Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question first, then add a reason with clear sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and improve natural phrasing.

Exemplo: The weather in Winnipeg is quite cold for most of the year, but I really enjoy the summer season because it's warm and sunny.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating similar points.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities, unlike cold weather which can be limiting.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words and correct sentence structure to improve clarity.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather since it's easier and safer to commute to work, whereas wet weather can be slippery and dangerous.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use correct verb forms and avoid filler words for a more natural response.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, usually in the early morning and again at night before going to bed.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically, use linking words, and provide specific examples to support your points.

Exemplo: I think climate change has caused increased air pollution because many people use their own vehicles, which also contributes to noise in urban areas.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on clear sentence structure, avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy experiencing new natural scenery and exploring places with warm summers.

× I like a summer season where I live as I live in a Winnipeg, so that's why I like a summer.

✓ I like the summer season where I live as I live in Winnipeg, so that's why I like summer.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'summer season' and 'Winnipeg'. 'Summer season' is a specific season, so 'the' is appropriate. Also, 'Winnipeg' is a proper noun and does not require an article.

× I mostly prefer hot weather because we're in the summer season. We can do outdoor activities also as compared to the cold weather.

✓ I mostly prefer hot weather because we're in the summer season. We can also do outdoor activities compared to cold weather.

The phrase 'as compared to the cold weather' is awkward; 'compared to cold weather' is more natural. Also, 'the cold weather' can be simplified to 'cold weather' when speaking generally.

× I prefer dry weather because indeed dry weather it's easy for me to go to my work as compared to the wet weather because in the wet weather there is a too much slippery.

✓ I prefer dry weather because indeed dry weather makes it easy for me to go to work compared to wet weather, as wet weather is too slippery.

The phrase 'go to my work' should be 'go to work' as 'work' is uncountable here. 'As compared to' is better as 'compared to'. 'There is a too much slippery' is incorrect; 'wet weather is too slippery' is correct.

× Yes, I have a habit to checking the weather every day.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather every day.

The phrase 'have a habit to checking' is incorrect. The correct form is 'have a habit of' followed by the gerund 'checking'.

× I mostly check the weather in the early of the morning and as well also uh, when I was on when I am on the bed at the night time.

✓ I mostly check the weather early in the morning and also when I am in bed at night.

'In the early of the morning' should be 'early in the morning'. 'When I was on when I am on the bed' is confusing; 'when I am in bed' is correct. 'At the night time' should be 'at night'.

× Uh, I saw there are many changes in the climate, like mostly people use their own vehicle. So that's why they, uh, the air is a more polluted and the area are too much noisy.

✓ Uh, I saw there are many changes in the climate, like mostly people use their own vehicles. So that's why the air is more polluted and the area is too noisy.

'Vehicle' should be plural 'vehicles' to agree with 'people'. 'The air is a more polluted' should be 'the air is more polluted'. 'The area are too much noisy' should be 'the area is too noisy'.

× Yes, I love to explore a different cities where the client where the climate is a very different from my cities because I want to capture the nature view and also also visit a different places where I saw a summer.

✓ Yes, I love to explore different cities where the climate is very different from my city because I want to capture the natural view and also visit different places where I saw summer.

'A different cities' is incorrect; 'different cities' is correct. 'The client' should be 'the climate'. 'My cities' should be 'my city'. 'Nature view' should be 'natural view'. 'A different places' should be 'different places'. 'Where I saw a summer' should be 'where I saw summer'.