Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and repetition such as 'with with'. Also, make your answer clearer and more direct by describing the weather specifically and explaining the influence on people more coherently. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: The weather in my hometown is generally pleasant and calm, which attracts many people to live there because of its peaceful atmosphere.

Sugestão: Reduce the use of filler words like 'umm' and avoid redundancy. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'as' to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I find winter very cosy; I enjoy wrapping myself in a blanket and drinking tea or coffee indoors, which helps me relax.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'sounds of friends'. Be more specific and coherent by explaining what you enjoy about wet weather. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the sound of rain, which is very relaxing. After the rain, I also love the fresh smell of wet stones and roads.

Sugestão: Avoid informal language like 'Yeah' and unclear phrases such as 'that 22 on to make in to'. Provide a clear and direct answer with specific details about when and how often you check the forecast. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I regularly check the weather forecast because the weather in my hometown is unpredictable. I usually check it every morning to plan my day accordingly.

Sugestão: Try to give at least a basic opinion or general idea about the topic instead of saying you don't know. Avoid filler words and express your thoughts clearly and confidently.

Exemplo: Although I don't know much about climate change, I believe it has caused more extreme weather events recently, and I would like to learn more about its effects in the future.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and repetition. Use a clear topic sentence and provide specific details about your experiences or feelings. Replace vague phrases like 'tangible weather' with clearer descriptions.

Exemplo: Yes, I often visit cities with different climates, and I am always amazed by how different the weather feels compared to my hometown.

× The weather in my hometown is quite pleasant, calm and peaceful with with UMM influence many people to live in.

✓ The weather in my hometown is quite pleasant, calm and peaceful, which influences many people to live there.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'with with UMM influence many people to live in.' The preposition 'with' is misused here, and the phrase is unclear. Replacing it with 'which influences many people to live there' correctly connects the ideas and uses the appropriate preposition 'there' to indicate location.

× I prefer cold weather over hot Umm because I love winter seasons umm due to the fact that it is very umm cosy day and we can be a in a blanket wrapping it around us and also having some tea and coffee umm in the room without having any stress.

✓ I prefer cold weather over hot because I love winter seasons due to the fact that the days are very cosy, and we can wrap ourselves in a blanket and also have some tea or coffee in the room without any stress.

The original sentence has issues with quantifiers and article usage such as 'it is very umm cosy day' which should be 'the days are very cosy' to correctly quantify and refer to plural days. Also, 'we can be a in a blanket wrapping it around us' is awkward; it is corrected to 'we can wrap ourselves in a blanket' for clarity and correctness.

× I prefer cold weather over hot Umm because I love winter seasons umm due to the fact that it is very umm cosy day and we can be a in a blanket wrapping it around us and also having some tea and coffee umm in the room without having any stress.

✓ I prefer cold weather over hot because I love winter seasons due to the fact that the days are very cosy, and we can wrap ourselves in a blanket and also have some tea or coffee in the room without any stress.

The phrase 'we can be a in a blanket wrapping it around us' incorrectly uses pronouns and articles. It should be 'we can wrap ourselves in a blanket' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun 'ourselves' and proper verb structure.

× I would prefer umm, wet weather because I love when it rains and I love the sounds of friends.

✓ I would prefer wet weather because I love when it rains and I love the sounds of raindrops.

The phrase 'sounds of friends' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or misuse. It should be 'sounds of raindrops' or 'sounds of rain' to make sense in context.

× Also it is very relaxed and coming umm, the after the rain I I love the smell of uh, stones and roads.

✓ Also, it is very relaxing, and after the rain, I love the smell of stones and roads.

The phrase 'it is very relaxed' is incorrect; 'relaxing' is the correct adjective to describe the weather. 'Coming umm, the after the rain' is awkward and corrected to 'after the rain' for proper prepositional use and clarity.

× Yeah, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast because in my hometown the weather is unpredictable. So we have to check in the weather forecast that 22 on to make in to ensure the weather is good or not.

✓ Yeah, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast because in my hometown the weather is unpredictable. So we have to check the weather forecast to ensure whether the weather is good or not.

The phrase 'check in the weather forecast that 22 on to make in to ensure' is unclear and contains incorrect prepositions and extra words. It is corrected to 'check the weather forecast to ensure whether the weather is good or not' for clarity and correct preposition use.

× Umm, actually I don't have most information about this topic, but in the future I would love to explore this kind of umm, questions.

✓ Umm, actually I don't have much information about this topic, but in the future I would love to explore these kinds of questions.

The phrase 'most information' is incorrect; 'much information' is the correct quantifier for uncountable nouns. Also, 'this kind of umm, questions' should be 'these kinds of questions' to agree in number and use the correct demonstrative pronoun.

× Yeah, I I do visit more often to other cities that have, umm, different climates from where I live, and I sometimes feel so amazed by the, umm, tangible weather.

✓ Yeah, I do visit other cities that have different climates from where I live more often, and I sometimes feel amazed by the tangible weather.

The phrase 'visit more often to other cities' incorrectly uses the preposition 'to' and awkward word order. It is corrected to 'visit other cities more often' for proper verb and preposition use. Also, 'feel so amazed' is simplified to 'feel amazed' for natural expression.