Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, use varied vocabulary to express your points naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, I write quite often. For instance, I maintain a diary where I note down important events and reminders to help me stay organized.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats similar ideas and lacks linking words. Try to combine your points using connectors and avoid redundancy. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express your thoughts.

Exemplo: I enjoy writing about my daily routine because it helps me remember important events, especially upcoming ones, ensuring I don't forget anything.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some repetition and filler words. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, clarify your points with specific examples.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe what I write can change over time because circumstances evolve. Therefore, I always prepare a backup plan to adapt to any unexpected changes.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but contains some repetition. Try to express your ideas more smoothly and use linking words to connect your points naturally.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting since I always carry a diary and pen in my bag, allowing me to write anytime, unlike typing which requires a laptop that I don't usually carry.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a smooth flow.

Exemplo: I often carry a diary to jot down important reminders, which helps me stay organized. I recommend everyone to keep a diary for better memory management.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats ideas and uses filler words. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, provide specific examples to enrich your response.

Exemplo: Besides writing, I record my life through photography and videography, as I enjoy capturing daily moments. Additionally, I sometimes write blogs to share my experiences.

× I keep notes of important events in my life.

✓ I keep notes of important events in my life.

No correction needed here as 'notes' and 'events' are correctly pluralized.

× I keep reminders.

✓ I keep reminders.

No correction needed; 'reminders' is correctly plural.

× I maintain a diary in which I put all the important necessary points which I need to remember.

✓ I maintain a diary in which I put all the important necessary points that I need to remember.

Use of 'that' instead of 'which' is more appropriate in restrictive clauses in English.

× I love to write about my daily routine.

✓ I love to write about my daily routine.

No correction needed; 'routine' is singular and used correctly.

× I keep notes of my important stuff, like if I have a an important event coming in the upcoming days, I try to write it down so every day I don't forget important stuff.

✓ I keep notes of my important stuff, like if I have an important event coming in the upcoming days, I try to write it down so every day I don't forget important stuff.

Removed the extra article 'a' before 'an important event' to correct article usage.

× Yes, I do think if I write something down, it would change in the future because time keeps on changing.

✓ Yes, I do think if I write something down, it will change in the future because time keeps on changing.

Use 'will' instead of 'would' to express future certainty in this context.

× So there there's there should be a backup ready for everything, for any small notice change.

✓ So there should be a backup ready for everything, for any small notice change.

Removed redundant words 'there's there' to correct sentence structure.

× I always prefer handwriting because I usually keep a diary along with a pen with me in my bag so I can I can write it anytime I like, whereas I don't usually carry my laptop with me so I prefer handwriting over typing.

✓ I always prefer handwriting because I usually keep a diary along with a pen in my bag so I can write anytime I like, whereas I don't usually carry my laptop with me, so I prefer handwriting over typing.

Removed redundant 'with me' and corrected comma usage for better sentence flow.

× It helps me stay focused and organised so it's a good.

✓ It helps me stay focused and organised, so it's good.

Removed incomplete phrase 'a good' and added comma for clarity.

× So other methods would include photography, videography. I have a strong interest in my photography skills and recording my daily to daily activities.

✓ So other methods would include photography and videography. I have a strong interest in my photography skills and recording my daily activities.

Added 'and' between 'photography' and 'videography' for correct list structure and removed redundant 'to daily'.