporting details. Also, avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Yes, my parents love flowers, so I grow different kinds of flowers in my backyard for them. They really enjoy seeing the variety and colors.

Sugestão: Your answer is mostly clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and using more natural expressions. For example, 'different fresheners' is unclear; you might mean 'different fragrances.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: No, there aren't many flowers where I live, but I have grown several varieties in my backyard. They have different fragrances and look very beautiful.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but a bit long and repetitive. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise. Also, use present tense for habitual actions.

Exemplo: Yes, I take photos of my flowers daily to observe their growth and changes. This helps me learn how to care for them better and grow more flowers in different ways.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Use present tense consistently and avoid repeating words. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to express love and affection. For example, couples usually give roses to each other as a symbol of their love, and flowers generally represent positivity and kindness.

× It smells very good and I have different kinds of love in my backyard.

✓ They smell very good and I have different kinds of flowers in my backyard.

The word 'smells' refers to the plural noun 'flowers', so the verb should be 'smell' to agree in number. Also, 'love' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'flowers'. The sentence should use 'They smell very good and I have different kinds of flowers in my backyard.'

× Yes, my parents love lovers, so that's why I bring different kinds of flowers in my backyard and grow it.

✓ Yes, my parents love flowers, so that's why I bring different kinds of flowers to my backyard and grow them.

The word 'lovers' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers'. Also, 'grow it' is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural, so 'grow them' is appropriate. Additionally, 'bring different kinds of flowers in my backyard' should be 'bring different kinds of flowers to my backyard' to use the correct preposition.

× And they love. They love it too much.

✓ And they love them. They love them very much.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'flowers', which is plural, so 'them' should be used. Also, 'love it too much' is awkward; 'love them very much' is clearer and more natural.

× No, there are not too many flowers where I live, but I have grown some flowers in my backyard and they are all of different kind of variety with different fresheners and they looks too beautiful.

✓ No, there are not too many flowers where I live, but I have grown some flowers in my backyard and they are all of different kinds of varieties with different fragrances and they look very beautiful.

'Different kind of variety' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of varieties' to match plural 'flowers'. 'Fresheners' is incorrect; the correct word is 'fragrances'. Also, 'they looks' should be 'they look' to agree with plural subject.

× Yes, I did photographs of my flowers in my daily life because I want to see their growth day by day and I want to see that how they change every day and every night so I can do a research on them and can grow more flowers in different kind of ways.

✓ Yes, I take photographs of my flowers in my daily life because I want to see their growth day by day and I want to see how they change every day and every night so I can do research on them and grow more flowers in different kinds of ways.

The phrase 'did photographs' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'take photographs' for habitual actions. 'Can do a research' should be 'can do research' as 'research' is uncountable. 'Different kind of ways' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of ways'.

× Yes, people of my country often send flowers to each other because it showed the love between the people and most of the couples use the Rose flower to show their love to each other and flowers always show goodness and positivity in the in the peoples.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to each other because it shows the love between people and most couples use the rose flower to show their love to each other, and flowers always show goodness and positivity among people.

'It showed' should be 'it shows' to maintain present tense. 'People of my country' is better as 'people in my country'. 'Most of the couples' should be 'most couples'. 'In the in the peoples' is incorrect; it should be 'among people'. Also, 'Rose flower' should be lowercase 'rose flower'.