Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınız doğal ancak bazı cümlelerinizde anlam karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha açık ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları azaltarak cevabınızı daha etkili hale getirebilirsiniz.

Exemplo: Yes, I write quite often, but not novels because I'm not skilled at that. Usually, I write when I feel lonely, as if I'm talking to my friends, and I share some of my secrets in my writings.

Sugestão: Cümleniz karmaşık ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha net ve doğrudan cevaplar verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha tutarlı yapabilirsiniz.

Exemplo: I like to write when I want to share information with someone. However, if I have secrets that I don't want to tell anyone, I write them down to keep them private.

Sugestão: Cevabınız doğrudan ve anlaşılır ancak tekrarlar mevcut. Daha çeşitli bağlaçlar kullanarak ve cümleleri kısaltarak daha etkili cevaplar verebilirsiniz.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe my writings will change over time because everything evolves. As I grow and learn, my thoughts and style will also develop.

Sugestão: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve anlam açısından hatalar var. Daha basit ve doğru cümleler kurmaya odaklanın. Gereksiz tekrarları azaltın ve düşüncelerinizi daha açık ifade edin.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because I have beautiful handwriting. People often compliment it, and I enjoy looking at my written work.

× It's not kind of writing a novel because I'm not good at it.

✓ It's not the kind of writing a novel because I'm not good at it.

The phrase 'kind of' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify the type. Also, 'writing a novel' is a noun phrase here, so 'the kind of writing a novel' is correct.

× But when I feel alone, I write it just talking with my like talking with my friends and I give some secrets to my writings.

✓ But when I feel alone, I write as if I am talking with my friends, and I give some secrets to my writings.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. 'Just talking with my like talking with my friends' is unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.

× What I like to write is generally if I want to share some information with my somebody, but if I don't want my give the secrets to somebody at the same time, I just write them down and I don't give anyone my secrets.

✓ What I like to write is generally when I want to share some information with somebody, but if I don't want to give secrets to somebody at the same time, I just write them down and I don't give anyone my secrets.

The pronouns 'my somebody' and 'my give' are incorrect. 'My' should not be used before 'somebody' or 'give'. The sentence is corrected to use proper pronouns and verb forms.

× Yes, I think the things I write would change in the time because everything changed with time.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write will change over time because everything changes with time.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used here; 'will' is appropriate for future predictions. Also, 'in the time' should be 'over time' and 'changed' should be 'changes' to maintain present tense for general truths.

× So my writings also will change, I'm sure.

✓ So my writings will also change, I'm sure.

The adverb 'also' should be placed before the main verb 'will change' for correct word order in English.

× I prefer handwriting because I write so beautiful.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I write so beautifully.

'Beautiful' is an adjective, but here an adverb is needed to modify the verb 'write'. The correct adverb form is 'beautifully'.

× Everyone likes my writings and also I like my writings too.

✓ Everyone likes my writing and I also like my writing too.

The noun 'writing' is generally uncountable when referring to the activity or work produced. Using 'writing' instead of 'writings' is more natural here.

× When I write, I when I look at my writings, I say what a beautiful writing that's I.

✓ When I write, and when I look at my writing, I say, 'What beautiful writing that is!'.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and corrects the phrase to a natural exclamation.