Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Улучшите связность и грамматическую точность. Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте 1-2 поддерживающих предложения. Избегайте повторов («I just, uh, I just») и исправьте ошибки в словосочетаниях (например, "grow flowers" → "growing flowers"; "to harvest it" → неуместно). Используйте связки (e.g., "however", "but") для логики.

Exemplo: No, I don't love growing flowers. I enjoy giving bouquets to women close to me, but I don't have the patience to grow or care for plants myself. However, I like looking at flowers because they brighten a room and lift my mood.

Sugestão: Упростите структуру и поправьте порядок слов и грамматику. Дайте понятное утверждение, затем конкретные примеры. Исправьте ошибки: "they I adore flowers" и "they keen on raising" → "they adore flowers" / "they're keen on growing plants". Добавьте связку (e.g., "for example").

Exemplo: Yes, several members of my family love flowers. For example, my grandmother, mother and aunt all adore gardening and are keen on growing and caring for plants at home.

Sugestão: Ответьте прямо и используйте правильную грамматику и слова. Замените "didn't care of them" на "didn't take care of them". Дайте краткое объяснение и, если нужно, добавьте контрастную фразу (e.g., "however").

Exemplo: No, there aren't any plants or flowers in my apartment now. There used to be when my mother lived here, but they died because I didn't take care of them.

Sugestão: Избегайте запинок и слов-паразитов (uh, umm). Уточните причину кратко и приведите пример. Исправьте форму глаголов: "my aunt send" → "my aunt sends" и "pictures of it" → "pictures of them".

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I don't find it particularly interesting. However, my aunt often sends me photos of her plants by text, which I appreciate.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте ответ более естественно, убрав повторения и «uh». Дайте структуру: общее утверждение + пример. Замените "present flowers" на "give flowers" и уточните праздник: "International Women's Day".

Exemplo: Yes, giving flowers is a common tradition in my country, especially from men to women in their families. For example, on International Women's Day (March 8th) many men give flowers to their mothers, wives and female relatives.

× I don't like grow flowers and take care of them to harvest it.

✓ I don't like growing flowers or taking care of them to harvest them.

The verbs 'grow' and 'take' need gerunds after 'like' when describing activities. Also use 'or' for alternatives and 'them' to agree with plural 'flowers'. Use parallel gerund forms for clarity.

× I just like looking at it.

✓ I just like looking at them.

Pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'flowers' (plural). Use 'them' to match plural antecedent.

× It's my grandma, my mother and my aunt that they I adore flowers and they keen on raising plants and taking care of it.

✓ It's my grandma, my mother and my aunt; they adore flowers and they are keen on raising plants and taking care of them.

Avoid using both a relative clause 'that' and a pronoun 'they' together. Use 'they' as subject and include 'are' before 'keen'. Use 'them' for plural 'plants'. Also separate clauses for clarity.

× It used to be before my mother moved and now they all died because I didn't care of them.

✓ They used to be here before my mother moved, and now they all died because I didn't take care of them.

Use 'used to' with subject 'they' and add location if needed. The phrase is 'take care of', not 'care of'. Maintain tense consistency and plural pronouns.

× I don't uh, take photos of flowers because I can see the point in it uh, but sometimes my aunt send umm, pictures of it, uh, through uh, text messages and uh.

✓ I don't take photos of flowers because I can't see the point in it, but sometimes my aunt sends pictures of them through text messages.

Use 'can't see the point' for negative ability/opinion. 'Aunt' requires third person singular verb 'sends'. 'Pictures of them' matches plural 'flowers'. Remove filler words for clarity.

× Yes, it's kind of tradition when men uh, present flowers to women, uh, who are related to them.

✓ Yes, it's kind of a tradition for men to present flowers to women who are related to them.

Use 'a tradition' with article 'a'. Use 'for men to present' or 'when men present'—infinitive structure is clearer. Remove unnecessary commas.

× And uh, for example, on uh, uh, International Women Day on the 8th of March, uh, many men present flowers to their women.

✓ For example, on International Women's Day on the 8th of March, many men give flowers to the women in their lives.

Correct name is 'International Women's Day' (possessive). Use 'give flowers' as more natural and 'the women in their lives' is clearer than 'their women'. Remove filler words.