Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence about the weather, followed by specific details, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: The weather in my city is usually clear and mild. We rarely experience snow or strong winds, which makes it a comfortable place to live.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more structured and detailed. Start with a clear preference, then explain reasons with specific examples, and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy wearing light clothes like shorts. Additionally, I love summer events such as going to the beach, which makes hot weather more enjoyable for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contradictory. Make sure to clearly state your preference and explain why, using specific reasons and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable for me. Wet weather makes my hair frizzy, which I find difficult to manage.

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant information but needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then explain why and how often, using linking words and specific details.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning because the weather in Japan changes frequently during this season. Some days are hot, others are cold or rainy, so it's important to be prepared.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state your opinion about climate change effects, explain with specific reasons, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather recently. For example, using air conditioners frequently increases electricity consumption, which harms the environment.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more organised and grammatically correct. Start with a clear statement, then provide specific reasons and examples, using linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in Canada because it has a dry climate, unlike Japan which is quite wet. I also enjoy the long daylight hours in summer, as it stays bright until 10 PM.

× My city almost clearly so they don't.

✓ My city is almost always clear, so we don't have bad weather.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject-verb-object structure and is confusing. The correction provides a clear sentence structure with subject, verb, and complement, making the meaning understandable.

× We don't have any snowing or really so strong wind.

✓ We don't have any snow or really strong wind.

'Snowing' is a verb form and should be replaced with the noun 'snow'. Also, 'so strong wind' is incorrect; 'really strong wind' is appropriate without 'so'. The definite article is not needed here.

× So it's really good temperature.

✓ So the temperature is really good.

'Good temperature' needs an article 'the' before 'temperature' and the sentence structure is improved by placing the verb 'is' after the subject.

× So it's appropriate, appropriate, appropriate place to live.

✓ So it's an appropriate place to live.

Repetition of 'appropriate' is unnecessary and 'place' requires the indefinite article 'an' before it.

× I love hot weather because I like the clothes like Cam solo short pants so and also I love summer event like ocean view or yeah, that's why I love it.

✓ I love hot weather because I like clothes like casual shorts, and I also love summer events like going to the ocean view. That's why I love it.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns and awkward phrasing. 'Cam solo short pants' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'casual shorts'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× I love dry weather in Japanese, absolutely wet weather, but it's so hard for me because my hair is not like straight so I don't like dry weather.

✓ I love dry weather. In Japan, it's absolutely wet weather, but it's hard for me because my hair is not straight, so I don't like wet weather.

The original sentence is confusing and has incorrect conjunction use. It is split into clearer sentences and corrected for logical meaning and conjunction use.

× Every morning I check today's weather, cause in this season we have our Japan's temperature and weather is often changed like someday it's really hot, some days really cold and also raining some and really clearly.

✓ Every morning I check today's weather because in this season, Japan's temperature and weather often change. Some days it's really hot, some days really cold, and sometimes it rains or is very clear.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. 'Cause' is replaced with 'because' for formality. 'Our Japan's temperature' is incorrect; 'Japan's temperature' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× One reason is I use a air conditioner a lot of times it's it's important for our lives, but it's not good for environment because it uses a lot of electricals, electronic.

✓ One reason is that I use the air conditioner a lot of times. It's important for our lives, but it's not good for the environment because it uses a lot of electricity.

The article 'a' before 'air conditioner' should be 'the' as it refers to a specific item. 'Electricals, electronic' is incorrect; 'electricity' is the correct noun. The sentence is split for clarity and corrected for quantifier and article use.

× So it's have a bad word.

✓ So it has a bad effect.

'It's have' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it has'. 'Bad word' is incorrect in this context; 'bad effect' or 'negative impact' is appropriate.

× Yeah, I want to live in Canada. It's not other city, but in Japanese it's wet weather, so I don't like it.

✓ Yeah, I want to live in Canada. It's not just another city, but in Japan, the weather is wet, so I don't like it.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'It's not other city' is corrected to 'It's not just another city'. 'In Japanese' is corrected to 'in Japan'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× But in Canada it's really dry weather and the temperature is good for me.

✓ But in Canada, the weather is really dry and the temperature is good for me.

'It's really dry weather' is awkward; 'the weather is really dry' is correct. A comma is added after 'Canada' for correct punctuation.

× And also in only summer day it's so bright outside at 10:00 PM.

✓ Also, in summer days, it's so bright outside even at 10:00 PM.

'In only summer day' is incorrect; 'in summer days' or 'during summer days' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.