Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding filler words like 'like' and 'so'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar issues for clarity.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is quite extreme. Winters are very cold with heavy snowfall, while summers are unbearably hot. Overall, the climate has distinct seasons with sharp contrasts.

Sugestão: Avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to organize your answer clearly and include specific reasons to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because it allows me to stay cozy indoors. Additionally, I enjoy wearing warm clothes and eating seasonal snacks during winter, which makes the season more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Reduce filler words and repetitive phrases. Use clearer linking words to connect your ideas and provide more precise vocabulary to express your feelings.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because it helps soothe my dry skin. Moreover, the moisture in the air makes me feel calm and comfortable, so I find wet weather quite pleasant.

Sugestão: Make your answer more concise and structured by using linking words and avoiding unnecessary repetition. Clarify your routine clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every night before going to bed. This helps me decide what clothes to wear and prepare everything in advance, so I don't have to rush in the morning.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific examples or consequences of climate change.

Exemplo: Climate change has caused drastic weather shifts recently. Winters have become much colder, and summers are intensely hot, making it difficult for people to adapt. These changes negatively impact health and daily life.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Provide more detail about why you want to experience different climates.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit places with different climates. For example, I want to experience hot weather to understand what intense heat feels like and how people adapt to it.

× The place I am living right now, it snows like a lot so and in summers it's like crouching heat that's unbearable.

✓ The place I am living in right now, it snows a lot, and in summers there's scorching heat that's unbearable.

The phrase 'I am living' is acceptable as present continuous for current action, but the sentence structure is awkward and missing preposition 'in' after 'living'. Also, 'crouching heat' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'scorching'. Additionally, 'like a lot so and' is informal and ungrammatical; it should be 'it snows a lot, and'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× The place I am living right now, it snows like a lot so and in summers it's like crouching heat that's unbearable.

✓ The place I am living in right now, it snows a lot, and in summers there's scorching heat that's unbearable.

The verb 'living' requires the preposition 'in' to indicate location. Omitting 'in' before 'right now' makes the sentence ungrammatical. Adding 'in' clarifies the meaning.

× The place I am living right now, it snows like a lot so and in summers it's like crouching heat that's unbearable.

✓ The place I am living in right now, it snows a lot, and in summers there's scorching heat that's unbearable.

'Crouching' is incorrect here; the correct adjective to describe intense heat is 'scorching'. Using the correct adjective improves clarity and correctness.

× So I can say that winters are really cold and summers are really hot.

✓ So I can say that winters are really cold and summers are really hot.

No correction needed; 'winters' and 'summers' are correctly pluralized to refer to multiple seasons.

× The weather I like is the cold weather because we can remain cozy and be heated inside of our house and there are really many snacks that I like to have in winters and even I like to dress up in winter in those warm and cozy clothes so that's why I prefer.

✓ The weather I like is cold weather because we can remain cozy and be warm inside our house, and there are many snacks that I like to have in winter. I also like to dress up in warm and cozy clothes in winter, so that's why I prefer it.

The phrase 'inside of our house' is better as 'inside our house'. 'In winters' should be 'in winter' as a season is usually singular. 'Dress up in winter in those warm and cozy clothes' is awkward; reordering improves clarity. Also, 'be heated' is unnatural; 'be warm' is better.

× I love wet weather because I have like a really very dry skin and this wet weather makes my skin feel really very relaxed and it makes me feel calm because I don't have to worry about the moisture in my body.

✓ I love wet weather because I have very dry skin, and this wet weather makes my skin feel really relaxed. It also makes me feel calm because I don't have to worry about moisture in my body.

'Like a really very dry skin' is informal and redundant; 'very dry skin' is sufficient. 'The moisture' is unnecessary; 'moisture' without article is better. Sentence is split for clarity.

× So I will say that wet weather is the nice weather.

✓ So I will say that wet weather is nice weather.

Using 'the' before 'nice weather' is incorrect here because 'nice weather' is a general concept, not a specific instance. Removing 'the' is correct.

× I usually walk to my work so I have a habit or I prefer checking weather every night before I go to bed so that I have an idea that what kind of clothes I have to wear and what things I need to prepare beforehand so that I don't have to be around everywhere in the morning after seeing the weather.

✓ I usually walk to work, so I have a habit of checking the weather every night before I go to bed. This way, I have an idea of what kind of clothes I need to wear and what things I need to prepare beforehand, so I don't have to go everywhere in the morning after seeing the weather.

'Walk to my work' is better as 'walk to work'. 'Have a habit or I prefer checking weather' is awkward; 'have a habit of checking the weather' is correct. 'An idea that what kind' should be 'an idea of what kind'. 'Be around everywhere' is unclear; 'go everywhere' is better.

× The changes in climate had like is really very drastic.

✓ The changes in climate have been really drastic.

The original sentence mixes past tense 'had' with present perfect 'is'. The correct tense to describe recent changes is present perfect 'have been'. 'Like' is informal and unnecessary.

× The winters are being really very cold and the summers are intense hot.

✓ The winters have been really cold, and the summers have been intensely hot.

'Are being' is incorrect for describing weather; 'have been' is better for recent trends. 'Intense hot' is incorrect; the adverb 'intensely' should modify 'hot'.

× So it's unbearable for people to adapt this weather.

✓ So it's unbearable for people to adapt to this weather.

The verb 'adapt' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Omitting 'to' is incorrect.

× So climate change is having a really very bad impact now.

✓ So climate change is having a really bad impact now.

'Really very' is redundant; using either 'really' or 'very' is sufficient. Simplifying improves sentence clarity.

× I think this weather is really.

✓ I think this weather is really bad.

The sentence is incomplete; 'really' needs an adjective to complete the thought. Adding 'bad' completes the sentence.

× Yes, I would like to visit other place where they have like a different weather.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other places where they have different weather.

'Other place' should be plural 'other places' to match 'they have'. 'A different weather' is incorrect; 'different weather' without article is correct.

× Yes, I would like to visit other place where they have like a different weather.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other places where there is different weather.

Using 'they' to refer to 'places' is informal and less precise. Using 'there is' is better to describe weather conditions in places.

× Personally I would like to visit a place where it's hot so that I can have like an idea what an intense heat feels like.

✓ Personally, I would like to visit a place where it's hot so that I can get an idea of what intense heat feels like.

'Have an idea what' should be 'get an idea of what'. 'Like' is informal and unnecessary. 'An intense heat' should be 'intense heat' without article.