Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，表达更自然流畅。例如，避免使用“and also”结尾，且句子结构应更清晰。

Exemplo: I don't really love flowers, but I feel happy when my family or friends give me some. However, I also feel sad because flowers usually wilt quickly.

Sugestão: 回答应更简洁且语法正确，避免冗长和不连贯的句子。使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, my roommate loves flowers. When she is in a good mood, she often buys a bunch and brings them home to brighten the room.

Sugestão: 回答应避免重复和口头语，句子结构应更清晰，表达更自然。

Exemplo: There are sometimes flowers in my room, but I usually prefer green plants because I am allergic to certain flowers.

Sugestão: 回答中应减少口头语，句子应更连贯，表达更准确。避免使用“simultaneously take the filter”等不恰当表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers I see on the street because they brighten my day. Then, I post these pictures on my WeChat moments to share the beauty with my friends.

Sugestão: 回答应避免语法错误和重复口头语，表达应更准确自然。注意单词拼写和用词，如“descend”应为“send”，“Brown and Groom Harbor”应为“bride and groom at the wedding”。

Exemplo: People in my country usually send flowers on special occasions like weddings or hospital visits. For example, when attending a wedding, guests often bring flowers for the bride and groom.

× I know if I received the flower from my family members or my friends, I will definitely be happy, but if I think that the flowers will decay in a few hours, I will feel very sad and also.

✓ I know if I receive flowers from my family members or my friends, I will definitely be happy, but if I think that the flowers will decay in a few hours, I will also feel very sad.

这里的时态使用不当，条件句中应使用一般现在时（receive），而不是过去式（received）。另外，'and also'的位置不正确，应放在句尾前。建议使用一般现在时表达习惯性或可能发生的情况。

× As I do know my door mates really love flowers when I hang out to usually just buy the bunch of flowers holding with it to represent that today she has a really high mood and she is very happy actually.

✓ As I do know, my dorm mates really love flowers. When I hang out, they usually just buy a bunch of flowers to hold to represent that today she is in a really good mood and is very happy actually.

原句中'door mates'应为'dorm mates'，'hang out to usually just buy'结构混乱，'holding with it'用法错误，应该用不定式表达目的。建议理清句子结构，正确使用介词和动词形式。

× And then he will just bring back the flowers to our.

✓ And then she will just bring back the flowers to us.

原句中'he'与前文的'she'不一致，且'to our'应为'to us'，代词使用错误。建议注意代词的一致性和正确形式。

× Sometimes there are some flowers in my room but most of the time umm, I prefer to have some green plums in my rooms because I am allergic to some specific type of flower so I won't just put flowers in my rooms.

✓ Sometimes there are some flowers in my room, but most of the time, I prefer to have some green plants in my room because I am allergic to some specific types of flowers, so I don't put flowers in my room.

'green plums'应为'green plants'，'rooms'应统一为'singular'，'type of flower'应为'types of flowers'以匹配复数。建议注意名词的单复数形式和搭配。

× Yes, I do umm, because I think if I can see the flower on the road or in the streets, I will feel be brightened my day.

✓ Yes, I do, umm, because I think if I see flowers on the road or in the streets, it will brighten my day.

'feel be brightened my day'结构错误，应为'it will brighten my day'。'the flower'改为'flowers'更符合习惯表达。建议简化句子结构，正确使用动词和宾语。

× So I will just simultaneously take the filter of that flower and post it on my moment, uh, in WeChat.

✓ So I will just take a photo of that flower and post it on my Moments on WeChat.

'take the filter of that flower'表达错误，应为'take a photo of that flower'。'my moment'应为'Moments'，是微信的功能名称。建议使用正确的短语和专有名词。

× Actually, not really in daily life, uh, because the flowers often descend in some special occasions like weddings or hospital visits.

✓ Actually, not really in daily life, uh, because flowers are often sent on some special occasions like weddings or hospital visits.

'flowers often descend'用词错误，应为'flowers are often sent'。'descend'意思是下降，不适合此处。建议使用正确的动词表达送花的动作。

× for example, uh, if you will attend the weddings, you will bring a bunch of flowers to the Brown and Groom Harbor in our daylight.

✓ For example, uh, if you attend a wedding, you will bring a bunch of flowers to the bride and groom at their home during the day.

'Brown and Groom Harbor'应为'bride and groom at their home'，'in our daylight'表达不当，应为'during the day'。代词和专有名词使用错误。建议使用正确的词汇和表达方式。