Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Try to directly describe the weather with specific details and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Currently, we are in the rainy season, which makes the leaves look fresh and alive. Because of the rain, the weather feels soft and cool, creating a pleasant atmosphere.

Sugestão: Clarify your ideas and use more precise vocabulary. Explain why cold weather is preferable with clear reasons and examples, and avoid confusing statements about controlling weather.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because it is easier to stay comfortable by wearing warm clothes like cardigans. Unlike hot weather, which can be uncomfortable and hard to manage, cold weather allows me to adjust my clothing to suit the temperature.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary to express your ideas clearly. Provide specific reasons why wet weather is beneficial, and use linking words to connect your points.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because it helps plants grow, providing us with plenty of fresh vegetables and fruits. This abundance of food nourishes our bodies and keeps us healthy.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Clearly state your habit regarding weather forecasts and explain your reason with simple, direct sentences.

Exemplo: I usually do not check the weather forecast because there are others who handle it for me. Also, I am often busy and do not have time to look for weather updates.

Sugestão: Express your ideas more clearly and provide specific examples of human activities that cause climate change. Use linking words to make your answer logical and complete.

Exemplo: From my perspective, human activities like deforestation and pollution have affected the climate, leading to climate change. For example, cutting down trees reduces oxygen and increases carbon dioxide in the air.

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and fluent by using better sentence structure and vocabulary. Clearly express your interest in experiencing different climates and learning about them.

Exemplo: I would love to travel to different cities around the world to experience various climates. This way, I can learn about their weather and compare it with the climate where I live.

× you can see the way the leaves are looks alive

✓ you can see the way the leaves look alive

The verb 'look' should be in base form after 'leaves are' is incorrect; 'are' is unnecessary here. The correct structure is 'leaves look alive' because 'leaves' is plural and the verb should agree without 'are'.

× You see the soft softness of the weather and the, uh, how radiance the.

✓ You see the softness of the weather and how radiant it is.

The phrase 'soft softness' is redundant; 'softness' alone suffices. 'How radiance the' is incorrect; 'radiance' is a noun, but an adjective 'radiant' is needed here, and the sentence needs a subject 'it' to be complete.

× Yes, I preferred cold weather because one can control the weather, but that is not the same as hot weather.

✓ Yes, I prefer cold weather because one can control the weather, but that is not the same as hot weather.

The question is about preference in general, so present tense 'prefer' is appropriate instead of past tense 'preferred'.

× You can control cold weather by raining or putting up cardigan.

✓ You can control cold weather by wearing a cardigan or using heating.

'By raining' is incorrect because people cannot control weather by raining. 'Putting up cardigan' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'wearing a cardigan'. Also, 'using heating' is a better expression for controlling cold weather indoors.

× I prefer wet weather because the weather you are going to see enough of, uh, vegetables, fruit and so many other thing so that can be nourish our body.

✓ I prefer wet weather because you are going to see enough vegetables, fruit, and so many other things that can nourish our body.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'so many other'. Also, 'can be nourish' is incorrect; it should be 'can nourish'.

× No, it is not in my habit to be kicking or I or looking for weather in as much we have some people that they handle it so I don't have time to be looking for weather or how it look.

✓ No, it is not my habit to be checking or looking for the weather because we have some people who handle it, so I don't have time to look for the weather or how it looks.

'Kicking' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'checking'. 'Looking for weather in as much' is incorrect; 'because' or 'since' is better. 'They handle it' should be 'who handle it'. 'How it look' should be 'how it looks' for subject-verb agreement.

× For my own, uh, perspective, I don't really think anything much rather than human behavior, human behavior can affect, uh, the climate, which will lead to climate change.

✓ From my own perspective, I don't really think much other than human behavior affects the climate, which leads to climate change.

'For my own perspective' should be 'From my own perspective'. 'Anything much rather than' is awkward; 'much other than' is better. 'Human behavior can affect' should be 'human behavior affects' for clarity and tense consistency.

× So for example, there are something that human beings are doing.

✓ So, for example, there are some things that human beings are doing.

'There are something' is incorrect; 'something' is singular and does not agree with 'are'. The correct phrase is 'there are some things'.

× I would like to travel around the world to feel the climate and also to know about their weather so that I can know the difference between their weather and our own weather.

✓ I would like to travel around the world to experience the climate and also to learn about their weather so that I can know the difference between their weather and our own weather.

'Feel the climate' is awkward; 'experience the climate' is more natural. 'Know about their weather' is better expressed as 'learn about their weather'.