Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar errors and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'I do love flowers very much', say 'I love flowers very much'. Also, avoid repeating ideas like 'I can imagine that' without clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers very much. I have planted several types in my garden, such as roses, lilies, and jasmine. The fragrance of jasmine is especially delightful, as it always lifts my mood. Even now, I can imagine its sweet scent.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Avoid unclear phrases like 'she is actually just likes me'. Instead, directly state who loves flowers. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details.

Exemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers just like I do. She has planted many herbs, vegetables, and flowers in her garden. I can say she has a green thumb because her plants always grow well.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and adding linking words. For example, avoid repeating 'I can see'. Also, explain why the flowers uplift your mood to add depth.

Exemplo: Actually, I live in a rural area where there are many sunflowers. Every morning, I see their bright yellow colour, which instantly uplifts my mood because it reminds me of sunshine and happiness.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer expression and grammar correction. Instead of 'I don't have the nature of taking photographs', say 'I don't usually take photographs'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers in my daily life because I don't have much time to spend with them. However, my mother spends a lot of time caring for the flowers and sometimes takes pictures.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but incomplete and has grammatical errors. Complete your sentences and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, say 'especially on special occasions such as anniversaries and birthdays'.

Exemplo: Well, in the past, sending flowers was not a common practice in my country. But nowadays, it has become common to give bouquets to others, especially on special occasions such as anniversaries and birthdays.

× It always lift my mood and even by sitting here I can imagine the that.

✓ It always lifts my mood and even by sitting here I can imagine that.

The verb 'lift' should be in the third person singular form 'lifts' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'the that' is incorrect; 'that' alone is sufficient here.

× My mother, she is actually just likes me.

✓ My mother, she actually just likes me.

The auxiliary verb 'is' is unnecessary before 'just likes'. The correct form is 'she just likes me'.

× She has planted a lot of herbs and vegetables, flowers in her garden.

✓ She has planted a lot of herbs, vegetables, and flowers in her garden.

The list of items should be separated by commas and connected properly with 'and' to clarify the items planted.

× I can see I can see their bright and yellow colour which uplifts my mood instantly.

✓ I can see their bright and yellow colour which uplifts my mood instantly.

The phrase 'I can see' is repeated unnecessarily; removing the repetition improves clarity.

× No, I don't have the nature of taking photographs in in our daily life as I don't get much time to be with the flowers.

✓ No, I don't have the habit of taking photographs in our daily life as I don't get much time to be with the flowers.

The phrase 'nature of taking photographs' is incorrect; 'habit of taking photographs' is appropriate. Also, 'in in' is a repetition error.

× I actually my mother spends a lot of time with them.

✓ Actually, my mother spends a lot of time with them.

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'I actually my mother' is confusing. Correcting to 'Actually, my mother' clarifies the meaning.

× Well, in the past, sending flowers to each other was not a culture in my country.

✓ Well, in the past, sending flowers to each other was not a common practice in my country.

The phrase 'was not a culture' is incorrect; 'was not a common practice' better expresses the intended meaning.

× But nowadays it becomes common to give the bouquets to each other especially on the special occasions such as anniversaries, birthdays and.

✓ But nowadays it has become common to give bouquets to each other, especially on special occasions such as anniversaries and birthdays.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'It becomes' should be 'it has become' for present perfect tense. 'The bouquets' should be 'bouquets' without 'the'. The list should be completed properly without trailing 'and'.