Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不够自然，建议简化句子并注意语法正确性。

Exemplo: I like living in sunny places because the sunshine helps me relax and feel comfortable.

Sugestão: 回答重复且表达不清晰，建议避免重复，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

Exemplo: I don't like very hot or very cold weather because both make me uncomfortable. However, if I have to choose, I prefer cold weather.

Sugestão: 表达不清楚，句子结构混乱，建议使用更具体的理由并避免重复。

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because wet weather can make me feel heavy and uncomfortable.

Sugestão: 句子结构不够连贯，表达不够自然，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day to see if it will be rainy or sunny. This helps me plan my activities.

Sugestão: 表达有语法错误且不够连贯，建议使用更准确的时态和连接词。

Exemplo: Many countries are concerned about climate change, especially global warming. Because of this, global temperatures have increased in recent years, making climate change an important environmental issue.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达并使用正确的句子结构。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because they might have beautiful landscapes that I want to see.

× I like to live in sunny areas because the sun in can help me reduce the stress so it can make me feel comfortable.

✓ I like living in sunny areas because the sun can help me reduce stress and make me feel comfortable.

动词后面接动名词形式更自然，'like living'比'to live'更符合习惯用法；'the sun in'中'in'多余，应去掉；'reduce the stress'中'the'不必要，改为'reduce stress'更通顺。

× Actually I I don't like the hot or cold or hot weather. Both of them I dislike.

✓ Actually, I don't like hot or cold weather. I dislike both of them.

句子中重复使用'or hot'多余，且句子结构不清晰，调整为更简洁的表达。

× So this because too cold and too hot makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ This is because being too cold or too hot makes me feel uncomfortable.

'So this because'结构不正确，应改为'This is because'；'too cold and too hot'前应加动名词'being'使句子完整。

× Actually I prefer dry weather because because if you live in the wet weather, actually there are something load on your shoulder.

✓ Actually, I prefer dry weather because if you live in wet weather, there is something heavy on your shoulder.

'something load'用词错误，应为'something heavy'；'the wet weather'中'the'不必要，改为'wet weather'；句子中重复使用'because'应去掉一个。

× Actually, yes, I have the habit to check the weather forecast every day because I will check the tomorrow weather, weather is rainy or sunny.

✓ Actually, yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast every day because I check the weather for tomorrow to see if it is rainy or sunny.

'have the habit to check'应改为'have the habit of checking'；'the tomorrow weather'中'the'不必要，且表达应为'the weather for tomorrow'；句子结构需调整使表达更自然。

× So I will according to the weather forecast. I will make the plan or test soon.

✓ So I will, according to the weather forecast, make plans or tests soon.

'will according to'结构错误，应调整为'will, according to'；'make the plan or test'表达不自然，改为'make plans or tests'更合适。

× Actually more and more country concerned the climate change problems such as global warming.

✓ Actually, more and more countries are concerned about climate change problems such as global warming.

'more and more country'应为复数'more and more countries'；'concerned'后应加介词'about'；句子缺少谓语动词，需补充。

× Because of global warming, the global temperature was increased in recent year.

✓ Because of global warming, the global temperature has increased in recent years.

'was increased'被动语态不合适，应为主动语态'has increased'；'in recent year'应为复数'in recent years'。

× So the climate change is important problems in environment.

✓ So climate change is an important problem in the environment.

'climate change'作为不可数名词，谓语应为单数；'important problems'应为单数'an important problem'；'in environment'前应加定冠词'the'。

× Actually, actually, yes, I would. I want to like to visit other cities have different climate change climate because maybe there are different land landscapes, which was so beautiful.

✓ Actually, yes, I would. I want to visit other cities that have different climates because there may be different landscapes, which are very beautiful.

去掉重复的'actually'；'want to like to visit'应简化为'want to visit'；'cities have'应为'cities that have'；'different climate change climate'表达重复，应为'different climates'；'land landscapes'多余，改为'landscapes'；'which was'应为'which are'。

× So I want to visit it.

✓ So I want to visit them.

前文提到的是'cities'复数，代词应使用复数'them'，而不是单数'it'。