Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, avoiding hesitation and redundancy. Also, correct any mistakes and use appropriate vocabulary. For example, instead of 'keep her diet', say 'keep a habit'.

Exemplo: I don't write a lot, but I have a habit of writing in my diary every day. So, I wouldn't call myself a writer, just someone who records daily events.

Sugestão: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid repetition and be specific about your reasons.

Exemplo: I mostly write about my daily routines, including my feelings and things I appreciate. Additionally, I note down my future plans, which helps me stay organised and focused.

Sugestão: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Avoid contradictions and use linking words properly. Express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons.

Exemplo: I don't think the things I write will change in the future because, although society influences me, my core thoughts remain stable. Therefore, I believe I will keep this habit.

Sugestão: Improve sentence fluency and grammar. Use linking words to compare both methods clearly. Avoid minor errors and be concise.

Exemplo: Recently, I prefer typing because it is convenient and saves time, allowing me to focus on other important tasks. However, writing by hand helps me clear my mind and concentrate better on what I record.

× Well, I'm I'm mostly write down my daily routines, such as what I feel and what I'm going to appreciate.

✓ Well, I mostly write down my daily routines, such as what I feel and what I'm going to appreciate.

The phrase 'I'm mostly write' is incorrect because 'I'm' (I am) should be followed by a verb in the present participle (-ing) form to form the present continuous tense. However, the intended meaning is habitual action, so the simple present tense 'I mostly write' is appropriate here.

× Also, I write some some next decisions on what I'm going to do in the in the future, which made me with my life, made me stay organized.

✓ Also, I write down some decisions about what I'm going to do in the future, which helps me manage my life and stay organized.

The original sentence has redundancy ('some some'), incorrect preposition ('on' should be 'about'), and unclear phrasing ('which made me with my life'). The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure for better coherence.

× I don't think I write what I write will change in the future because although I was influenced by all kinds of environments by the society, but the true means they stable and I will always keep the habit I think.

✓ I don't think what I write will change in the future because, although I am influenced by all kinds of environments and society, the true meaning is stable and I think I will always keep the habit.

The original sentence has awkward structure, unnecessary conjunctions ('because although' and 'but'), tense inconsistency ('was' should be 'am'), and unclear phrases ('the true means they stable'). The correction improves clarity, tense consistency, and sentence flow.

× Well, recently I type for the most of the time because it's quite convenient and time saving so that I can live spare time to do more important tasks in my life.

✓ Well, recently I type most of the time because it's quite convenient and time-saving so that I can have spare time to do more important tasks in my life.

The phrase 'for the most of the time' is incorrect; it should be 'most of the time' without 'for'. Also, 'live spare time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have spare time'. Hyphenation in 'time-saving' is also necessary as it is a compound adjective.

× But I do think right down on paper. Paper is a great way to clear our minds and make me more concentrate on what I'm recording.

✓ But I do think writing down on paper is a great way to clear my mind and helps me concentrate more on what I'm recording.

The original sentence has pronoun inconsistency ('our minds' vs 'me'), and incorrect verb form ('make me more concentrate'). The correction uses consistent first-person singular pronouns and correct verb forms for clarity and grammatical correctness.