Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应更直接描述当地天气状况，避免无关内容和语法错误。可以用简洁句子描述天气特点，避免重复和不完整表达。

Exemplo: The weather where I live is usually warm and sunny during the summer. It is comfortable because I can wear light clothes and enjoy outdoor activities.

Sugestão: 回答较好，但应注意语法准确性，如“makes my feel”应为“makes me feel”。可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because it makes me feel relaxed and comfortable. Moreover, I don't have to wear heavy coats, so I can move around easily and enjoy outdoor activities.

Sugestão: 回答中出现矛盾（“which is very comfortable”应为“不舒服”），需注意表达准确。语法错误较多，建议多练习句子结构。

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because I don't like getting wet. When it rains, my clothes and shoes get soaked, which is uncomfortable. Also, it takes a long time to dry them, so dry weather is more convenient for me.

Sugestão: 回答中有词汇错误（如“rests”应为“rains”，“forest”应为“forecast”），影响理解。建议注意词汇准确性和时态一致。

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because the weather here is often unpredictable. Sometimes it rains unexpectedly, even when the forecast says it will be sunny. So, I check the forecast regularly, sometimes even every hour.

Sugestão: 表达不够清晰，语法和词汇错误较多。建议学习如何用简单句准确表达观点，并使用正确的词汇。

Exemplo: In my opinion, climate change causes extreme weather around the world. For example, this summer is hotter than previous years.

Sugestão: 回答结构清晰，表达较好。可以增加连接词使句子更流畅，注意冠词使用，如“different climate”应为“different climates”。

Exemplo: Actually, I have never visited other countries or cities with different climates from my own. However, if I have the opportunity, I would like to visit such places because it would be interesting to experience new weather and culture.

× I like summer because I can wear the beautiful skirt and shirt to walk on the road and the summer is warm and hot.

✓ I like summer because I can wear beautiful skirts and shirts to walk on the road, and the summer is warm and hot.

这里“skirt”和“shirt”应使用复数形式，因为通常穿多件衣服。英语中可数名词在泛指时应使用复数形式。

× I like the way it's more reli.

✓ I like the way it's more relaxing.

“reli”不是正确的单词，应该使用形容词“relaxing”来表达“放松的感觉”。

× Actually, I prefer hot weather because for example, in summer the warmth makes my feel more relaxed and comfortable.

✓ Actually, I prefer hot weather because, for example, in summer the warmth makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable.

“my”是形容词性物主代词，不能用作动词的宾语，正确用法是“me”。

× Also, I don't need to wear heavy coats, which makes it easier to move around and enjoy outdoor activities.

✓ Also, I don't need to wear heavy coats, which makes it easier to move around and enjoy outdoor activities.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× I prefer dry weather because I don't like getting wet. When it rains, my shoes and pants often become soaked, which is very comfortable.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I don't like getting wet. When it rains, my shoes and pants often become soaked, which is very uncomfortable.

原句中“which is very comfortable”与上下文意思矛盾，应为“uncomfortable”，表示“很不舒服”。

× Also, it takes time to dry my clothes and shoes, so dry weather is much more convenient for me and I really doesn't like use the dryer.

✓ Also, it takes time to dry my clothes and shoes, so dry weather is much more convenient for me and I really don't like to use the dryer.

主语“I”对应的助动词应为“don't”而非“doesn't”，且“like”后面应接动词不定式“to use”。

× Yes, I checked the weather forecast every day because the weather in my city is often unpredictable.

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because the weather in my city is often unpredictable.

描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，“checked”是过去式，不符合语境。

× Sometimes it rests unexpectedly, even when the forecast said it will be sunny.

✓ Sometimes it rains unexpectedly, even when the forecast says it will be sunny.

“rests”应为“rains”，表示“下雨”；“said”应为“says”，保持时态一致。

× Therefore, I'd like to check the forest regularly, sometimes even every hour.

✓ Therefore, I'd like to check the forecast regularly, sometimes even every hour.

“forest”应为“forecast”，表示“天气预报”。

× From my perspective, the climate change can make some extremely weathers in the world or in the every corner.

✓ From my perspective, climate change can cause some extreme weather events in the world or in every corner.

“climate change”不可加冠词“the”；“extremely weathers”应为“extreme weather events”，天气不可数名词，需用合适表达。

× Like I think a summer is too hotter than before I in this year.

✓ I think this summer is hotter than before.

“too hotter”是错误的比较级表达，应为“hotter”；句子结构混乱，需简化为正确表达。

× Actually, I have never visited other countries or cities with different climate from my own.

✓ Actually, I have never visited other countries or cities with a different climate from my own.

“different climate”前应加不定冠词“a”，表示“不同的气候”。