Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid sentence fragments. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific details about how the weather change affects you.

Exemplo: Most of the year, the weather where I live is sunny and warm, which I really enjoy because it allows me to spend more time outdoors. However, between April and June, it tends to rain a lot, which makes outdoor activities difficult during that period.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and contains a spelling mistake ('hope' instead of 'hot'). Make sure to finish your sentences and check for errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific reasons or examples.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable and refreshing than hot weather. For example, when it is hot, the air is often humid and sticky, which makes outdoor activities uncomfortable and tiring. Additionally, cold weather allows me to enjoy outdoor sports like skiing.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Make sure to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and provide specific supporting details using linking words to explain your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because it feels cooler and cleaner. In contrast, wet weather often makes me feel uncomfortable and less energetic.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally good but contains some awkward phrasing and minor grammatical errors. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I usually check the weather forecast every day because it helps me plan my day effectively. Since the weather in Shenzhen is unpredictable, knowing whether it will rain or be sunny is very important.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but contains a small grammatical error ('changed to unpredictably'). Use correct adverbs and linking words to improve clarity and coherence.

Exemplo: In recent years, the weather has become increasingly hotter, leading to more frequent heat waves. Additionally, the seasons have become unpredictable, which makes it difficult for farmers to plant their crops on time.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but contains minor grammatical errors ('the building snowman', 'landscapes is'). Use correct noun phrases and plural forms, and try to link your ideas more smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with cold weather because I really enjoy winter sports like ice skating and building snowmen. The snowy landscapes are incredibly beautiful, and these winter activities are experiences I really want to have.

× Most of the year the weather where I live is sunny and warm and really enjoy it because it allows me to spend more time outdoors.

✓ Most of the year, the weather where I live is sunny and warm, and I really enjoy it because it allows me to spend more time outdoors.

The original sentence lacks a subject for the verb 'enjoy'. Adding 'I' clarifies who enjoys the weather, correcting the sentence structure.

× However, during every April and June it tends to rain a lot. This change makes.

✓ However, during April and June, it tends to rain a lot. This change affects the weather significantly.

The phrase 'during every April and June' is awkward; 'during April and June' is more natural. Also, 'This change makes.' is an incomplete sentence and needs completion to convey meaning.

× I prefer the cold weather because it feels more comfortable and refreshing than hope weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable and refreshing than hot weather.

The word 'hope' is a typo and should be 'hot' to correctly compare weather types.

× Additionally, cold weather allows me to.

✓ Additionally, cold weather allows me to enjoy outdoor activities more comfortably.

The sentence is incomplete and needs a completion to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Fear becomes cooler and cleaner. It makes me feel relaxed and rejuvenated in contrast.

✓ The air becomes cooler and cleaner. It makes me feel relaxed and rejuvenated in contrast.

'Fear' is a typo and should be 'air'. Also, the sentence 'in contrast' is vague and needs clarification or removal for clarity.

× In Shenzhen, the weather is unpredictable, so that knowing whether it will rain or be sunny, it will it's very important.

✓ In Shenzhen, the weather is unpredictable, so knowing whether it will rain or be sunny is very important.

The phrase 'so that knowing' is incorrect; it should be 'so knowing'. Also, 'it will it's' is redundant and incorrect.

× In recent years, the weather has become increasingly hotter, which has caused more frequent heat waves.

✓ In recent years, the weather has become increasingly hot, which has caused more frequent heat waves.

The adverb 'increasingly' should modify the adjective 'hot' directly; 'hotter' is comparative and not appropriate with 'increasingly'.

× Additionally, the seasons have changed to unpredictably, which makes it difficult for farmers to plant their crops.

✓ Additionally, the seasons have changed unpredictably, which makes it difficult for farmers to plant their crops.

The adverb 'unpredictably' should not be preceded by 'to' in this context.

× Yes, I would love to visit cities with cold weather because I really enjoy winter sports like ice skating and the building snowman.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit cities with cold weather because I really enjoy winter sports like ice skating and building snowmen.

'The building snowman' is incorrect; it should be 'building snowmen' to correctly pluralise and remove the unnecessary article.

× The snowy landscapes is incredibly beautiful and these winter activities are something I really get to experience.

✓ The snowy landscapes are incredibly beautiful, and these winter activities are something I really get to experience.

'Landscapes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.