Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'just' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use more precise vocabulary such as 'various types of weather' instead of 'all kinds of weathers'. Finally, correct minor errors like 'four season count city' to 'a city with four distinct seasons'.

Exemplo: I live in Tehran, Iran, which is known as a city with four distinct seasons. I experience various types of weather, including rainy, sunny, and cloudy days. However, from my experience, most days are sunny with clear skies.

Sugestão: Focus on clarity and grammar. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'under a containers'. Use correct verb forms and sentence structures. For example, say 'I am known as a cold weather lover' and explain your preferences clearly.

Exemplo: I am known as a cold weather lover because I prefer temperatures around 15°C in the summer. In winter, I like to keep my windows open to enjoy the fresh, cold air.

Sugestão: Improve vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases like 'red feather' and 'gets colder very harder'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, explain why wet weather can be harder to live in with clear reasons.

Exemplo: I like both dry and wet weather equally, but wet weather can be more challenging because it often feels colder and makes activities like swimming impractical.

Sugestão: Reduce filler words and improve fluency by combining sentences smoothly. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to connect ideas. Also, use more natural phrases such as 'weather forecast' instead of 'weather broadcast'.

Exemplo: I usually don't check the weather forecast, but I do when I'm going on a trip or hiking with friends because it's important to know the conditions.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structures. For example, say 'coastal cities are at risk of flooding' instead of 'going on the water'. Also, use linking words like 'for example' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: There are many effects of climate change. For example, coastal cities are at risk of flooding in the coming decades. Currently, I have noticed much less snow in my area compared to when I was a child, which could be a sign of climate change.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'counted as my main purpose' and 'go through a place'. Use clearer expressions and link your ideas logically. For example, explain that climate is not your main reason for visiting but you appreciate certain climates.

Exemplo: Visiting cities with different climates is not my main reason for traveling. However, I would like to visit cold places like Finland because I enjoy the cold weather and the northern lights.

× I live in Tehran, Iran, which is said to be a four season count city.

✓ I live in Tehran, Iran, which is said to be a four-season country city.

The phrase 'four season count city' contains plural and word choice errors. 'Season' should be pluralized as 'four-season' to describe the type of city, and 'count' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'country'. The correct phrase is 'four-season country city' meaning a city in a country with four seasons.

× I get to experience all kinds of weathers such as rainy, sunny, uh, just cloudy.

✓ I get to experience all kinds of weather such as rainy, sunny, and just cloudy.

The word 'weathers' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, the list should be connected properly with 'and' before the last item.

× Everyone know me as a cold weather lover, so because I just uh, I'm constantly under a containers in the summer, uh, to be as cold as possible, about 15°C and in the winter I always have my windows open to get the cold air in.

✓ Everyone knows me as a cold weather lover, so because I just uh, I'm constantly under air conditioners in the summer, uh, to be as cold as possible, about 15°C, and in the winter I always have my windows open to get the cold air in.

The verb 'know' should be 'knows' to agree with the singular subject 'Everyone' (subject-verb agreement). 'Containers' is incorrect; the intended word is 'air conditioners' (plural). Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses.

× I like them equally, I don't really care about them, but red feather could be a little bit harder to live in because, uh, an area which whether it's wet gets colder very harder.

✓ I like them equally, I don't really care about them, but red weather could be a little bit harder to live in because, uh, an area where the weather is wet gets colder much more quickly.

'Red feather' is a mishearing or typo for 'red weather' or 'wet weather'. 'Whether' is incorrect; the correct word is 'weather'. 'Gets colder very harder' is incorrect; it should be 'gets colder much more quickly' or 'gets much colder'. The sentence also needs restructuring for clarity.

× We can just blow out some air and be cooled off and swimming becomes unusable, impractical.

✓ We can just blow out some air and be cooled off, and swimming becomes unusable and impractical.

The sentence lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Adding 'and' before 'swimming' and between 'unusable' and 'impractical' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I'm not that kind of person at all. Maybe just for example, when I'm going on a trip or I'm hiking with my friends, uh, that could be a good reason for me to check the weather broadcast and, uh, predictions.

✓ I'm not that kind of person at all. Maybe, for example, when I'm going on a trip or hiking with my friends, that could be a good reason for me to check the weather forecast and predictions.

'Weather broadcast' is incorrect; the correct term is 'weather forecast'. Also, 'just for example' should be 'for example' and the sentence is smoother without 'I'm' before 'hiking'.

× There are many effects, the main one being coastal cities going on the water in a few decades, but if talking about now, I can see by myself that there is much less snow in my area compared to when I was a kid, so it could be a potential climate change effect.

✓ There are many effects, the main one being coastal cities going underwater in a few decades, but if talking about now, I can see for myself that there is much less snow in my area compared to when I was a kid, so it could be a potential effect of climate change.

The phrase 'going on the water' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'going underwater'. 'I can see by myself' should be 'I can see for myself'. Also, 'climate change effect' is better phrased as 'effect of climate change'.

× I don't think I counted as my main purpose of visiting other cities, but it could be uh. Some places like Finland, uh, are pretty cold and have auras, which I really love.

✓ I don't think I count it as my main purpose for visiting other cities, but it could be, uh, some places like Finland, uh, are pretty cold and have auroras, which I really love.

'Counted' should be 'count' to match present tense. 'As my main purpose of visiting' should be 'as my main purpose for visiting'. 'Auras' is incorrect; the correct word is 'auroras' referring to the northern lights.