Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing such as 'on bedding' instead of 'on weddings'. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten up any occasion. For example, I usually give flowers as gifts on birthdays and weddings to show my affection. Moreover, flowers symbolize strong bonds between people, which makes them very meaningful.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes like 'loves flower' instead of 'loves flowers'. Try to avoid vague phrases like 'to begin with' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details.

Exemplo: Yes, many people I know love flowers, especially my girlfriend. Every weekend, I give her flowers to make her happy because they express emotions and strengthen our relationship.

Sugestão: Your answer has some vocabulary errors like 'breed' instead of 'variety' and awkward phrases such as 'in booking for birthday present'. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct collocations. Also, improve sentence flow by using linking words and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flower shops in my area. They sell a wide variety of bright flowers such as roses, lilies, and sunflowers. These shops offer bouquets in pots or wrapped nicely, which are popular as birthday gifts.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing like 'whenever I'm going anywhere such as party'. Try to use more natural expressions and correct sentence structure. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers whenever I go to parties or visit parks. Whenever I see beautiful flowers, I capture their images to keep as memories.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes like 'bedding' instead of 'weddings' and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural and accurate vocabulary. Also, combine sentences using linking words to improve coherence and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers on special occasions such as weddings and birthday parties. Flowers are important because they express emotions and strengthen relationships between people.

× Normally on bedding and on birthdays I always give present to my friends with flowers.

✓ Normally on weddings and on birthdays I always give presents to my friends with flowers.

The word 'bedding' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'weddings' which is plural. Also, 'present' should be plural 'presents' because it refers to gifts given to multiple friends.

× Moreover, it shows the relation with the person and represent a strong bonding.

✓ Moreover, it shows the relationship with the person and represents a strong bond.

The word 'relation' should be 'relationship' to correctly express the connection between people. 'Represent' should be 'represents' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Bonding' should be 'bond' as 'bond' is the noun form used here.

× My girlfriend loves flower.

✓ My girlfriend loves flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general, not a single flower.

× Yes, there are plenty of flowers shops in my area.

✓ Yes, there are plenty of flower shops in my area.

The phrase 'flowers shops' is incorrect; the correct form is 'flower shops' where 'flower' acts as an adjective describing the type of shops.

× Most of the shops carry very bright, very wide breed of flowers such as rose, Lily, even sunflower as well.

✓ Most of the shops carry very bright, very wide breeds of flowers such as roses, lilies, and even sunflowers.

'Breed' should be plural 'breeds' to match 'wide'. The flower names should be plural: 'rose' to 'roses', 'Lily' to 'lilies', and 'sunflower' to 'sunflowers'.

× They offer plenty of bouquets such as in flower pot or in booking for birthday present.

✓ They offer plenty of bouquets such as in flower pots or in boxes for birthday presents.

The phrase 'in flower pot' should be 'in flower pots' (plural) and 'in booking' is incorrect; it should be 'in boxes'. Also, 'birthday present' should be plural 'birthday presents' to match the context.

× I always take picture as a memory.

✓ I always take pictures as a memory.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because it refers to multiple photos taken.

× Yes, people in my country send flowers to other mostly on occasions such as bedding, birthday party.

✓ Yes, people in my country send flowers to others mostly on occasions such as weddings and birthday parties.

'Other' should be 'others' to refer to other people. 'Bedding' is incorrect; it should be 'weddings'. 'Birthday party' should be plural 'birthday parties' to indicate multiple occasions.

× Because flowers play in a very important role.

✓ Because flowers play a very important role.

The phrase 'play in a very important role' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'play a very important role' without 'in'.