Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I write to write' and be more specific about what you write. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I write quite often because I am a writer. I enjoy composing poems, songs, and stories, which allows me to express my creativity.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly state what you like to write and why, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I enjoy writing poems because I appreciate their rhythm and meaning. For example, I admire poets like Robert Frost, whose poem 'Fire and Ice' inspired me. I also like writing songs, even though they are challenging to compose.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons, using linking words to improve flow.

Exemplo: I don't believe my writings will change the world because poets like me rarely gain fame or influence. Moreover, living in a country with corruption makes it harder for such works to have an impact.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Please clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because I can write on various materials like paper or ivory sheets. Writing by hand feels peaceful and comfortable, almost like being in my own space.

Sugestão: Your answer is contradictory and confusing. Try to give a clear response about your diary-keeping habits and explain your reasons logically.

Exemplo: I don't keep diaries regularly because I don't enjoy writing in them. Although I have some old diaries with my poems, I usually store them away and sometimes discard them.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors. Try to clearly explain the methods you use to record your life and why, using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I use diaries and simple ivory sheets to record my daily life. Writing regularly helps me review my work and understand my strengths and weaknesses, which improves my writing skills.

× I prefer to writing as I can write on different things like paper, ivory sheets, etcetera.

✓ I prefer writing as I can write on different things like paper, ivory sheets, etcetera.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the gerund form (verb + -ing) without 'to'. Using 'to writing' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer writing'. This is a common structure in English where 'prefer' is followed directly by the gerund.

× I like to write poems as I like the course and the main portion of the poems and I also read it some poets poems like Robert Frost etc.

✓ I like to write poems as I like the course and the main portion of the poems and I also read some poets' poems like Robert Frost etc.

The phrase 'some poets poems' lacks the possessive apostrophe. It should be 'some poets' poems' to indicate poems belonging to some poets. This is a plural possessive form.

× I like to read myself my works and I can easily get my bones and cons for that I can become a good writer.

✓ I like to read my works myself and I can easily get my pros and cons so that I can become a good writer.

The phrase 'read myself my works' is awkward; 'read my works myself' is clearer. Also, 'bones and cons' is a mishearing or misspelling of 'pros and cons'. The phrase 'for that I can become' is better expressed as 'so that I can become'. These corrections improve clarity and correct preposition and phrase usage.

× No, I don't think so as we, we or the other poets do not get famous and these poems cannot be bought by the persons who can change the world and we are living in a country which is corrupted.

✓ No, I don't think so as we or the other poets do not get famous and these poems cannot be bought by the people who can change the world and we are living in a country which is corrupt.

The phrase 'persons who can change the world' is better as 'people who can change the world' for natural usage. Also, 'corrupted' is an adjective meaning morally degraded, but here 'corrupt' (adjective meaning dishonest or immoral) is more appropriate to describe the country. The pronoun usage 'we, we or the other poets' is redundant; removing the repeated 'we' improves clarity.