Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'bring' nên là 'brings', 'contract' nên là 'contrast'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp để tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: In Vietnam, there are two main seasons: the dry season and the rainy season. During the dry season, the weather is hot and windy, while the rainy season brings heavy showers and high humidity. This contrast makes the climate quite diverse throughout the year.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'can't' nên là 'can'. Ngoài ra, nên thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because when it's hot, I feel uncomfortable and my skin often gets sunburned. In contrast, cold weather allows me to wear many layers of clothes, which I find cozy and enjoyable. Also, I can comfortably go out and enjoy outdoor activities without worrying about the heat.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'worry about getting wet or sleeping' không hợp lý. Bạn nên sửa lại câu và dùng từ phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is generally more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. For example, I find it easier to go outside and exercise without worrying about getting wet or feeling cold.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'if she said' nên là 'if she says', 'carry a number' không đúng nghĩa, nên là 'carry an umbrella'. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và chính xác.

Exemplo: No, I don't often check the weather forecast myself. Usually, my mom tells me about the weather before I go out. For example, if she says it's going to rain, I always carry an umbrella with me.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'become more and more hotter' nên là 'is becoming hotter and hotter'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên dài hơn và có thêm chi tiết cụ thể để thể hiện ý kiến rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: I have heard on the news that the weather is becoming hotter and more unpredictable in recent years. I think people should do more to protect the environment to reduce the effects of climate change.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, my biggest dream is to visit other cities or countries with different climates from where I live. When I go to new places, I will adapt to the weather and enjoy experiencing new environments.

× During the dry season, the weather is easily hot and windy, while the rainy season bring heavy showers and high humidity.

✓ During the dry season, the weather is easily hot and windy, while the rainy season brings heavy showers and high humidity.

The verb 'bring' should be in the third person singular form 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'rainy season'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English.

× This contract make climate quite diverse throughout the years.

✓ This contrast makes the climate quite diverse throughout the years.

The word 'contract' is incorrect; it should be 'contrast'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'contrast'. Additionally, 'climate' needs the definite article 'the' before it. This correction addresses singular/plural and article usage.

× I prefer dry weather because it's generally more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. For example, I find it easy to go outside and exercise without worry about getting wet or sleeping.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it's generally more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. For example, I find it easy to go outside and exercise without worrying about getting wet or slipping.

The phrase 'without worry about' is incorrect; it should be 'without worrying about' to use the gerund form after 'without'. Also, 'sleeping' is likely a mistake for 'slipping' or another verb related to wet conditions. 'Sleeping' does not fit the context.

× Usually my mom tells me about the weather before I go out. For example, if she said it's going to rain, I always carry a number with me.

✓ Usually my mom tells me about the weather before I go out. For example, if she says it's going to rain, I always carry an umbrella with me.

The verb tense should be present 'says' to match the habitual action. Also, 'carry a number' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'carry an umbrella'. This corrects pronoun and vocabulary usage.

× I hear the news on TV that the weather become more and more hotter.

✓ I hear the news on TV that the weather is becoming hotter and hotter.

The verb 'become' should be in the present continuous form 'is becoming' to indicate an ongoing change. Also, 'more and more hotter' is incorrect; 'hotter and hotter' is the correct comparative form.

× Yes, my biggest dream is visit other cities or country, then the that different climate change items. When I go to somewhere, I will adapt because I will, you see.

✓ Yes, my biggest dream is to visit other cities or countries that have different climates. When I go somewhere, I will adapt, you see.

The sentence has multiple structural errors: 'is visit' should be 'is to visit' (infinitive form), 'country' should be plural 'countries', 'then the that different climate change items' is unclear and removed for clarity, 'go to somewhere' should be 'go somewhere'. These corrections improve sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.