Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Start directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence. For example, mention the typical weather patterns and recent changes clearly.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is mostly sunny, but it can get quite cold sometimes. For instance, last week it rained a lot. Overall, the weather changes day by day, and now summer is approaching.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, use more precise vocabulary to describe your feelings about the weather.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel refreshed. In contrast, hot weather makes me uncomfortable due to excessive sweating and skin irritation.

Sugestão: Complete your sentences fully and avoid trailing off. Use linking words to connect your reasons clearly and provide specific examples to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy cooking snacks like pakoras and samosas during the rain. Additionally, rainy days are perfect for relaxing and spending quality time with my husband.

Sugestão: Try to speak more fluently without excessive hesitation. Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, use correct vocabulary and grammar for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because it helps me plan my outings. For example, if it is going to rain, I prepare accordingly before leaving the house.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to provide a full response with specific details and examples. Start with a clear topic sentence and explain the effects of climate change logically using linking words.

Exemplo: In my opinion, climate change has greatly affected human life by causing extreme weather events like floods and droughts, which disrupt agriculture and daily living.

Sugestão: Avoid unclear words and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear and complete answer with reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Although the future is unpredictable, I would like to visit cities with different climates. Experiencing various weather conditions can help me adapt better and improve my health.

× As I live in the hospital, so the weather of this area is very sunny, but uh, sometime it is too cold.

✓ As I live near the hospital, the weather in this area is very sunny, but sometimes it is too cold.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'hospital' when the intended meaning is proximity, so 'near' is more appropriate. Also, 'the weather of this area' should be 'the weather in this area' to correctly express location. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× And in a previous, uh, week it was the, uh, rainy.

✓ And in the previous week, it was rainy.

The phrase 'in a previous, uh, week' is awkward; 'in the previous week' is correct. Also, 'it was the, uh, rainy' is incorrect; 'it was rainy' is the proper past tense description of weather.

× So I think that the weather of my area is changed, uh, day by day and now the summer are coming, so it.

✓ So I think that the weather in my area changes day by day and now summer is coming.

'The weather ... is changed' is incorrect; 'weather changes' is the correct present tense form. 'The summer are coming' is wrong because 'summer' is singular and should be 'summer is coming'. Also, 'the weather of my area' should be 'the weather in my area'.

× Well, I love the cold weather because I feel very refreshed and uh, I if I talk about the hot weather then I feel very uncomfortable and also there is too much dining on my skin and too much sweating from my body.

✓ Well, I love the cold weather because I feel very refreshed, and if I talk about hot weather, then I feel very uncomfortable. Also, there is too much drying on my skin and too much sweating from my body.

'Dining' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'drying' to describe skin sensation. Also, 'if I talk about the hot weather then' needs commas for clarity. The phrase 'too much sweating from my body' is acceptable but could be better as 'I sweat a lot'.

× So I mostly like the cold weather as compared to hot 1.

✓ So I mostly like cold weather as compared to hot weather.

The phrase 'hot 1' is incorrect and likely a typo. 'Cold weather' and 'hot weather' should be used consistently without articles here.

× I mostly like the rainy weather which is a wet because at that time I cook various variety of dishes like pakoras, mosas et cetera.

✓ I mostly like rainy weather, which is wet, because at that time I cook a variety of dishes like pakoras, samosas, etc.

'Various variety' is redundant; 'a variety' is correct. 'Mosas' is likely a misspelling of 'samosas'. Also, 'the rainy weather which is a wet' is awkward; 'rainy weather, which is wet,' is better.

× Apart from this, it is the best time for me to spend some time with my husband in a relaxed way.

✓ Apart from this, it is the best time for me to spend some time with my husband in a relaxed manner.

'In a relaxed way' is acceptable but 'in a relaxed manner' is more formal and appropriate here.

× Definitely, I'm a person who checks the weather daily as, uh, it helps to, uh, it helps to aware me about my, uh, about the weather as sometime whenever we are decided to go out, then firstly I check the weather that hoise and if the weather is uh, dirty, like a rainy or something else.

✓ Definitely, I'm a person who checks the weather daily as it helps to make me aware of the weather. Sometimes, whenever we decide to go out, I first check the weather forecast, and if the weather is bad, like rainy or something else, I adjust my plans accordingly.

'It helps to aware me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'helps to make me aware' or 'helps me be aware'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'We are decided' is wrong; it should be 'we decide'. 'Check the weather that hoise' is unclear; likely meant 'check the weather forecast'. 'Dirty' is an incorrect adjective for weather; 'bad' or 'rainy' is better.

× In my perspective, the climate change has the biggest impact on the human life as a as the.

✓ From my perspective, climate change has the biggest impact on human life.

'In my perspective' should be 'From my perspective'. 'The climate change' is incorrect; 'climate change' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. The phrase 'as a as the' is incomplete and should be removed.

× Refugees unpredictable but if I get the opportunity to visit different climate then I would say yes as that I can experience other climate which helps to make my body more strong as that I can.

✓ It's unpredictable, but if I get the opportunity to visit a different climate, then I would say yes because I can experience other climates which help make my body stronger.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Refugees unpredictable' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'It's unpredictable' fits better. 'Different climate' should be 'a different climate'. 'Helps to make my body more strong' should be 'help make my body stronger'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.