Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more grammatical, concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons with linking words, and avoid repetition. Correct grammar (e.g. 'their fragrance', 'they are vibrant') and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers. They are vibrant and their fragrance is refreshing, which brightens my room. I often keep them indoors because they remind me of special celebrations and particular people, so they lift my mood.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide a specific example. Use correct tense and complete sentences; link ideas using words like 'for example' or 'because'. Avoid unfinished phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers. For example, my brother and I often give her bouquets for special occasions because they brighten up her home and make her happy.

Sugestão: Provide a concise, structured answer: state whether there are many flowers or shops, then give one specific detail or reason. Use correct singular/plural forms and finish your sentences fully.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. There are numerous flower shops and markets, and people often buy bouquets for celebrations or simply to lift their mood.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear statement about your habit, then give a specific example briefly and link it to why you took the photo. Avoid repeating words like 'really' and use singular/plural correctly ('bouquet of flowers'). Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers. For instance, when I received my first large bouquet of flowers, I photographed it and posted the picture on social media because its strong fragrance and colours lifted my mood.

Sugestão: Answer directly and provide a specific context or frequency. Remove filler words (e.g. 'umm') and make the sentence more fluent by using linking phrases like 'for example' or 'such as'.

Exemplo: Yes, people often send flowers in my country. For example, flowers are commonly given as gifts for birthdays, anniversaries and other celebrations.

× Yes, I absolutely enjoy them because they are vibrant and they are fragrance is so cool and refreshing sometimes and also I like to keep them in my room because it reminds me of the celebration or the people, the person.

✓ Yes, I absolutely enjoy them because they are vibrant and their fragrance is so cool and refreshing sometimes, and I also like to keep them in my room because they remind me of celebrations or certain people.

The sentence misuses the pronoun 'they' with 'fragrance' (a singular noun) so 'their' should be used to show possession by plural 'them'. Also 'it reminds me' incorrectly refers to 'them' (plural), so use 'they remind me'. Use plural 'celebrations' or 'certain people' for clarity. Suggestion: match pronoun number to the noun and keep consistent plural/singular references. 'id':12

× Definitely my mother, me and my brother used to give her bouquet and she really enjoys them and become happier because they are they brighten up the.

✓ Definitely my mother. My brother and I used to give her bouquets and she really enjoyed them and became happier because they brightened up the room.

'Me and my brother' is informal and object order should be 'My brother and I' as subject. 'Used to give her bouquet' needs plural 'bouquets' for repeated actions. Tense inconsistency: 'she really enjoys' should be past 'enjoyed' to match 'used to'. 'Become' should be past 'became'. Also sentence fragment 'they are they brighten up the.' is ungrammatical; correct to 'they brightened up the room.' Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense and correct subject order and plural forms. 'id':5

× Definitely yes. In the place where I live there is a lot of There are a lot of places where you can buy bouquets of flowers and usually people buy them to celebrate different occasions or just lift the mood of.

✓ Definitely yes. Where I live there are a lot of places where you can buy bouquets of flowers, and usually people buy them to celebrate different occasions or just to lift their mood.

Mixed and redundant 'there is a lot of / There are a lot' causes grammatical error. For plural 'places' use 'there are'. Also add 'to' before 'lift' and specify 'their mood'. Remove 'In the place where I live' redundancy. Suggestion: use 'there are' for plural nouns and ensure verbs and infinitives are complete. 'id':3

× Oh sure, I remember when I got my first bouquet of flower and it was really big and it smelled good, like fragrance was really good. And I of course took a photo and then posted it on my social medias because it really lifted my mood.

✓ Oh sure, I remember when I got my first bouquet of flowers; it was really big and smelled good, the fragrance was really nice. I of course took a photo and then posted it on my social media because it really lifted my mood.

Use plural 'flowers' with 'bouquet of flowers'. Simplify tense: 'it smelled good' is fine, but 'like fragrance was really good' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'the fragrance was really nice'. 'Social medias' should be 'social media' (uncountable). Suggestion: use correct noun forms and clearer descriptive phrases. 'id':11

× Yes, usually people purchase them to as a gift for certain umm celebrations as birthdays or anniversaries. So yes, people buy flowers.

✓ Yes, usually people purchase them as a gift for certain celebrations such as birthdays or anniversaries. So yes, people buy flowers.

Extra 'to' before 'as a gift' is incorrect; remove it. Use 'such as' instead of 'as' when giving examples. Ensure modal/verb forms are concise. Suggestion: eliminate unnecessary words and use 'such as' for examples. 'id':4