Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'started a practice' and 'added a routine' which mean similar things. Also, use correct expressions such as 'writing a journal' instead of 'writing journal'. Try to keep your answer within 3-4 sentences and use linking words to improve flow.

Exemplo: Yes, I write every day as part of my routine. Recently, I started keeping a journal to record my thoughts and experiences.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and unclear expressions. For example, 'feels very relaxed and stressed' is contradictory. Try to express your feelings clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases.

Exemplo: I like to write about my immediate feelings and thoughts. I don't follow specific topics because writing freely helps me relax and reduce stress.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Avoid repeating phrases like 'definitely' and ensure your sentences are complete. Also, directly answer the question about whether the things you write would change, then explain your reasons with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe the content I write will change over time as my thoughts and experiences evolve. Moreover, writing daily helps me improve my English fluency and writing skills.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'because' without completing the thought. Use linking words properly and keep sentences clear and concise.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting in a notebook because I have been doing it for many years. Also, handwriting helps me improve my penmanship.

Sugestão: Your answer is honest but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'proper answer' and 'correct answer'. Instead, directly state your situation and add a brief explanation.

Exemplo: I just started writing a journal yesterday, so I don't have a regular diary-keeping habit yet.

Sugestão: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid hesitation phrases like 'maybe' and express your intentions clearly.

Exemplo: I don't usually record my life daily, but I plan to start including different topics in my journal from today.

× Yes, I have started a practice of writing every day and recently I have added a routine of writing journal in my everyday.

✓ Yes, I have started the practice of writing every day and recently I have added the routine of writing a journal every day.

The phrase 'writing journal' is incorrect; it should be 'writing a journal' because 'journal' is a countable noun and requires an article. Also, 'in my everyday' is incorrect; it should be 'every day' as two words to indicate frequency.

× I like to write on what I feel in my mind on the spot.

✓ I like to write about what I feel in my mind on the spot.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'write' when referring to a topic is 'about'.

× I do not have any particular topics to write in a notebook and I feel writing what we feel in our mind feels very relaxed and stressed.

✓ I do not have any particular topics to write in a notebook and I feel writing what I feel in my mind feels very relaxing and relieving stress.

The pronouns 'we' and 'our' are inconsistent with the speaker's perspective; it should be 'I' and 'my'. Also, 'feels very relaxed and stressed' is incorrect; it should be 'feels very relaxing and relieving stress' to express the effect of writing.

× My main objective of writing every day like a journal is to improve my English fluency and I I think writing every day will definitely improve your writing skills and English fluency in one day, and it will definitely.

✓ My main objective of writing every day like a journal is to improve my English fluency and I think writing every day will definitely improve my writing skills and English fluency over time.

The modal verb 'will' is used correctly, but the phrase 'in one day' is unrealistic and inconsistent with the context; 'over time' is more appropriate. Also, 'your' should be 'my' to maintain consistency.

× I prefer handwriting in a notebook rather than typing because and writing is something which have I have been following for many years and writing enhance will improve your handwriting as well.

✓ I prefer handwriting in a notebook rather than typing because writing is something I have been following for many years and writing enhances and will improve your handwriting as well.

The sentence has pronoun and word order issues. 'have I have' is incorrect; it should be 'I have'. Also, 'writing enhance will improve' is incorrect; it should be 'writing enhances and will improve'. The conjunction 'and' is misplaced and should be corrected.

× I have been following journal writing from yesterday so I do not have a proper answer or a correct answer for the question you asked.

✓ I have started journal writing only yesterday, so I do not have a proper or correct answer for the question you asked.

The phrase 'have been following journal writing from yesterday' is awkward; 'have started journal writing only yesterday' is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'proper answer or a correct answer' is redundant; 'proper or correct answer' is better.

× Maybe I can just start this method from today I can include. Topic on my journal if.

✓ Maybe I can just start this method from today and include topics in my journal.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions. Combining the ideas with 'and' and correcting 'Topic on my journal' to 'include topics in my journal' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.