Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and has some redundancy. Try to be more concise and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Exemplo: I live in Kathmandu, where the weather is generally moderate. Winters are cold but comfortable since it doesn't snow here. Summers can be hot, but the climate remains pleasant overall. This weather allows a variety of foods to grow throughout the year.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Try to clearly state your preference and explain reasons with linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: I usually prefer hot weather because I can wear comfortable summer clothes. However, if it becomes extremely hot, I start to appreciate the cold winter season more because it feels refreshing.

Sugestão: Your answer has some hesitations and incomplete thoughts. Try to speak clearly and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because it usually happens in summer, which makes the environment very green and beautiful. The rain cools the air, making the weather feel fresh and pleasant.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going outside, especially when I plan to travel long distances or go out with friends. This helps me prepare for the weather conditions in advance.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to organize your ideas logically and complete your sentences. Use specific examples and linking words to explain the effects of climate change.

Exemplo: One major effect of climate change is increased pollution due to the growth of factories worldwide. This has caused sudden weather changes, such as unexpected rain in winter and unusual temperature fluctuations in summer.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Try to complete your sentences and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to visit places where it snows once a year because Kathmandu does not have snow, and I am curious to experience that kind of weather.

× A lot of foods grow here and.

✓ A lot of food grows here.

The word 'foods' is incorrect here; 'food' is an uncountable noun and should be singular. Also, the verb should agree with the singular noun, so 'grow' changes to 'grows'. The sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× Usually I like hot weather because in hot weather I can wear a lot of comfortable clothes and summer clothes are best to wear.

✓ Usually I like hot weather because in hot weather I can wear a lot of comfortable clothes, and summer clothes are the best to wear.

The phrase 'a lot of comfortable clothes' is acceptable, but adding a comma before 'and' improves clarity. Also, 'summer clothes are best to wear' should be 'summer clothes are the best to wear' to specify the superlative form correctly.

× But if the weather is too much and extreme hot then I feel like the cold season is.

✓ But if the weather is too extreme and hot, then I prefer the cold season.

The phrase 'too much and extreme hot' is incorrect; 'too extreme and hot' is better. The sentence 'I feel like the cold season is' is incomplete and unclear; it should be rephrased to express preference clearly.

× whenever it rains my like look sorry I leave it becomes too much green that it looks fantastically too beautiful.

✓ Whenever it rains, the place where I live becomes very green and looks fantastically beautiful.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and filler words like 'my like look sorry I leave'. It should be corrected to clearly state that the place becomes green and beautiful when it rains.

× I have a habit of checking the weather for scars.

✓ I have a habit of checking the weather forecasts.

The phrase 'weather for scars' is incorrect; the correct term is 'weather forecasts'. This is a prepositional and vocabulary error.

× I will take weather forecast and decide the things how the weather is will be there.

✓ I will check the weather forecast and decide what the weather will be like there.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Take weather forecast' is incorrect; 'check the weather forecast' is correct. Also, 'decide the things how the weather is will be there' is unclear and should be rephrased for clarity.

× One of the most like effects of climate change is pollution.

✓ One of the most significant effects of climate change is pollution.

The phrase 'most like effects' is incorrect. It should be 'most significant effects' or 'most important effects' to convey the intended meaning.

× a lot of factories are growing over years in many countries and places and it is affecting our climate a lot by now.

✓ A lot of factories have been increasing over the years in many countries and places, and it is affecting our climate a lot now.

The phrase 'factories are growing over years' is incorrect; 'factories have been increasing over the years' is better. Also, 'by now' is better replaced with 'now' for clarity.

× And we can see the sudden changes like in summer it can, in winter it is raining and in rainy.

✓ We can see sudden changes, like it being hot in summer, raining in winter, and unusual weather during the rainy season.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs to be restructured to clearly express the examples of sudden changes in weather.

× Yes, I really like to visit other cities from different climates like me.

✓ Yes, I really like to visit other cities with different climates from mine.

The phrase 'different climates like me' is incorrect. It should be 'different climates from mine' to correctly compare climates.

× Like I want to visit a place where it it's snow once a year because in Kathmandu there is no, like in our place it doesn't does not snow.

✓ I want to visit a place where it snows once a year because in Kathmandu, or in our area, it does not snow.

The phrase 'it it's snow' is incorrect; it should be 'it snows'. Also, 'doesn't does not' is redundant; only one negative form is needed.

× So I think I would like to visit those type of.

✓ So I think I would like to visit those types of places.

The phrase 'those type of' is incorrect; it should be 'those types of places' to complete the thought properly.