Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Следует избегать избыточности и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи. Например, можно сказать: "Сегодня на улице очень жарко, около 23 градусов, и светит яркое солнце, что делает день очень приятным."

Exemplo: Today, the weather is quite hot, with temperatures around 23 degrees Celsius. Moreover, it's sunny, which makes it a very nice day to be outside.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать более точные слова и связки, а также избегать повторов. Например: "Я предпочитаю жаркую погоду, потому что в такие дни можно гулять с друзьями и пить прохладительные напитки."

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because on warm days, I can enjoy walking with my friends and drinking refreshing beverages.

Sugestão: Ответ неполный и содержит ошибки. Нужно завершать мысли и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Например: "Я предпочитаю сухую погоду, так как она более комфортна для активностей. Например, можно гулять с друзьями, и улицы не будут мокрыми."

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable for outdoor activities. For example, I can go for a walk with my friends without worrying about wet streets.

Sugestão: Ответ нечеткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует четко выразить частоту и использовать связки. Например: "Да, я обычно проверяю прогноз погоды, особенно перед выходными, когда планирую мероприятия."

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast, especially before weekends when I plan activities like going to the pool with my family.

Sugestão: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить больше конкретных примеров и связующих слов для улучшения связности. Например, добавить последствия для людей и природы.

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has caused more frequent and severe weather events, such as hurricanes and droughts. As a result, many communities have suffered damage, and ecosystems have been disrupted.

Sugestão: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует выразить мысль более понятно и логично. Например: "Да, я хотел бы посетить города с другим климатом, чтобы получить новый опыт и адаптироваться к разным условиям."

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be interesting to experience new environments and adapt to different weather conditions.

× Today is very hot because in the street we have 23° temperature and it's so sunny and good day.

✓ Today is very hot because on the street there is a temperature of 23° and it's such a sunny and good day.

The phrase 'in the street we have 23° temperature' is incorrect because 'temperature' is an uncountable noun and requires 'there is' to indicate existence. Also, 'in the street' should be 'on the street' as the correct preposition for location. 'It's so sunny and good day' lacks an article before 'good day' and 'so' should be 'such' before a noun phrase.

× Today is very hot because in the street we have 23° temperature and it's so sunny and good day.

✓ Today is very hot because on the street there is a temperature of 23° and it's such a sunny and good day.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'the street'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to streets or roads.

× Today is very hot because in the street we have 23° temperature and it's so sunny and good day.

✓ Today is very hot because on the street there is a temperature of 23° and it's such a sunny and good day.

'So' is incorrectly used before the noun phrase 'sunny and good day'; 'such' is the correct quantifier to modify noun phrases.

× You know, I prefer hot weather because in a hot weather days you can go to walk with your friends or you can drink fresh, fresh water or moquito.

✓ You know, I prefer hot weather because on hot weather days you can go for a walk with your friends or you can drink fresh, fresh water or mosquito.

'In a hot weather days' is incorrect; 'on hot weather days' is correct. Also, 'go to walk' should be 'go for a walk'. The word 'moquito' seems to be a misspelling or incorrect word; possibly 'mojito' or 'mosquito' was intended.

× You know, I prefer hot weather because in a hot weather days you can go to walk with your friends or you can drink fresh, fresh water or moquito.

✓ You know, I prefer hot weather because on hot weather days you can go for a walk with your friends or you can drink fresh, fresh water or mosquito.

'In' is incorrectly used with 'a hot weather days'; the correct preposition is 'on' for days.

× You know, I prefer hot weather because in a hot weather days you can go to walk with your friends or you can drink fresh, fresh water or moquito.

✓ You know, I prefer hot weather because on hot weather days you can go for a walk with your friends or you can drink fresh, fresh water or mosquito.

'Go to walk' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go for a walk'.

× You know, I prefer hot weather because in a hot weather days you can go to walk with your friends or you can drink fresh, fresh water or moquito.

✓ You know, I prefer hot weather because on hot weather days you can go for a walk with your friends or you can drink fresh, fresh water or mosquito.

'Days' is plural, so 'a hot weather days' is incorrect; 'hot weather days' without 'a' is correct.

× I prefer dry weather because this weather more comfortable for activities and for example you can go for a walk with your friends and in the street won't be.

✓ I prefer dry weather because this weather is more comfortable for activities and, for example, you can go for a walk with your friends and the street won't be wet.

The phrase 'in the street won't be' is incomplete and lacks clarity; it should specify what won't be in the street, e.g., 'the street won't be wet'. Also, missing verb 'is' after 'this weather'.

× I prefer dry weather because this weather more comfortable for activities and for example you can go for a walk with your friends and in the street won't be.

✓ I prefer dry weather because this weather is more comfortable for activities and, for example, you can go for a walk with your friends and the street won't be wet.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'this weather' and the last part is incomplete, making the sentence unclear and grammatically incorrect.

× Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast. I think rarely, but it can be often. For example, in this weekend I'm going to the pool with my family and I always, every day checking the weather.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast. I think rarely, but it can be often. For example, this weekend I'm going to the pool with my family and I always check the weather every day.

'In this weekend' is incorrect; 'this weekend' is correct. Also, 'I always, every day checking the weather' lacks the verb 'check' and proper word order; it should be 'I always check the weather every day'.

× For example, in this weekend I'm going to the pool with my family and I always, every day checking the weather.

✓ For example, this weekend I'm going to the pool with my family and I always check the weather every day.

'In this weekend' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted, so 'this weekend' is used without 'in'.

× I always, every day checking the weather.

✓ I always check the weather every day.

'Checking' is a present participle and cannot be used here without an auxiliary verb; the simple present 'check' is correct for habitual actions.

× Yes, I prefer to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because for me it's not so hard and I so like advertising and I can grow on there another climates from different other city.

✓ Yes, I prefer to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because for me it's not so hard and I really like advertising and I can grow there with different climates from other cities.

The phrase 'I so like advertising' is incorrect; 'really like' is appropriate. 'Grow on there another climates' is incorrect; 'grow there with different climates' is correct. 'Different other city' should be 'other cities' to match plural 'climates'.

× Yes, I prefer to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because for me it's not so hard and I so like advertising and I can grow on there another climates from different other city.

✓ Yes, I prefer to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because for me it's not so hard and I really like advertising and I can grow there with different climates from other cities.

'Another climates' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular countable nouns; 'different climates' is plural and does not need 'another'.

× Yes, I prefer to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because for me it's not so hard and I so like advertising and I can grow on there another climates from different other city.

✓ Yes, I prefer to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because for me it's not so hard and I really like advertising and I can grow there with different climates from other cities.

'Grow on there' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'grow there' without 'on'.