Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “with a visa”) and tense/number errors. Use linking words like “because” or “so” correctly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers. For example, my mother often buys sunflowers to put by the door, which brightens the whole house and makes me feel cheerful.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct factual or lexical mistakes. Use a clear subject and verb, and give one specific example. Replace incorrect words (e.g. “turnips” is a vegetable) with appropriate flower names and use linking words like “for example” or “so”.

Exemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers. For example, she often orders roses and lilies to decorate the dining table and cabinets, which makes our home look welcoming.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer, then provide one specific detail about where the flowers are and why. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid repetition. Use linking phrases like “because” or “for example.”

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers in my house because my mother likes to decorate every room. For example, she places potted lilies and roses on the dining table and on the bedroom cabinet.

Sugestão: This answer is fairly clear but can be more natural and concise. Start with a direct sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Replace awkward phrases like “mini” with clearer words such as “simple” or “meaningful.”

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, as well as animals and landscapes. I do this to preserve special moments—for example, I photograph the flowers on my balcony each week to track how they change.

Sugestão: Provide a clear general statement and one or two specific occasions. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use correct collocations (e.g. “special occasions,” “weddings,” “graduations,” “festivals”) and finish your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, many people in my country send flowers to family and friends on special occasions. For example, people commonly give bouquets at weddings, graduations, and during festivals to show respect and good wishes.

× It make me cheerful and bringing up my room.

✓ It makes me cheerful and brightens up my room.

The original has two problems: subject-verb agreement and incorrect use of a present participle. 'It' requires the third person singular verb 'makes' (Grammar problem type 2/27), and 'bringing up my room' incorrectly uses a present participle phrase where a finite verb is needed. Use 'brightens up my room' to express the action clearly. Suggestion: ensure the verb agrees with the subject and use a proper verb phrase rather than a bare -ing form for a second main clause.

× my mom purchased sunflowers up in the door with a visa.

✓ my mom bought sunflowers to put on the door with a ribbon.

The sentence uses incorrect verbs and prepositions. 'Purchased' is formal but acceptable; 'bought' is simpler. 'Up in the door' is incorrect preposition choice; use 'on the door' or 'to put on the door'. 'With a visa' is wrong contextually; likely intended 'with a ribbon' or similar. Suggestion: choose correct prepositions of place ('on') and appropriate nouns for items used to decorate ('ribbon').

× Not to be honest, my mom is one of flowers because she orders a lot of flowers of flowers such like turnips and lilies to decorate our rooms in the dining table or cabinet.

✓ To be honest, my mom is one of those who love flowers because she orders a lot of flowers, such as tulips and lilies, to decorate our rooms, the dining table, or the cabinet.

Multiple issues: 'Not to be honest' should be 'To be honest' for intended meaning. 'One of flowers' is wrong; use 'one of those who love flowers' or 'one of my family members who loves flowers' (singular/plural and phrasing). 'Orders a lot of flowers of flowers' is repetitive. 'Such like' should be 'such as'. 'Turnips' is incorrect word for a flower; likely 'tulips'. Prepositions 'in the dining table' should be 'on the dining table'. Suggestion: correct noun choices and use 'such as' for examples; ensure singular/plural agreement and correct prepositions of place.

× Yes there are variables of flowers in my room because my mom orders the in to decorate our room such like turnips or lilies to put in our dining table or bed.

✓ Yes, there are various flowers in my room because my mom orders them to decorate our room, such as tulips or lilies, to put on our dining table or bed.

'Variables of flowers' is incorrect; use 'various flowers' or 'a variety of flowers'. 'Orders the in' is garbled; should be 'orders them'. 'Such like' should be 'such as'. Preposition 'to put in our dining table' should be 'to put on our dining table'. Also replace 'turnips' with 'tulips'. Suggestion: use 'various' or 'a variety of' and correct object pronouns and prepositions of place.

× Set a cabinet it make make.

✓ She also puts them on a cabinet; it makes the room look cheerful.

The original is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'Set a cabinet it make make' has missing subjects and verbs and a duplicated word. Reconstruct into clear sentences: specify the subject 'She', the action 'puts them on a cabinet', and a result clause with correct verb agreement 'it makes the room look cheerful'. Suggestion: always include a clear subject and finite verb and avoid repetitions.

× I prefer to preserve and capture some moment in my daily life.

✓ I prefer to preserve and capture some moments in my daily life.

'Some moment' should be plural 'some moments' to match 'preserve and capture' generally. The verb forms 'preserve and capture' are correct infinitives after 'prefer to'. Suggestion: use plural when referring to multiple occasions or moments.

× I think it's a mini, a meaningful way to keep our memory.

✓ I think it's a small but meaningful way to keep our memories.

'Mini' is an informal adjective and awkward here; 'small' fits better. 'A meaningful way' is fine, but 'keep our memory' should be plural 'our memories' or 'keep a memory of things'. Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives and pluralize 'memory' to refer to multiple moments.

× Definitely many people send flowers to families or friends on, on special occasions such like university and university and festivals.

✓ Definitely, many people send flowers to family or friends on special occasions such as weddings, graduations, and festivals.

Errors: repeated 'on, on' and wrong examples 'university and university' are unclear; likely intended 'weddings' or 'graduations'. 'Such like' should be 'such as'. Use singular 'family' as a group or 'families'; choose one. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use correct example events, and 'such as' for examples.

× Uh, it's a mini, mini way to experience their respect and.

✓ Uh, it's a small way to show their respect.

The phrase 'to experience their respect' is awkward; people 'show' or 'express' respect. Remove trailing 'and'. 'Mini, mini' is redundant. Suggestion: use proper verbs for intent (show/express) and avoid redundant words.