Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复。

Exemplo: I don't write very often, but occasionally I compose lyrics or short articles.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免口语填充词，表达更清晰。

Exemplo: I enjoy writing because it helps me express my emotions and makes me feel happy.

Sugestão: 回答内容较好，但语法错误影响表达，建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

Exemplo: Yes, my writing has changed over time. When I was younger, I liked writing fiction, but now I prefer writing lyrics.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够清晰，建议注意单词拼写和句子结构。

Exemplo: I prefer typing because I can write on my phone anytime and anywhere, which is more convenient than handwriting.

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯且表达不清晰，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。

Exemplo: I don't keep a diary regularly, maybe once a month or every few months. Although it's not my hobby, I find it useful.

Sugestão: 回答中断句不完整，建议使用连贯的句子并丰富细节。

Exemplo: I record my life by taking photos and videos, and I often share these moments on WeChat.

× Not a lot, but sometimes I also write something like lyrics or some little articles.

✓ Not a lot, but sometimes I also write things like lyrics or some little articles.

这里'something'用于不可数或单数名词，'lyrics'和'articles'是复数，应该用复数指示词'things'。

× Yeah, I like to write because I think, right, It's a nice way to impress yourself and to release your emotion.

✓ Yeah, I like to write because I think, right, it's a nice way to impress yourself and to release your emotions.

emotion应使用复数emotions，因为情感通常是复数形式。

× You can write the things you can speak to others and that will make you happy.

✓ You can write the things you can speak about to others and that will make you happy.

动词speak后通常需要介词about来引出内容，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× Yes, because of the surroundings, the things you write could be change.

✓ Yes, because of the surroundings, the things you write could change.

modal verb 'could'后应接动词原形，不能用被动形式'be change'。

× For example, when I was a young boy I like to write some fiction, but now I am more likely to write lyrics.

✓ For example, when I was a young boy I liked to write some fiction, but now I am more likely to write lyrics.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时，like应改为liked。

× I prefer typing because I can write in on my phone anywhere, anytime it's convenient rather than handling.

✓ I prefer typing because I can write on my phone anywhere, anytime; it's more convenient than handwriting.

'write in on'中'in'多余，应去掉；'handling'应为'handwriting'，表示手写。

× Not too far, maybe every month or every season. I don't have a hobby to write Diaries.

✓ Not too often, maybe every month or every season. I don't have a hobby of writing diaries.

'Not too far'用词不当，应为'Not too often'表示频率；'hobby to write Diaries'表达不自然，应改为'hobby of writing diaries'。

× I will record my life by taking photos and taking videos and. Show my moments in WeChat.

✓ I will record my life by taking photos and videos and show my moments on WeChat.

'Show'前不应有句号；'in WeChat'应改为'on WeChat'，表示在某个平台上。