Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence about the weather, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is Mediterranean. In summer, it gets very hot, which can be uncomfortable. However, spring is quite pleasant with mild temperatures and gentle breezes.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details connected by linking words. Also, clarify your points and avoid repetition and filler words.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because it allows me to wear stylish clothes and enjoy shopping for unique winter items. Additionally, I feel more comfortable and active outdoors during colder seasons.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Focus on giving a direct response with clear reasons and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because it is common in coastal regions where I enjoy spending time. Also, the moisture helps keep my hair healthy and looking good.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Start with a direct statement about your habit, then explain why, using linking words. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I usually don't check the weather forecast because I prefer to enjoy the weather as it comes. Also, I find forecasts are sometimes unreliable, so I like to be spontaneous with my plans.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and specific details. Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain the effects of climate change with examples, using linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Climate change has affected people's behavior and increased air pollution. For instance, in Mediterranean regions, winters have become warmer, which impacts local lifestyles and the environment.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations. Provide a clear response with reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with polar climates because walking and exploring there would give me new experiences. I believe traveling to such places would broaden my understanding of different environments.

× The weather of my country is Mediterranean climate, which is actually in summer, it's so hot and you can extend the, the weather because it's really hard.

✓ The weather of my country is a Mediterranean climate, which is actually hot in summer, and you can feel the heat because it's really intense.

The phrase 'Mediterranean climate' requires the article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun. Also, 'it's so hot' is better expressed as 'hot in summer' for clarity. The phrase 'you can extend the weather' is incorrect; it should be 'you can feel the heat' or similar. The original sentence had plural and article issues affecting clarity.

× And on the other hand, in the spring is, is it, uh, very good weather.

✓ And on the other hand, in the spring, the weather is very good.

The sentence structure is awkward and missing the subject 'the weather' before 'is very good.' Also, 'in the spring is' is incorrect without a subject. Correcting the sentence to include the subject and proper word order resolves the singular/plural and sentence structure issues.

× Absolutely cold weather because I can, uh, go for shopping and buy special and unique things, uh, which are really good for spring and winter.

✓ Absolutely cold weather because I can go shopping and buy special and unique things, which are really good for spring and winter.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping.' This is a common error involving verb usage and pluralization. Removing 'for' corrects the verb phrase.

× And I think, uh, in uh, cold weather I'm uh, more stylish and my outdoor is really good.

✓ And I think, in cold weather, I'm more stylish and my outfit is really good.

The word 'outdoor' is an adjective and cannot be used as a noun here. The intended word is likely 'outfit,' which is singular and fits the context. This corrects the singular/plural and word choice issue.

× I like wet butter more because, uh, the wet weather are able to, uh, able in actually, umm, coastal, uh, regions.

✓ I like wet weather more because wet weather is common in coastal regions.

'Wet butter' is a mispronunciation or error for 'wet weather.' Also, 'the wet weather are able to' is incorrect; 'weather' is singular and should be paired with 'is.' The sentence is corrected for singular/plural agreement and clarity.

× And I like them because, uh, my hairstyle is good in that better and I like the.

✓ And I like it because my hairstyle looks good in that weather, and I like it.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect when referring to 'wet weather,' which is singular and should be 'it.' Also, 'that better' should be 'that weather.' This corrects pronoun and singular/plural issues.

× Naturally, I don't use the apps or weather forecasts too much because I just, uh, like to walking, uh, around in addition, and the weather forecast, uh, actually it's not, uh, it's not reliable and I prefer to enjoy the weather It, uh, even it was, it is sunny or.

✓ Naturally, I don't use apps or weather forecasts too much because I just like to walk around. In addition, the weather forecast is actually not reliable, and I prefer to enjoy the weather, whether it is sunny or not.

The phrase 'like to walking' is incorrect; the correct form is 'like to walk.' Also, 'in addition' should start a new sentence or be connected properly. The sentence was fragmented and had preposition misuse. Correcting verb form and sentence structure improves clarity.

× It was such an interesting question. Uh, actually the climate change, our effect in, uh, people behavior and air pollution, uh, for example, in winter, uh, those people who live in Mediterranean climate or suffer from the hot feather. And it's was, uh, a bit.

✓ That was such an interesting question. Actually, climate change affects people's behavior and air pollution. For example, in winter, people who live in Mediterranean climates suffer from the hot weather. And it was a bit difficult.

The sentence had incorrect past tense usage and awkward phrasing. 'Our effect in' is incorrect; it should be 'affects.' 'It's was' is a tense error. Also, 'hot feather' is a mispronunciation of 'hot weather.' Correcting verb tense and word choice clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I really indulge, indulge in uh, just walking and hanging out in polar climates, uh, which gives me a, a chance to gain a lot of experience and I think if I go there, uh, I can actually.

✓ Yes, I really indulge in just walking and hanging out in polar climates, which gives me a chance to gain a lot of experience, and I think if I go there, I can actually learn a lot.

The repetition of 'indulge' is unnecessary. The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'learn a lot' completes the thought. The preposition 'in' is correctly used with 'indulge in.' Improving sentence completion and removing redundancy enhances clarity.