Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly describe the weather and avoid unrelated information. Use simple, clear sentences and provide specific details about the weather.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is usually very hot during the summer. For example, temperatures often reach above 40 degrees Celsius. Because of this, I always make sure to drink plenty of water to stay hydrated.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Clearly state your preference and give reasons using linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I don't have to worry about sweating. Also, I find it easier to sleep well when it's cool outside.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Clearly state your preference and explain why, using specific examples and linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the rain and the lush green environment it creates. For example, I would like to visit a rainforest and spend a month there to experience the wet climate.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and lacks structure. Directly answer the question and provide reasons with clear linking words.

Exemplo: I don't often check the weather forecast because I am busy taking care of my baby. However, sometimes I check it in the morning before leaving the house.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains errors. Use clear sentences, correct grammar, and specific examples to explain the effects of climate change.

Exemplo: I think climate change has caused the weather to become more extreme. For example, summers are much hotter now than before, and winters can be colder. This affects people's health and the environment.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I am planning to visit Georgia with my family for a few days to enjoy a cooler climate before returning to Riyadh for work.

× Shawnee here in the aisle with summer season.

✓ Shawnee is here in the aisle during the summer season.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'is' to form the present continuous tense. Adding 'is' correctly forms the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× So tomorrow.

✓ So, tomorrow,

The phrase 'So tomorrow.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be connected to the following sentence or expanded to form a complete thought.

× So I would be hydrated as well to prevent sick stroke.

✓ So I will be hydrated as well to prevent heat stroke.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used here; 'will' is appropriate to express future intention. Also, 'sick stroke' is incorrect; the correct term is 'heat stroke'.

× That's all.

✓ That's all.

This sentence is correct as a closing statement.

× As long preference and like already I don't have to worry about perspiring.

✓ As long as I prefer and like it, I don't have to worry about perspiring.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'as long as' and restructuring improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I'd like I'd like to sleep more often.

✓ I'd like to sleep more often.

The phrase 'I'd like' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the repetition corrects the sentence.

× I'm my friend, especially with the rainforest and I'd like to see some more open on mails and we might need something.

✓ I'm with my friend, especially in the rainforest, and I'd like to see more open areas on trails, and we might need something.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and prepositions, making it unclear. Correcting pronouns and prepositions clarifies the meaning.

× And I'd like to spend a month.

✓ I'd like to spend a month there.

Adding 'there' completes the sentence and clarifies the intended meaning.

× Of checking forecast I don't have the time actually I'm busy taking care of my baby so that's all I'm not leaving fan of browsing the weather forecast but I'm.

✓ Regarding checking the forecast, I don't have the time actually because I'm busy taking care of my baby, so that's all. I'm not a big fan of browsing the weather forecast.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains modal verb misuse. Restructuring and correcting modal verb usage improves clarity and grammar.

× Nowadays climate change has a huge impact, especially in the weather today.

✓ Nowadays, climate change has a huge impact, especially on the weather today.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on' is the correct preposition to use with 'impact'.

× Before as I remember it's not that hot but now extreme extremely hot which will attribute in hetero and if cold season.

✓ Before, as I remember, it wasn't that hot, but now it's extremely hot, which contributes to heat and cold seasons.

The original sentence has incorrect adjective and adverb usage and unclear phrasing. Correcting these improves meaning and grammar.

× I may be a couple of days I will stay.

✓ I may stay for a couple of days.

The original sentence misuses future tense and word order. Correcting the modal verb and sentence structure improves clarity.

× I will stay there.

✓ I will stay there.

This sentence is correct.

× But eventually after that one, we will return back to Riyadh to work.

✓ But eventually, after that, we will return to Riyadh to work.

The phrase 'return back' is redundant; 'return' alone is sufficient. Also, removing 'one' and adding commas improves sentence flow.