Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和冗余。可以简洁地描述天气特点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

Exemplo: I live in Zhuhai, where the weather is quite hot, especially in summer when the heat lasts for about four months. During this time, I often feel tired and uncomfortable because of the high temperatures.

Sugestão: 回答应避免语法错误，使用恰当的连接词，并且表达更清晰。注意句子结构和词汇的准确使用。

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I currently live in a very hot area, which sometimes makes me feel uncomfortable. Cold weather allows me to wear more clothes and enjoy outdoor activities comfortably.

Sugestão: 回答中应注意语法和词汇的准确性，避免用词错误。句子应更连贯，表达更具体。

Exemplo: I definitely prefer dry weather because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities without being disturbed by humidity. Dry weather also makes summer feel cleaner and more comfortable.

Sugestão: 回答应更自然，避免语法错误和不连贯的表达。应具体说明习惯和原因。

Exemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but I do so occasionally, especially when I plan to travel to another city. I think it's important to check the forecast in advance to prepare properly.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整。应使用正确的词汇和句子结构，具体说明影响。

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has had significant effects on the environment and society. For example, we have witnessed frequent floods and storms that have caused serious damage to communities.

Sugestão: 回答应更流畅，注意语法和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Harbin because it has a different climate from my city. Harbin experiences four distinct seasons, and its summer is mild and not very hot, which I find appealing.

× Now I live in Zhuhai where the weather is sometimes hot during the year, especially at summer, the hot weather will keep four months.

✓ Now I live in Zhuhai where the weather is sometimes hot during the year, especially in summer, the hot weather lasts for four months.

“at summer”应改为“in summer”，因为表示月份或季节时用介词in；“will keep”不合适，描述持续时间应使用一般现在时“lasts”，表示习惯性或事实。

× Sometimes I feel tired during this period and uncomfortable.

✓ Sometimes I feel tired and uncomfortable during this period.

“tired during this period and uncomfortable”结构不清晰，应将“uncomfortable”与“tired”并列，且“during this period”放在句末更自然。

× Personally, I prefer cold weather because nowadays I live in the area where it's very hot there, therefore I sometimes feel uncomfortable in congestion.

✓ Personally, I prefer cold weather because nowadays I live in an area where it's very hot; therefore, I sometimes feel uncomfortable due to congestion.

“in congestion”用法不当，应改为“due to congestion”表示“因为拥挤”；“there”多余且重复。

× I prefer the cold weather they can allows me to wear more clothes and do some outdoor activities I.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it allows me to wear more clothes and do some outdoor activities.

“they can allows”主谓不一致且多余，“allows”前不需要“can”；句尾多余“I”；“the cold weather”前不需要定冠词。

× Definitely, I prefer dry weather because this weather allows me to do some outdoor activities without disrupt with humid weather.

✓ Definitely, I prefer dry weather because this weather allows me to do some outdoor activities without being disrupted by humid weather.

“disrupt with”用法错误，应使用被动结构“being disrupted by”表示“被……干扰”。

× Dry weather is a good way to afford a cleaning summer.

✓ Dry weather is a good way to have a clean summer.

“afford a cleaning summer”表达不当，应改为“have a clean summer”，且“cleaning”应为形容词“clean”。

× I only occasionally check it, for example when I need to plan a travel to other city.

✓ I only occasionally check it, for example when I need to plan a trip to another city.

“a travel”错误，travel是不可数名词，应使用“a trip”；“other city”应为“another city”。

× Checking forecast in advance is necessary and useful to prepare some more unnecessary.

✓ Checking the forecast in advance is necessary and useful to prepare better.

“some more unnecessary”无意义，应改为表达“更好地准备”，如“better”；“forecast”前应加定冠词“the”。

× In recent year, climate change has significantly effect on the environment and society.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had a significant effect on the environment and society.

“year”应为复数“years”；“has significantly effect”结构错误，应为“has had a significant effect”。

× Firstly, we have witness frequently and several of other events such as floods and jaws which have caused significant damage to our communities and.

✓ Firstly, we have frequently witnessed several events such as floods and storms which have caused significant damage to our communities.

“have witness”应为完成时态“have witnessed”；“jaws”应为“storms”或其他自然灾害词；句尾不完整，去掉“and”。

× Yes, I would like to visit Harbin where have different climates from where I live.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Harbin, which has a different climate from where I live.

“where have different climates”结构错误，应改为“which has a different climate”；“climates”应为单数“climate”。

× There are 4 distinctive climates during the year in Harbin, especially in summer the the weather is mild and not very hot.

✓ There are four distinct seasons during the year in Harbin; especially in summer, the weather is mild and not very hot.

“4 distinctive climates”表达不自然，改为“four distinct seasons”；“the the”重复，应删去一个。