Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct singular/plural forms, articles, and verb agreement. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they are very beautiful and have a pleasant aroma. In my garden, I always plant both trees and flowers, which make my house look wonderful.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas more logically and use linking words to connect sentences. Also, clarify your meaning and avoid vague expressions. Use correct verb tenses and plural forms.

Exemplo: Yes, my mom loves flowers. On weekends, we often plant flowers together. She tells me that loving nature means loving the environment and ourselves, so I want to learn how to protect the environment effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure. Add linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific details.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. At my school, they plant many trees and flowers because they help make the air fresh and improve students' behavior. Additionally, we are taught how to protect the environment and nature.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using plural forms and more natural expressions. Also, try to combine sentences using linking words to make your answer more fluent.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I always take photos of flowers when I go outside because it has become a habit and part of my daily routine.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: In my country, people usually give presents like clothes, food, or shoes. However, if someone sends flowers to another person, it often means they love that person very much.

× Yes I do, I love flower because it's very beautiful and also the aroma very good.

✓ Yes I do, I love flowers because they are very beautiful and also the aroma is very good.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to refer generally to flowers. Also, 'it's' (it is) should be 'they are' to agree with the plural subject 'flowers'. The phrase 'the aroma very good' is missing the verb 'is'.

× In my gardens I always plant trees and also flowers because it's make my house look wonderful.

✓ In my garden I always plant trees and also flowers because they make my house look wonderful.

'Gardens' should be singular 'garden' if referring to one garden. 'It's' (it is) is incorrect; it should be 'they' to agree with plural subject 'trees and flowers'. The verb 'make' should be without 's' after 'they'.

× Yes I do my mom love flower at the weekend we always plan 3 together.

✓ Yes I do, my mom loves flowers. At the weekend we always plan together.

'Mom' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' (third person singular). 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. The phrase 'plan 3 together' is unclear; assuming 'plan together' is intended. Also, the sentence needs punctuation to separate ideas.

× She tell me that love in the environment, love the naturals in love myself.

✓ She tells me that she loves the environment, loves nature, and loves herself.

The verb 'tell' should be 'tells' for third person singular. The phrase is unclear; corrected to proper expressions: 'loves the environment', 'loves nature', and 'loves herself'.

× Yes there are. In my school they plant many trees and flower because it's make the air fresh and also improve the behaviour of student.

✓ Yes, there are. In my school, they plant many trees and flowers because they make the air fresh and also improve the behaviour of students.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'many trees'. 'It's' (it is) should be 'they' to agree with plural subject 'trees and flowers'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to refer generally.

× They also teach us how to protect the environment and natural.

✓ They also teach us how to protect the environment and nature.

'Natural' is an adjective; the noun 'nature' is needed here to correctly express the idea.

× Yes I do. I always take a photo of flower when I go outside.

✓ Yes I do. I always take photos of flowers when I go outside.

'Photo' and 'flower' should be plural 'photos' and 'flowers' to indicate general habit.

× Well, in the countries they refer to bring the present like clothes, food, shoes and something else.

✓ Well, in the country they prefer to bring presents like clothes, food, shoes, and other things.

'Countries' should be singular 'country' if referring to one country. 'Refer to bring' is incorrect; 'prefer to bring' is appropriate. 'Present' should be plural 'presents'. 'Something else' is better expressed as 'other things'.

× But if they send flowers to another people, they maybe love that person so much.

✓ But if they send flowers to other people, they may love that person very much.

'Another people' is incorrect; 'other people' is correct. 'Maybe' (adverb) should be 'may' (modal verb) to express possibility. 'So much' is better as 'very much' in this context.