Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có phần lặp lại, đồng thời câu cuối bị bỏ dở. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời trong 3-5 câu.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is generally warm, especially in summer when temperatures can get quite high. It often rains during the spring, which helps the plants grow. Overall, the climate is quite pleasant throughout the year.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời, tránh câu bị bỏ dở. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng ý với ví dụ cụ thể.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I feel more comfortable and relaxed. Besides, I can participate in outdoor activities such as swimming or sailing with my family during the summer.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ nối phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lỗi sai về tính từ so sánh và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because I find it relaxing to watch the rain. Moreover, the air tends to be cleaner and fresher after rainfall, which makes me feel better.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu sự tự nhiên. Bạn nên hoàn thành câu trả lời, sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về thói quen của mình.

Exemplo: I usually check the weather forecast on television every morning. If I'm busy, I check it on my phone during the day to stay updated on temperature changes and possible rain.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý và cung cấp các ví dụ cụ thể về tác động của biến đổi khí hậu.

Exemplo: In recent years, climate change has had negative effects on both people and the environment. It causes air and water pollution, which harms people's health and increases the rate of diseases.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'wedding' thay vì 'wearing'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ nối hợp lý và hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: I would like to visit Korea because it has cold weather. Therefore, I can go skiing with my friends. Moreover, I enjoy wearing warm clothes during winter.

× It has high temperature and usually rains in spring.

✓ It has high temperatures and usually rains in spring.

The noun 'temperature' should be plural 'temperatures' because it refers to varying degrees over time, not a single temperature. In English, when talking about general conditions like weather, plural form is often used.

× The weather.

✓ The weather is variable.

The sentence 'The weather.' is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence fragment. A complete sentence requires at least a subject and a verb.

× Beside I can take part in outdoor activity.

✓ Besides, I can take part in outdoor activities.

The correct word is 'Besides' (meaning 'in addition'), not 'Beside' (meaning 'next to'). Also, 'activity' should be plural 'activities' to match the general meaning.

× For example, I can go swimming or go sailing with my family in the.

✓ For example, I can go swimming or sailing with my family.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Also, 'go sailing' is correct without 'go' repeated. The phrase 'in the' is incomplete and should be removed or completed.

× Beside the air is more cleaner and fresher.

✓ Besides, the air is cleaner and fresher.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' to mean 'in addition'. Also, 'more cleaner' is incorrect because 'cleaner' is already comparative; 'more' is unnecessary.

× I'm used to checking the weather forecast on the television in the morning.

✓ I'm used to checking the weather forecast on television in the morning.

The article 'the' is not used before 'television' when referring to the medium generally.

× I usually check the temperature change or.

✓ I usually check the temperature changes or other weather updates.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. It needs completion to be grammatically correct.

× In recent years, climate change affects badly on both people and the environment.

✓ In recent years, climate change has affected both people and the environment badly.

The present perfect tense 'has affected' is appropriate for actions continuing up to the present. Also, 'affects badly on' is incorrect; 'affects badly' or 'has had a bad effect on' is correct.

× It goes polluted air and water beside it harm their people health.

✓ It causes polluted air and water, and it harms people's health.

'Goes polluted air and water' is incorrect; 'causes polluted air and water' is correct. 'Beside' should be 'and'. 'Their people health' should be 'people's health'.

× It increase the rate of disease.

✓ It increases the rate of disease.

The verb should agree with the singular subject 'It', so 'increase' should be 'increases'.

× Therefore I can go skiing with my friend.

✓ Therefore, I can go skiing with my friends.

If referring to multiple friends, 'friends' is plural. If only one friend, 'friend' is correct. Context suggests plural is more natural.

× Moreover, I prefer wedding warm clothes.

✓ Moreover, I prefer wearing warm clothes.

'Wedding' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'wearing' to indicate the action of putting on clothes.