Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答有些语法错误和用词不当，比如“oppose reports”应为“compose reports”，建议注意词汇的准确性和句子结构的清晰。回答可以更简洁自然，避免冗余。

Exemplo: No, I don't write much in my free time, but writing is essential for my studies and work. For example, I often have to compose reports and emails, so I practice regularly to improve my skills.

Sugestão: 回答中有过多的语气词“umm”，影响流畅度。单词“summarises”应为“summaries”。建议减少语气词，使用正确词汇，并且句子结构更完整。

Exemplo: I enjoy writing reflections and summaries because they help me better understand and remember the material I've studied.

Sugestão: 回答较好，但“impress my thoughts”表达不准确，建议使用“express my thoughts”。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: The content I write now won't change, but I believe my writing skills will improve over time. For example, when I do similar tasks in the future, my previous writing will help me express my thoughts more clearly and creatively.

Sugestão: 回答结尾有多余的“and”，影响完整性。建议注意句子完整，避免语法错误。可以增加连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the feeling of holding a pen and writing on paper. Moreover, it helps me concentrate better and remember information more easily.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复词“maintaining maintaining”，且句子未完整结束。建议注意语法和句子完整性，避免重复。

Exemplo: I usually keep a diary once a week because I find it difficult to write every day due to my busy schedule. However, I think keeping a diary is very important as it helps me reflect on my experiences and organize my thoughts.

Sugestão: 回答中“share videos”应为“sharing videos”，句子末尾不完整。建议注意动词形式和句子完整性，避免句子断裂。

Exemplo: I often record my life on WeChat by posting photos and sharing videos on my Moments. However, I usually keep these posts private because I prefer to document my memories just for myself rather than sharing them with others.

× I often have to oppose reports and emails, so I will try to practice regularly to improve my skills.

✓ I often have to compose reports and emails, so I will try to practice regularly to improve my skills.

The verb 'oppose' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'compose' when referring to writing reports and emails. 'Oppose' means to resist or fight against, which does not fit the context.

× I enjoy writing umm, reflections and uh, summarises because they help me umm, better understand and remember the material I've studied umm.

✓ I enjoy writing umm, reflections and uh, summaries because they help me umm, better understand and remember the material I've studied umm.

The word 'summarises' is a verb form, but here a noun is needed. The correct noun is 'summaries' which refers to brief statements of the main points.

× I often record my life on WeChat by posting photos and share videos on my moments.

✓ I often record my life on WeChat by posting photos and sharing videos on my moments.

Parallel structure requires the verbs after 'by' to be in the same form. 'Posting' and 'sharing' are both gerunds, so 'share' should be changed to 'sharing'.

× However, I usually keep these posts private because I prefer to document my memories just for myself rather than sharing them with.

✓ However, I usually keep these posts private because I prefer to document my memories just for myself rather than sharing them with others.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'sharing them with' which is incomplete. The pronoun 'others' is needed to complete the comparison.

× It helps me concentrate better and remember information more easily and.

✓ It helps me concentrate better and remember information more easily.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'and' which makes it incomplete. Removing 'and' corrects the sentence.

× However, I think maintaining maintaining a diary is very important as it helps me reflect on my experiences and organize.

✓ However, I think maintaining a diary is very important as it helps me reflect on my experiences and organize my thoughts.

The word 'maintaining' is repeated twice by mistake. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'organize' which needs an object to complete the meaning, such as 'my thoughts'.