Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to provide a more detailed and natural response by including specific examples or effects of the hot weather, and avoid simply stating dislike without elaboration.

Exemplo: In my hometown, the weather is usually very hot, especially during the summer months, which makes outdoor activities quite challenging for me.

Sugestão: Improve coherence by using linking words and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your points with more specific reasons or examples.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable and allows me to enjoy outdoor activities without feeling exhausted. For example, I like going for walks in the crisp air, which is difficult during hot weather.

Sugestão: Clarify your ideas and use more precise vocabulary. Explain why wet weather feels refreshing and how it affects your activities, avoiding vague statements.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because the rain cools the air and makes the environment feel fresh. For instance, after a rainy day, the air smells clean and it's pleasant to relax indoors.

Sugestão: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Provide a clear answer about your habits and explain when and why you check the forecast, using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly, but when I notice extreme temperatures, like very hot or cold days, I check online to prepare accordingly.

Sugestão: Focus on clarity and accuracy. Use correct grammar and provide specific examples of climate change effects, linking your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I think climate change has caused longer periods of hot weather in recent years, making summers hotter and more uncomfortable than before.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and coherence. Use linking words and provide more details about why you prefer visiting these places and what you enjoy there.

Exemplo: Since my hometown is very hot, I like to visit northern cities with cooler climates during my summer vacations to relax and enjoy the peaceful environment.

× The reason is the cold weather is very comfortable for us, We are very easy to stay indoors, and in hot weather it is very difficult to stay outdoors for long periods, so I also prefer to stay indoor.

✓ The reason is the cold weather is very comfortable for us, we find it very easy to stay indoors, and in hot weather it is very difficult to stay outdoors for long periods, so I also prefer to stay indoors.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'We are very easy to stay indoors' which is ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'we find it very easy to stay indoors' to properly convey the meaning. Also, 'stay indoor' should be 'stay indoors' because 'indoors' is an adverb indicating location.

× In my opinion, I prefer the wet weather because in wet weather we feel comfortable and refreshing and we can survive long time at indoors.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer wet weather because in wet weather we feel comfortable and refreshed and we can survive a long time indoors.

The phrase 'the wet weather' is incorrect here because 'wet weather' is a general concept and does not require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'refreshing' should be 'refreshed' to describe how we feel. 'Survive long time at indoors' is incorrect; it should be 'survive a long time indoors' without 'at' and with the article 'a' before 'long time'.

× Well, it is not my habit to check the weather forecast, but in too hot or too cold days and I also feel hot or cold.

✓ Well, it is not my habit to check the weather forecast, but on very hot or very cold days when I also feel hot or cold, I check it.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'In too hot or too cold days' should be 'on very hot or very cold days'. Also, the sentence lacks a main verb for the second clause. Adding 'when I also feel hot or cold, I check it' completes the thought and uses the modal verb correctly.

× So I also check the weather on Internet that hot temperature is going now.

✓ So I also check the weather on the Internet to see if the temperature is high now.

The phrase 'on Internet' should be 'on the Internet' because 'Internet' requires the definite article. 'That hot temperature is going now' is ungrammatical; it should be 'to see if the temperature is high now' to express the intended meaning in present tense.

× Well, I believe the fact of climate change in recent years was that the whole days spent more time than the cold days.

✓ Well, I believe the fact of climate change in recent years is that the warm days have lasted longer than the cold days.

The original sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'was' and 'spent' when referring to recent years, which should be present perfect or present tense. 'The whole days spent more time than the cold days' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'the warm days have lasted longer than the cold days' to clearly express the idea.

× So the weather was very heat and uncomfortable nowadays.

✓ So the weather is very hot and uncomfortable nowadays.

'Heat' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe 'weather'. The correct adjective is 'hot'. Also, 'was' should be 'is' because 'nowadays' refers to the present time.

× Well, in my hometown the weather was very hot and uncomfortable and when I have summer vacations from my busy work, I visit northern areas for refreshment and getting peace.

✓ Well, in my hometown the weather is very hot and uncomfortable, and when I have summer vacations from my busy work, I visit northern areas for refreshment and to get peace.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with present tense 'have' and 'visit'. Since the question is general, present tense should be used consistently. Also, 'getting peace' should be 'to get peace' to correctly express purpose.