Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Votre réponse est naturelle mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et de cohérence. Par exemple, "talk and drinking" devrait être "talk and drink". Essayez d'utiliser des phrases complètes et correctes pour améliorer la fluidité.

Exemplo: I enjoy rainy weather because when it pours, my family and I sit at home, talk, drink hot tea, watch movies, and have a good time together.

Sugestão: Votre réponse manque de cohérence et contient des erreurs grammaticales, comme "it affect" au lieu de "it affects". Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus fluide et évitez les répétitions inutiles.

Exemplo: I usually don't like gloomy weather because it makes me feel depressed. However, sunny summer days make me happy and more relaxed because of the warmth and brightness.

Sugestão: Votre réponse contient des erreurs grammaticales et des phrases confuses, par exemple "I have go go out from house". Travaillez sur la structure des phrases et évitez les répétitions comme "the the".

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it keeps my clothes clean and comfortable. Also, my hair stays neat when I go outside, unlike in wet weather when I get drenched.

Sugestão: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais contient des répétitions et des erreurs, comme "I I will wear it". Essayez d'être plus clair et concis, et utilisez des mots de liaison pour améliorer la fluidité.

Exemplo: I usually check the weather forecast late at night to prepare my clothes for the next day, which helps me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

Sugestão: Votre réponse est difficile à comprendre à cause de la grammaire et du vocabulaire incorrects. Travaillez sur la structure des phrases et utilisez un vocabulaire précis pour exprimer vos idées clairement.

Exemplo: Climate change has badly affected our planet. The weather has become hotter, and we experience heavy rain almost every day. This also harms animals and plants.

Sugestão: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être améliorée en évitant les répétitions et en utilisant des phrases plus fluides. Par exemple, "Almost never" et "I almost see" sont maladroits.

Exemplo: I would like to visit cold countries with snowy winters because my hometown rarely has snow. I have only seen snow once in my life, and I want to experience it again.

× We sit at home with my family, talk and drinking hot tea, watching movies and having a good time together.

✓ We sit at home with my family, talk and drink hot tea, watch movies and have a good time together.

The verbs in the list should be in the base form to maintain parallel structure. Using 'drinking' breaks this parallelism. Replace 'drinking' with 'drink' to match 'talk' and 'watch'.

× Clouds and winds affect me in a large way.

✓ Clouds and winds affect me in a large way.

This sentence is correct in subject-verb agreement; 'Clouds and winds' is plural and 'affect' is the correct plural verb form. No correction needed here.

× In fact, in summer with the presence of sun, it affect me a lot by making me happy and more relaxed.

✓ In fact, in summer with the presence of the sun, it affects me a lot by making me happy and more relaxed.

The subject 'it' requires the third person singular verb form 'affects'. Also, 'the sun' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific sun.

× I actually preferred dry weather compared to the wet weather.

✓ I actually prefer dry weather compared to wet weather.

The question is about general preference, so present tense 'prefer' is appropriate instead of past tense 'preferred'.

× My hair would be in the same way that I have go go out from house while I hate to be drenched.

✓ My hair would be the same when I go out of the house, while I hate being drenched.

Incorrect prepositions and phrasing: 'in the same way that I have go go out from house' is incorrect. Use 'the same when I go out of the house'. Also, 'hate to be drenched' is better as 'hate being drenched'.

× I often check the weather forecast every night almost late, and that's for several reasons.

✓ I often check the weather forecast late every night, and that's for several reasons.

The phrase 'every night almost late' is awkward. 'Late every night' is clearer. No pronoun error here, but sentence structure improved.

× One of them is to prepare clothes that I I will wear it the next day and to make me comfortable more and more relaxed.

✓ One of them is to prepare clothes that I will wear the next day to make me more comfortable and relaxed.

Remove the repeated 'I'. The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary after 'wear'. Also, 'make me comfortable more and more relaxed' is awkward; better as 'make me more comfortable and relaxed'.

× Climate change effects badly our planet weather become more hotter than before, we have the the rain to crazy basically every day every year and the most is animals and plants.

✓ Climate change badly affects our planet; the weather has become hotter than before. We have crazy rain almost every day every year, and the most affected are animals and plants.

The original sentence is a run-on with incorrect word order and grammar. 'Effects' should be 'affects' as a verb. 'Weather become more hotter' should be 'weather has become hotter'. 'The the rain to crazy' is incorrect; corrected to 'crazy rain'. The last part is clarified to 'the most affected are animals and plants'.

× I like to visit cold countries where they have snow in the winter because in my hometown we don't have snowy days.

✓ I like to visit cold countries where there is snow in the winter because in my hometown we don't have snowy days.

Use 'there is' instead of 'they have' when referring to the existence of snow in a place.

× I almost see the snow once during my life and I want to see it again.

✓ I have seen snow only once in my life and I want to see it again.

Use present perfect 'have seen' to indicate experience up to now. 'Almost see' is incorrect; 'have seen' is appropriate.