Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and awkward phrasing.

Exemplo: Today, the weather is sunny and warm, around 25 degrees Celsius. Because of this pleasant weather, many people go to the beach to relax, which is unusual for this time of year.

Sugestão: Make sure to complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Use more precise vocabulary and avoid incomplete thoughts.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because it lets me wear light and comfortable clothes. Moreover, I enjoy outdoor activities like swimming and going to the beach when it's warm.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and well-structured. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and add a linking phrase to enhance coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it encourages me to be more active. For instance, when it's dry, I often go jogging in the park or visit the beach with friends, which helps me stay healthy and relaxed. In contrast, wet weather tends to be uncomfortable and discourages outdoor activities.

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more precise in your explanation.

Exemplo: Yes, I always check the weather forecast before leaving the house in the morning. Additionally, when I'm out walking or with friends, I check it again to plan my activities for the rest of the day.

Sugestão: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Provide more specific examples and use linking words to explain the effects clearly.

Exemplo: I believe climate change has caused more frequent hurricanes and tsunamis in recent years. As a result, people pay closer attention to weather forecasts to stay safe and prepare for extreme weather events.

Sugestão: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Avoid contradictory statements and use linking words to organise your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Absolutely, I would love to visit countries with climates different from mine, such as Australia or the United States. I am interested in experiencing both hot weather and snowfall, which are rare where I live.

× The weather is sunny today like 25° in Celsius is really a good weather and people tend to go to the beach and relax because of this lovely weather today we don't usually have it, but today is a lovely.

✓ The weather is sunny today, about 25° Celsius, which is really good weather, and people tend to go to the beach and relax because of this lovely weather. We don't usually have it, but today is lovely.

The phrase 'like 25° in Celsius' is an incorrect use of quantifiers and measurement expressions; 'about 25° Celsius' is more appropriate. Also, 'a good weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. The sentence was also run-on and needed punctuation for clarity.

× I actually prefer hot weather because it allows me to wear simple and lovely dress.

✓ I actually prefer hot weather because it allows me to wear simple and lovely dresses.

The word 'dress' should be plural 'dresses' because it refers to clothing in general, which is countable and plural in this context.

× I don't like putting on much clothes and when I have hot weather I tend to do more of outdoor activities like going to swim, hanging out in a beach and.

✓ I don't like putting on many clothes, and when the weather is hot, I tend to do more outdoor activities like swimming and hanging out at the beach.

'Much clothes' is incorrect; 'many clothes' is correct because 'clothes' is countable plural. 'Going to swim' should be 'swimming' to correctly use the gerund form. 'Hanging out in a beach' should be 'hanging out at the beach' because 'at' is the correct preposition for locations like 'the beach'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring.

× Absolutely. I always check the weather report before leaving the house in the morning, and when I'm out in the walk or maybe hanging out with my friends, I do check it too to see whether how the weather is going to be for the remaining hours of the day since I know how to reschedule my activities.

✓ Absolutely. I always check the weather report before leaving the house in the morning, and when I'm out walking or hanging out with my friends, I check it too to see how the weather is going to be for the remaining hours of the day since I know how to reschedule my activities.

The phrase 'out in the walk' is incorrect; it should be 'out walking' to correctly express the activity. Also, 'whether how' is redundant; 'how' alone suffices.

× I believe the effects of climate change currently has been the hurricane and tsunami, so because of that people tend to always listen to weather forecast reports to know how, umm, the weather is gonna always be.

✓ I believe the effects of climate change currently have been hurricanes and tsunamis, so because of that, people tend to always listen to weather forecast reports to know how the weather is going to be.

'Effects' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' not 'has'. Also, 'the hurricane and tsunami' should be plural 'hurricanes and tsunamis' to match the plural subject. 'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech.

× Absolutely, I would love to visit other countries that their climate change are quite different from mine and such places like American like Australia. I hate their umm climate are always on high, the temperature is always high and also experienced snow falls.

✓ Absolutely, I would love to visit other countries whose climates are quite different from mine, such as America and Australia. I dislike their climates because the temperature is always high, and they also experience snowfall.

The phrase 'countries that their climate change are' is incorrect; it should be 'countries whose climates are' to correctly use the relative pronoun. 'American like Australia' is incorrect; it should be 'such as America and Australia'. 'I hate their umm climate are always on high' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'I dislike their climates because the temperature is always high'. 'Experienced snow falls' should be 'experience snowfall'.