Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer with fewer hesitations and more precise vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: I live in Tabriz, where the weather is mostly cold. However, during the summer, it becomes warm for a short period. Overall, the climate is steady and comfortable, which I enjoy.

Sugestão: Focus on organizing your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' properly. Avoid filler words and complete your sentences fully to sound more natural.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I can enjoy activities like making snowmen and meeting friends for coffee. However, sometimes I catch a cold, but I manage it well. Overall, cold weather suits me better than hot weather.

Sugestão: Make your answer more specific and complete. Avoid repeating similar phrases and explain why you like wet weather with clear reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because I find it romantic and refreshing. It improves my mood and helps me feel positive. The sound of rain creates a peaceful atmosphere that I enjoy.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly. Avoid unnecessary phrases and filler words. Explain your opinion with specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I usually do not check the weather forecast because I find it unimportant. In my opinion, it does not affect my daily plans much, so I prefer to decide based on how I feel each day.

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and complete answer with specific examples. Use correct vocabulary and grammar to explain the effects of climate change. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: I think climate change has caused more air pollution and unpredictable weather patterns in recent years. This affects our health and environment negatively, leading to problems like extreme temperatures and poor air quality.

Sugestão: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and express your plans clearly.

Exemplo: I enjoy experiencing different climates and would like to visit other cities. Although I currently face some challenges, I plan to save money and travel to explore new weather conditions, which I find important.

× Currently, I live in Tabriz and overall the weather is cold, but it's just gets, uh, warm, uh, in a period of time in the summer.

✓ Currently, I live in Tabriz and overall the weather is cold, but it just gets warm during a period of time in the summer.

The phrase 'it's just gets' is incorrect because 'gets' is a verb and should not be preceded by 'it's' (it is). The correct form is 'it just gets' without 'is'. This is a verb + -ing form issue where the auxiliary verb is misused.

× But other days the temperature is this long and uh, we have a steady weather and uh, in from my, from my Pacific, uh, I think, uh, it is so good.

✓ But other days the temperature is like this and we have steady weather and from my perspective, I think it is so good.

The phrase 'in from my, from my Pacific' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'from my perspective'. Also, 'a steady weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and articles.

× I prefer, uh, cold weather because I have opportunity to, uh, make a snowman and it is so beneficial for me because I can go out and drink some coffee with my friends and hang out with them.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I have the opportunity to make a snowman and it is so beneficial for me because I can go out and drink some coffee with my friends and hang out with them.

The phrase 'I have opportunity' is missing the article 'the'. This is an article error related to modal verb usage context.

× Actually I'm not in a habit of checking the weather forecast because I don't have any enthusiasm about it and due to it's so in my opinion it's not essential and it's a minor things and from my Pacific it doesn't impact in my life, you know.

✓ Actually, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast because I don't have any enthusiasm about it and in my opinion, it's not essential and it's a minor thing and from my perspective it doesn't impact my life, you know.

The phrase 'in a habit' should be 'in the habit'. 'Due to it's so' is incorrect and should be omitted or rephrased. 'From my Pacific' should be 'from my perspective'. Also, 'impact in my life' should be 'impact my life'. These are incorrect uses of prepositions and articles.

× When I look at my circumference, I see that currently the air pollution illustrates that the weather is change all days and overall the trend of actually weather is something that impact on our.

✓ When I look at my surroundings, I see that currently the air pollution shows that the weather changes every day and overall the trend of the weather is something that impacts us.

'Circumference' is incorrect; the correct word is 'surroundings'. 'Weather is change all days' should be 'weather changes every day' to use correct present tense. 'Impact on our' is incomplete and should be 'impacts us'. These are present tense and vocabulary errors.

× I love the different sort of weathers and I want to migrate to other countries to see their weather.

✓ I love different sorts of weather and I want to migrate to other countries to see their weather.

'Different sort of weathers' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and should not be pluralized. The correct phrase is 'different sorts of weather'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and pluralization.

× Strangely I don't have a suitable position for migrate, but if I solve my issues I and I gain some money.

✓ Strangely, I don't have a suitable position to migrate, but if I solve my issues and gain some money,

The phrase 'position for migrate' is incorrect; it should be 'position to migrate'. Also, the sentence structure is incomplete and needs correction. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure error.