Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. For example, instead of repeating 'living room', you can say 'to make it more colorful and beautiful.' Also, correct verb forms like 'I really enjoy having flowers at home.'

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because I often buy them at the flower market to decorate my living room, which makes it more colorful and beautiful. I really enjoy having flowers at home since they create a relaxing and pleasant atmosphere.

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' or 'since' to explain reasons clearly. Avoid filler words like 'uh'. For example, say 'My mom also loves flowers because she enjoys buying fresh ones to decorate the living room, which brings fresh air and beauty.'

Exemplo: Yes, my mom also loves flowers because she enjoys buying fresh ones to decorate the living room, which brings fresh air and makes the space beautiful.

Sugestão: Focus on grammatical correctness and clarity. Use plural forms correctly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I have many flowers at home, such as lilies and roses. I like them because they are fresh, fragrant, and come in different beautiful colors.'

Exemplo: Yes, I have many flowers at home, such as lilies and roses. I like them because they are fresh, fragrant, and come in various beautiful colors.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Avoid filler words and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, 'Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially when I visit new places, because they make a beautiful background for my selfies.'

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially when I visit new places, because they make a beautiful background for my selfies.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and improve sentence fluency. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. For example, 'In China, people often buy flowers as gifts during special festivals and birthdays because flowers are considered a thoughtful present.'

Exemplo: In China, people often buy flowers as gifts during special festivals and birthdays because flowers are considered a thoughtful present.

× I really enjoy have the flower in my home.

✓ I really enjoy having the flowers in my home.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, so 'have' should be changed to 'having'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× My mom also love flowers.

✓ My mom also loves flowers.

In the present tense, third person singular subjects require the verb to end with 's' or 'es'. 'Love' should be 'loves' to agree with 'My mom'.

× She also have the, uh, similar hobby with me.

✓ She also has a similar hobby like me.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' for third person singular. Also, 'with me' is better expressed as 'like me' when comparing hobbies.

× Just buy the fresh flower at home to decorate the living room 'cause the flower can bring the fresh air and make the living room beautiful.

✓ She just buys fresh flowers at home to decorate the living room because flowers can bring fresh air and make the living room beautiful.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' when referring to multiple flowers. Also, 'buy' should be 'buys' to agree with third person singular subject 'She'. 'Cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate.

× I have lots of flowers at my home just like the Lily and rose.

✓ I have lots of flowers at my home, like lilies and roses.

'Lily' and 'rose' should be plural 'lilies' and 'roses' to match 'lots of flowers'. Also, 'just like the' is better as 'like' for listing examples.

× I really like this kind of flowers and it's uh, quite fresh and uh, good smelling also is very beautiful with different color.

✓ I really like this kind of flower; it's quite fresh, smells good, and is very beautiful with different colors.

'Good smelling' should be 'smells good' to correctly describe the flowers. 'Flowers' should be singular 'flower' when preceded by 'this kind of'. 'Color' should be plural 'colors' to indicate variety.

× I think it's a good background, uh, when I doing selfie, so it's a very good decoration, I think.

✓ I think it's a good background when I am doing a selfie, so it's a very good decoration, I think.

After 'when', the verb should be in the present continuous form 'am doing'. Also, 'selfie' should be preceded by an article 'a'.

× Every time I visit a new places, I will uh, take some photos of the flower.

✓ Every time I visit new places, I will take some photos of the flowers.

'Places' is plural, so 'a' should be removed. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context of multiple photos.

× In China, uh, when the special festivals are coming, uh, lots of people will buy the flower to, to be the gift to the others.

✓ In China, when special festivals are coming, lots of people will buy flowers to give as gifts to others.

'The flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'To be the gift to the others' is awkward; 'to give as gifts to others' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So just like the, uh, birthday also, uh, people will buy the flower to be the gift to the others.

✓ So, for example, on birthdays, people also buy flowers to give as gifts to others.

'Just like the birthday also' is awkward; 'for example, on birthdays' is clearer. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'To be the gift to the others' should be 'to give as gifts to others'.