Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: The weather in Melbourne is quite changeable; I can experience all four seasons in one day. For example, although it's spring now, the temperature is a bit colder than in previous years. However, there are also sunny periods during the day.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Exemplo: I prefer moderate weather because I don't like it when it's too cold or too hot. For instance, a temperature around 25 degrees Celsius is ideal for me.

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly and provide specific examples.

Exemplo: Generally, I prefer wet weather, especially light rain, because it feels refreshing. However, I don't like heavy rain or storms as they can be dangerous and inconvenient.

Sugestão: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar. Use linking words to explain your habits clearly and keep your answer concise.

Exemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly. However, if I'm planning to go for a walk or a trip, I always check it beforehand to make sure I dress appropriately and feel comfortable.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Avoid incomplete sentences and explain your ideas with specific examples. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has had significant effects, mainly caused by environmental pollution. For example, increased pollution has led to more extreme weather events and changes in local ecosystems.

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'have an kitten'. Make your answer more natural and specific by explaining why you want to visit snowy places.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I would like to visit cities with snowy climates because I haven't experienced snow much. It would be exciting to try winter activities and enjoy a completely different environment.

× Oh, at the moment I can experience or see all Four Seasons within one day because I'm living in Melbourne These days, although it's spring, the weather is bit cold than previous years, but sometimes it's sunny as well, so it.

✓ Oh, at the moment I can experience or see all Four Seasons within one day because I live in Melbourne these days. Although it's spring, the weather is a bit colder than in previous years, but sometimes it's sunny as well.

The phrase 'I'm living' should be 'I live' because 'live' is a stative verb and generally not used in the present continuous for permanent or habitual situations. Also, 'weather is bit cold than previous years' is incorrect; it should be 'weather is a bit colder than in previous years' to correctly use comparative form and include the article 'a' and preposition 'in'. The sentence was also split for clarity and correctness.

× Although it's spring, the weather is bit cold than previous years, but sometimes it's sunny as well, so it.

✓ Although it's spring, the weather is a bit colder than in previous years, but sometimes it's sunny as well.

The phrase 'bit cold' is missing the article 'a' and the comparative form 'colder' is needed to compare the weather to previous years. Also, 'than previous years' requires the preposition 'in' to be grammatically correct.

× Most of the time I prefer a wet weather than a dry weather.

✓ Most of the time I prefer wet weather to dry weather.

The word 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article like 'a'. Also, the correct preposition to use with 'prefer' when comparing two things is 'to', not 'than'.

× I would say I do not have a habit of checking with the frequently, but if we are going for a walk or maybe a trip I will check the weather prediction so we can plan our trip ahead so we can feel comfortable.

✓ I would say I do not have a habit of checking it frequently, but if we are going for a walk or maybe a trip, I will check the weather forecast so we can plan our trip ahead and feel comfortable.

The phrase 'checking with the frequently' is incorrect; it should be 'checking it frequently'. Also, 'weather prediction' is better expressed as 'weather forecast'. Added commas for clarity and corrected conjunction usage.

× Yeah, in recent years we have experienced a big and climate change.

✓ Yeah, in recent years we have experienced big climate change.

The phrase 'a big and climate change' is incorrect; 'climate change' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. The word 'and' is unnecessary here.

× It's mainly due to the environment pollution as I believe because of that climate change, most of the environment has changed and it has become more pollutant than before and even.

✓ It's mainly due to environmental pollution, I believe, because of that climate change. Most of the environment has changed and it has become more polluted than before.

'Environment pollution' should be 'environmental pollution' as an adjective is needed. 'More pollutant' should be 'more polluted' to correctly use the adjective form. The sentence was also split for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, definitely. I like to visit some places with snow because I haven't experienced that, uh, condition much, so I think it gives us a different experience and we can have an kitten.

✓ Yes, definitely. I would like to visit some places with snow because I haven't experienced that condition much, so I think it would give us a different experience and we can have a kitten.

'I like to visit' is better as 'I would like to visit' to express desire. 'An kitten' is incorrect; it should be 'a kitten' because 'kitten' starts with a consonant sound. Also, 'that, uh, condition' is better without the filler 'uh' for clarity.