Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, start with 'The weather in my town, Mehlana, is usually very hot during summer.' Then add details like 'This often causes heat storms, which many people dislike.'

Exemplo: The weather in my town, Mehlana, is usually very hot during summer. This often causes heat storms, which many people dislike, especially since it is near Sonipat city where temperatures rise significantly.

Sugestão: Provide a clear preference with reasons and avoid confusing sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' properly. For example, say 'I prefer cold weather because I was born in a cold season. Also, summers cause tanning, which I dislike.'

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I was born in a cold season. Also, summers cause tanning, which I dislike, whereas cold weather feels refreshing and comfortable.

Sugestão: Good attempt to add personal details. Improve coherence by using linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Also, avoid repetition. For example, 'I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the rain. For example, I sometimes take a bath during the rainy season, and my mother cooks pakodas, which I love.'

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the rain. For example, I sometimes take a bath during the rainy season, and my mother cooks pakodas, which makes the season special.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer clearly with linking words. Correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, 'Yes, I check the weather forecast daily because my family are farmers. My father monitors it closely to protect our crops from heavy rain.'

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast daily because my family are farmers. My father monitors it closely to protect our crops from heavy rain, so I usually spend some time checking it every day.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clarity and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to explain effects clearly. For example, 'Climate change affects both humans and animals. Recently, summers have become more intense, causing discomfort due to extreme heat.'

Exemplo: Climate change affects both humans and animals. Recently, summers have become more intense, causing discomfort due to extreme heat and health problems.

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more coherent and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'. For example, 'Yes, I would love to visit other cities. For instance, I want to visit Kashmir because I want to experience rainfall and snow, which we don't have in my hot town.'

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit other cities. For instance, I want to visit Kashmir because I want to experience rainfall and snow, which we don't have in my hot town. It would be fun to enjoy this with my family.

× The town where I live is summer.

✓ The town where I live is hot in summer.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is summer' to describe the town's weather. 'Summer' is a season, not a state of the town. The correct structure is to say the town is hot in summer, using 'is' to describe the condition during the season.

× Nowadays summer is the main cause of heat storm whereas I live in the town Mehlana and the city near Sonipat is very hot and nobody like hot weather these days.

✓ Nowadays, summer is the main cause of heat storms. I live in the town Mehlana, and the city near Sonipat is very hot. Nobody likes hot weather these days.

The sentence is a run-on and uses 'like' instead of 'likes' for the third person singular subject 'nobody'. Also, 'heat storm' should be plural 'heat storms' to indicate multiple occurrences. Breaking into shorter sentences improves clarity.

× I preferably enjoy cold weather because I was also born in cold weather and I don't like summers because during summers every individual got tanning and some blackness whereas cold weather is very good as we always need hot.

✓ I prefer to enjoy cold weather because I was also born in cold weather, and I don't like summers because during summers every individual gets tanning and some darkening of the skin, whereas cold weather is very good as we always need warmth.

'Preferably' is an adverb and incorrectly used; 'prefer to enjoy' or simply 'prefer' is correct. 'Got' should be 'gets' to agree with 'every individual' (third person singular). 'Blackness' is better expressed as 'darkening of the skin'. Also, 'we always need hot' is unclear; 'we always need warmth' is more appropriate.

× I'm a fan of wet weather because during rainy seasons I also enjoy the rain and sometime I usually take a bath during the rainy seasons.

✓ I'm a fan of wet weather because during rainy seasons I enjoy the rain, and sometimes I usually take a bath during the rainy seasons.

The adverb 'sometimes' was misspelled as 'sometime' and should be placed before the verb 'take'. Also, 'usually' and 'sometimes' together can be confusing; it's better to use one adverb to clarify frequency.

× Rain is my favorite season and during rainy season my mother cook some pakodas during the rain.

✓ Rainy season is my favorite season, and during the rainy season my mother cooks some pakodas.

'Rain' is not a season; 'rainy season' is correct. 'My mother cook' should be 'my mother cooks' to agree with third person singular. Also, 'during the rain' is redundant after 'during the rainy season' and can be omitted.

× Yes, absolutely. I have a habit for checking the weather forecast because we belong to a farmer family and my father always check the weather forecast because our crops will be damaged if there will be much rain and I searched at least two hours daily.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have a habit of checking the weather forecast because we belong to a farmer family, and my father always checks the weather forecast because our crops will be damaged if there is too much rain. I check it at least two hours daily.

'Habit for' should be 'habit of'. 'My father always check' should be 'my father always checks' for subject-verb agreement. 'If there will be much rain' is incorrect; 'if there is too much rain' is correct. 'I searched' is past tense and inconsistent; 'I check' is present tense and appropriate here.

× Climate change effects humans as well as animals. Recently the summer seasons are more more hectic as they provide very much slight to people.

✓ Climate change affects humans as well as animals. Recently, the summer seasons have become more hectic as they cause a lot of discomfort to people.

'Effects' is a noun; the verb should be 'affects'. 'More more' is a repetition error. 'Provide very much slight' is incorrect; 'cause a lot of discomfort' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, absolutely I love to visit other cities. I like to visit Kashmir as I want to see the rainfall as well as snow. Nowadays in our town there is very summer so I want to visit Kashmir. It is full of fun and enjoyment with my family also.

✓ Yes, absolutely, I love to visit other cities. I like to visit Kashmir as I want to see the rainfall as well as snow. Nowadays, in our town, it is very hot in summer, so I want to visit Kashmir. It is full of fun and enjoyment with my family as well.

'There is very summer' is incorrect; it should be 'it is very hot in summer'. 'With my family also' is better expressed as 'with my family as well' for natural English phrasing.