Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'moisty' và 'musty'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại thông tin không cần thiết. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến việc sử dụng thì và số nhiều đúng cách.

Exemplo: Currently, winter has started in my city. The weather is a mix of dry, cold, and humid conditions. In the morning, it often rains and feels damp, but in the afternoon, it becomes warm and sunny. By evening, the temperature drops to around 20°C and the air turns dry.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'it make' nên là 'it makes'. Câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và liên kết các ý một cách mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I dislike feeling sweaty and uncomfortable in hot weather. During winter, the air feels fresher and cleaner, which I enjoy. Additionally, I love celebrating festivals like Christmas and Lunar New Year, which makes winter my favorite season.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'is can easy to live' và 'maybe create many disease'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng trình bày ý tưởng rõ ràng và logic hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather, although it can sometimes make my skin feel rough. Dry weather is generally easier to live in because wet conditions often lead to illnesses and make the environment feel unclean.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'when I'm travel' nên là 'when I travel'. Câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast. However, when I travel or go on a tour, I check it to avoid storms or bad weather. This helps me plan my trips better and ensures they go smoothly.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác như 'There's have been', 'turning dose of floods'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: There have been many effects of climate change recently. In some parts of my country, we experience five to seven storms a year, which often cause severe floods. This situation makes me feel sad and worried for the affected people. I believe we need to reduce natural disasters and promote environmental recycling.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều và danh từ đếm được, ví dụ 'different country or city' nên là 'different countries or cities'. Câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và cấu trúc câu mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Of course, I would love to visit different countries or cities because I want to learn more about their cultures, climates, and natural environments. Each place has its unique climate, so I'm excited to experience the fresh air and beautiful scenery.

× Right now in my city the winter season start.

✓ Right now in my city the winter season starts.

The verb 'start' should be in the third person singular present tense 'starts' to agree with the singular subject 'winter season'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× It's combined a dry, cold and moisty.

✓ It's a combination of dry, cold, and moist weather.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'combined' and 'moisty' (which is not a correct word). The correction uses 'combination' as a noun and replaces 'moisty' with 'moist', which is the correct adjective.

× In the morning it will be raining and musty, but in the afternoon it can be warm and have sunny for the last day.

✓ In the morning it will be raining and musty, but in the afternoon it can be warm and sunny for the last day.

The phrase 'have sunny' is incorrect; 'sunny' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'have'. Also, 'musty' is likely a misuse here; however, since it is not in the problem list, it is left as is.

× In the evening it will be cold up 20° and dry.

✓ In the evening it will be cold, around 20°, and dry.

The phrase 'cold up 20°' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'around' or 'about' to indicate approximate temperature.

× I prefer cold weather more because I hate the feeling of wet and sweaty shirt and sometimes it make my skin moist.

✓ I prefer cold weather more because I hate the feeling of wet and sweaty shirts and sometimes it makes my skin moist.

The noun 'shirt' should be plural 'shirts' to match the general feeling described. Also, the verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Beside, I also like celebrate Christmas or lunar new year so that's the reason why I prefer winter more.

✓ Besides, I also like to celebrate Christmas or Lunar New Year, so that's the reason why I prefer winter more.

The word 'Beside' should be 'Besides' as an adverb meaning 'in addition'. Also, 'like celebrate' should be 'like to celebrate' to correctly use the verb. A comma is added before 'so' to separate clauses.

× The dry weather is can easy to live.

✓ The dry weather is easy to live in.

The phrase 'is can easy to live' is incorrect. The modal verb 'can' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'easy to live in' with the preposition 'in'.

× If you live in the wet weather often you can sick and maybe create many disease and sometimes it's make me feel dirty in the air and around me too.

✓ If you live in wet weather often, you can get sick and maybe develop many diseases, and sometimes it makes me feel dirty in the air and around me too.

The verb 'can sick' is incorrect; it should be 'can get sick'. 'Create many disease' should be 'develop many diseases'. Also, 'it's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× No, actually I'm not the person who's kind of checking the weather forecast, but sometimes when I'm travel and have a tour, I will check the weather forecast to avoid the storm or bad weather.

✓ No, actually I'm not the person who is kind of checking the weather forecast, but sometimes when I travel and have a tour, I will check the weather forecast to avoid storms or bad weather.

The phrase 'who's kind of checking' is awkward; 'who is kind of checking' is clearer. 'When I'm travel' should be 'when I travel'. Also, 'the storm' is better as 'storms' in general.

× It's helped me a lot to make my travel totally complete become.

✓ It has helped me a lot to make my travel completely successful.

'It's helped' should be 'It has helped' for clarity. The phrase 'make my travel totally complete become' is ungrammatical; 'make my travel completely successful' is a clearer expression.

× There's have been many effects of climate change in recent years.

✓ There have been many effects of climate change in recent years.

The phrase 'There's have been' is incorrect. The correct form is 'There have been' to indicate plural subject 'effects'.

× In some areas in my country in one year you can have like 5 or 7 storms including turning dose of floods that make me feel so sad and worried about the people who live in these areas.

✓ In some areas in my country, in one year you can have like 5 or 7 storms including a number of floods that make me feel so sad and worried about the people who live in these areas.

'Turning dose of floods' is incorrect; 'a number of floods' is a better phrase. Also, a comma is added after 'country' for clarity.

× For me, we need to decrease natural disaster and make the environment more recycled nowadays.

✓ For me, we need to reduce natural disasters and make the environment more sustainable nowadays.

'Decrease natural disaster' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'reduce' and the noun should be plural 'disasters'. 'Make the environment more recycled' is awkward; 'more sustainable' is a better phrase.

× Of course, I would love to visit different country or city because I'd like to know more about the cultural, the climate or the nature of many city out there.

✓ Of course, I would love to visit different countries or cities because I'd like to know more about the culture, the climate, or the nature of many cities out there.

'Different country or city' should be plural 'countries or cities' to match the context. 'The cultural' should be 'the culture'. 'Many city' should be 'many cities'.

× Each of country have different climates, so I'm very excited to see and enjoy the air and the view of nature out there.

✓ Each country has different climates, so I'm very excited to see and enjoy the air and the view of nature out there.

'Each of country' is incorrect; it should be 'Each country'. The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'Each country'.