Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınızda bazı kelimeler anlamsal olarak uygun değil ve cümle yapısı karışık. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için, doğrudan soruya yanıt verip, gereksiz kelimeleri çıkarmalı ve cümleleri daha açık ve tutarlı yapmalısınız.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is usually chilly and rainy during the colder months. However, in summer, it becomes very hot and sunny, often without any wind.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda düşüncelerinizi açıkça ifade etmişsiniz ancak cümleleriniz tamamlanmamış ve bazı ifadeler karışık. Daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlantılar kurarak, cümlelerinizi tamamlamaya dikkat edin.

Exemplo: Honestly, I don't like very cold or very hot weather. I prefer when it's warm, not too chilly or too hot, so I can wear comfortable clothes without needing a jacket.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda kişisel nedenlerinizi belirtmişsiniz, bu iyi. Ancak bazı ifadeler dilbilgisi açısından hatalı ve cümleler biraz dağınık. Daha düzgün cümle yapıları ve bağlaçlar kullanarak anlatımınızı geliştirebilirsiniz.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because I have curly hair, and when it's humid, my hair becomes very poofy. Therefore, I like dry conditions better.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda düşüncelerinizi ifade etmişsiniz ancak cümleleriniz dağınık ve bazı ifadeler anlamsal olarak net değil. Daha açık, mantıklı ve tamamlanmış cümleler kurmaya özen gösterin.

Exemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast because I find it boring. I mostly look outside to see the weather, and I check my phone about once a week. If it's rainy, I prefer to stay indoors.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda önemli noktaları belirtmişsiniz ancak cümleleriniz eksik ve bazı kelimeler yanlış kullanılmış. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümleler kurarak, detayları daha spesifik şekilde ifade edin.

Exemplo: Climate change has caused deserts to become drier, leading to water shortages. As a result, many animals are dying because their habitats are affected.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda isteklerinizi belirtmişsiniz ancak cümlelerinizde tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha akıcı ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanarak, düşüncelerinizi net ifade edin.

Exemplo: I would love to visit places with different climates. Since it never snows where I live, I want to visit somewhere snowy to play in the snow. Also, in summer, I would like to go to a hot, beachy place.

× Well, that's a great question. Umm, inventors.

✓ Well, that's a great question. Umm, I live in Inventors.

The sentence 'Umm, inventors.' is incomplete and unclear. It seems the student intended to mention the place they live, but the sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it a sentence structure error. The correction adds a subject and verb to clarify the meaning.

× but in summers it's too hot that you sweat way too much

✓ but in summer it's so hot that you sweat way too much

The phrase 'in summers' is incorrect; 'in summer' is the correct form when referring to the season in general. Also, 'too hot that' is incorrect; 'so hot that' is the proper construction to indicate cause and effect.

× I think the when the weather is perfect, when it's warm, not too chilly, not too hot, just in between that you can just wear anything you want. Not do.

✓ I think when the weather is perfect, when it's warm, not too chilly, not too hot, just in between, you can wear anything you want. You don't need to.

The original sentence has an unnecessary 'the' before 'when' and the phrase 'Not do.' is incomplete and unclear. The correction removes the extra 'the' and clarifies the sentence by completing the thought.

× You don't need to grab a jacket, you don't need to be fully clothed, you just.

✓ You don't need to grab a jacket, you don't need to be fully clothed, you just wear light clothes.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'you just.' which is incomplete. Adding 'wear light clothes' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Oh that's a really good question to ask to me, 'cause I love dry weather,

✓ Oh that's a really good question to ask me, 'cause I love dry weather,

The phrase 'to ask to me' is incorrect. The correct form is 'to ask me' without the second 'to'.

× I do hate wet weather 'cause my hair is curly and wonder the humidity is too much.

✓ I do hate wet weather 'cause my hair is curly and when the humidity is too much.

The word 'wonder' is incorrect here; it should be 'when' to indicate the condition under which the hair gets poofy.

× Not really, I just find it boring and I just look outside and see how it's going and you know, check the weather for my phone or whatever.

✓ Not really, I just find it boring and I just look outside and see how it's going and you know, check the weather on my phone or whatever.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect when referring to checking something on a device. The correct preposition is 'on'.

× So maybe once a week I do it and if it's rainy on any day I just go. Do not go out.

✓ So maybe once a week I do it and if it's rainy on any day I just don't go out.

The sentence 'I just go. Do not go out.' is fragmented and unclear. Combining them into 'I just don't go out.' corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× Well, there is a lot to talk about this topic 'cause the desert said deserts are getting drier

✓ Well, there is a lot to talk about this topic 'cause the deserts are getting drier

The phrase 'the desert said deserts' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'the deserts' to refer to deserts in general. The word 'said' is likely a mispronunciation or error and should be removed.

× I would love to do that cause in where I live winters we do we do not even see a single bit of snow.

✓ I would love to do that because where I live in winter, we do not even see a single bit of snow.

The phrase 'cause in where I live winters' is incorrect. It should be 'because where I live in winter' to correctly express the time and place. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate here.

× So I would like to go somewhere where snows so I could just play and see the snow and in summer I wanna go somewhere really Beachy and hot.

✓ So I would like to go somewhere where it snows so I could just play and see the snow and in summer I want to go somewhere really beachy and hot.

The phrase 'somewhere where snows' is missing the subject 'it' before 'snows'. Also, 'wanna' is informal; 'want to' is more appropriate. 'Beachy' should not be capitalized.